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Barefoot
there's something about
walking bare feet
on red earth
be it
after the rain has fallen
or just dry red dust
no Adidas or New Balance
can match
the connection
i still fondly remember
the childhood runs
bare feet
be it a sprint with my brothers
or running up to bowl
a fast delivery
or between the wickets
scratches, split skin
tiny wounds
they all felt painful then
but not without some sweet
pleasures
thoughts of childhood
always induce nostalgia
and a sense of loss
but all is not lost
yet
so before the sun sets
on mobility
these feet
will have their
life back
once more
treading
red earth!
© KDAmB 2017. All rights reserved.
walking bare feet
on red earth
be it
after the rain has fallen
or just dry red dust
no Adidas or New Balance
can match
the connection
i still fondly remember
the childhood runs
bare feet
be it a sprint with my brothers
or running up to bowl
a fast delivery
or between the wickets
scratches, split skin
tiny wounds
they all felt painful then
but not without some sweet
pleasures
thoughts of childhood
always induce nostalgia
and a sense of loss
but all is not lost
yet
so before the sun sets
on mobility
these feet
will have their
life back
once more
treading
red earth!
© KDAmB 2017. All rights reserved.
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Re. Barefoot
22nd Apr 2017 7:00pm
A nice memory with a good sense of feel - easy to visualise.
You'd enjoy the annual treading of the grapes here too ...
You'd enjoy the annual treading of the grapes here too ...
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Re: Re. Barefoot
Welcome Josh!
thank you for the beautiful words. Sure I will, perhaps more so due to the joyful act of doing it together with the community! I welcome your visit and kind appreciation my friend!
thank you for the beautiful words. Sure I will, perhaps more so due to the joyful act of doing it together with the community! I welcome your visit and kind appreciation my friend!
Re. Barefoot
22nd Apr 2017 8:20pm
Re: Re. Barefoot
23rd Apr 2017 2:30pm
Welcome dear friend Brenda!
:-)
Glad you enjoyed the read my friend. I understand the look of nostalgia is not possible without a rose tinted glass, yet i cannot think of the past-especially the childhood as anything but beautiful(did have my share of pains but somehow those scars are wiped clean). i thank You for your kindness and appreciation immensely dear Brenda!
Cheers!
KDAmB
:-)
Glad you enjoyed the read my friend. I understand the look of nostalgia is not possible without a rose tinted glass, yet i cannot think of the past-especially the childhood as anything but beautiful(did have my share of pains but somehow those scars are wiped clean). i thank You for your kindness and appreciation immensely dear Brenda!
Cheers!
KDAmB
Re. Barefoot
22nd Apr 2017 11:18pm
Sounds like fond memories, KD, children alive and free. Great share my friend!
~anonshadow😏
~anonshadow😏
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Re: Re. Barefoot
Fond indeed my dear brother! And oh yeah! alive and free- of the worries and trials of adult life. I welcome your visit sincerely my bro and also your affectionate appreciation as always! Thank You So much!
regards
KDAmB
regards
KDAmB
Re. Barefoot
23rd Apr 2017 4:06am
You brought back some sweet memories :-)
Walking barefoot is amazing... feeling the grass, the sand, ahh... wish it was already summer!
Walking barefoot is amazing... feeling the grass, the sand, ahh... wish it was already summer!
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Re: Re. Barefoot
23rd Apr 2017 2:34pm
Welcome dear Friend Duende! :-)
Glad my scribble could evoke some memories. It means it was worth sharing. No doubt- it is indeed amazing, perhaps we actually connect to the nature when bare feet. You're not too far from summer so worry not!! I welcome your visit and kind appreciation my friend sincerely!!
regards
KDAmB
Glad my scribble could evoke some memories. It means it was worth sharing. No doubt- it is indeed amazing, perhaps we actually connect to the nature when bare feet. You're not too far from summer so worry not!! I welcome your visit and kind appreciation my friend sincerely!!
regards
KDAmB
Re. Barefoot
24th Apr 2017 00:50am
Ther is NOTHING like being barefoot! Red dirt, grass, sand, earth, water, whatever!
Loved it, Birdman!
Loved it, Birdman!
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Re: Re. Barefoot
29th Apr 2017 1:48am
Indeed Sage One! nothing beats it!
I welcome your presence and am glad the scribble spoke. I thank you for your visit and appreciated dear friend!
Kind regards
KDAmB
I welcome your presence and am glad the scribble spoke. I thank you for your visit and appreciated dear friend!
Kind regards
KDAmB
Re. Barefoot
24th Apr 2017 1:22am
it's a strange poem to read for a man with no legs, but I so get it - oh to walk barefoot in the red earth :-)
excellent ink :-)
excellent ink :-)
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Re: Re. Barefoot
29th Apr 2017 1:52am
Indeed Sage One! nothing beats it!
I welcome your presence and am glad the scribble spoke. I thank you for your visit and appreciated dear friend!
Kind regards
KDAmB
I welcome your presence and am glad the scribble spoke. I thank you for your visit and appreciated dear friend!
Kind regards
KDAmB
Re. Barefoot
24th Apr 2017 4:27pm
barefoot and childhood are our fast link to being carefree and genuine and I second u on the desire to relive that every moment possible. love this. thanks for sharing
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Welcome Dear Friend Canullia!
You hit the nail on the head there, yes both our direct connection to being carefree. Glad indeed I am that you liked the scribble. I thank You for both your presence here and the kind appreciation.
kind regards
KDAmB
You hit the nail on the head there, yes both our direct connection to being carefree. Glad indeed I am that you liked the scribble. I thank You for both your presence here and the kind appreciation.
kind regards
KDAmB
Re. Barefoot
24th Jun 2017 9:13am
What a great ode to one of the greatest pleasures in life!! I also really enjoy the sensation of walking barefoot on the concrete on a summer evening when the air is cooling down but the footpath is still warm.
I really enjoyed your poem!
I really enjoyed your poem!
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Re: Re. Barefoot
24th Jun 2017 12:20pm
Welcome and Thank You Sarah. Can relate the beautiful feeling of cool breeze on body and warm concrete floor under the foot in summer. Ever so glad you enjoyed the poem. Thank you so much for the visit and kind compliment. kind regards KDAmB