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Drive for love
I once knew a girl
She had a twinkle in her eye
She spent all her mind
on this one special guy
She'd been hurt
She'd been lied to
She needed time
Time to think it through
This guy had been rejected
He needed a sign
He'd flash a quick smile
To see if their eyes might align
One day, on a whim
This guy did decide
To grab a dozen roses
And a bottle of wine
He dashed to his car
Waiting no more
He thought to himself
"I'll just knock on her door"
The wind in his hair
A smile on his face
On his moonlit ride
Through the night he raced
Never did he expect
Under the starry night sky
Before he arrived
A drunk driver would take his life
She had a twinkle in her eye
She spent all her mind
on this one special guy
She'd been hurt
She'd been lied to
She needed time
Time to think it through
This guy had been rejected
He needed a sign
He'd flash a quick smile
To see if their eyes might align
One day, on a whim
This guy did decide
To grab a dozen roses
And a bottle of wine
He dashed to his car
Waiting no more
He thought to himself
"I'll just knock on her door"
The wind in his hair
A smile on his face
On his moonlit ride
Through the night he raced
Never did he expect
Under the starry night sky
Before he arrived
A drunk driver would take his life
Published 20th May 2017
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20th May 2017 9:01am
Holly shit...
That ended abruptly! Perfectly placed!
You knock it home with this
Nicely done here!
Al
That ended abruptly! Perfectly placed!
You knock it home with this
Nicely done here!
Al
20th May 2017 11:54am
20th May 2017 2:41pm
21st May 2017 6:24am
Thanks, D. Might do some more soon. I need some time off work. Shit's been crazy lately.
Anonymous
20th May 2017 6:00pm
Oh my...this threw me for a loop! Well written my friend despite the tragic end! I hope this holds no truth.
Xoxo Taryn
Xoxo Taryn
21st May 2017 6:23am
21st May 2017 2:35pm
21st May 2017 10:20pm
I know right! That's what dating is like as an adult. Ugh. People are so terrified, that they never make a move. It's sad. Humans are pathetic. I'm glad that we're just visitors on this planet, Lana. Xoxo
9th Jun 2017 5:37pm
Wow what an impact ending! It is true though we often let our thoughts hold us back rather than going after what we want until it's too late 😢
Great write CW
💜
Great write CW
💜
14th Jun 2017 2:42am
14th Jul 2017 1:22am
Wow, I was not expecting that ending. It really took me by surprise. Great poem, I love it!
14th Jul 2017 2:12am
Anonymous
30th Dec 2024 12:50pm
Oh bloody hell, that ending.
