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ignorance is a bliss
I peed under the tree
called poetry
not knowing
it was sacred
when she smiled at me
was blissfully
unaware
it was hatred
© KDAmB 2017. All rights reserved.
Author's Note: Title should suffice
Published 20th Apr 2017
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20th Apr 2017 3:18pm
21st Apr 2017 10:33am
20th Apr 2017 3:35pm
21st Apr 2017 10:36am
Welcome dear Friend!
well, sometimes ignorance is indeed a bliss and just don't ask about the occasions it is not. Life is awesome , that's all I'd say!
Appreciate immensely your kind feedback and visiting with me!!
Cheers!
KDAmB
well, sometimes ignorance is indeed a bliss and just don't ask about the occasions it is not. Life is awesome , that's all I'd say!
Appreciate immensely your kind feedback and visiting with me!!
Cheers!
KDAmB
20th Apr 2017 6:52pm
Clever stuff - sharp imagery - a drama unfolding (and in so few words too). Great, thanks.
21st Apr 2017 10:38am
I appreciate your keen eye and insight and generous appreciation of the scribble mate! Glad indeed I am to see it convey something.
Once again my gratitude to you on the kind feedback and the visit!
Cheers!
KDAmB
20th Apr 2017 7:19pm
21st Apr 2017 10:45am
LMAO! ha ha ha!! Tim! you sent me into fit of giggles there! I can imagine the dizziness lasting for days after that! Appreciate your visit and feedback matey! cheers KDAmB
20th Apr 2017 8:58pm
Congratulations! This poem has been nominated for Deep Underground Poetry's Featured Poem of the Month Competition. You may view the nomination at the link below, and will be notified if selected.
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/9567/
Best of Luck and thank you for being a member of the Deep Side! Poet
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/9567/
Best of Luck and thank you for being a member of the Deep Side! Poet
21st Apr 2017 10:46am
Welcome Dear Early Worm!
Honestly- am humbled with the nomination. I nearly did not post it.
Thanks All peers who liked the scribble and those who read it.
Glad to be a member of the Deep Side!
KDAmB
Honestly- am humbled with the nomination. I nearly did not post it.
Thanks All peers who liked the scribble and those who read it.
Glad to be a member of the Deep Side!
KDAmB
21st Apr 2017 1:42am
Welcome Dear Dave!!
strong punch- says a guy who never fails to land akiller punch in his poems! That is a compliment for me indeed! Thanks David for your unwavering support since my beginning here! Always means a lot!
warm regards
KDAmB
strong punch- says a guy who never fails to land akiller punch in his poems! That is a compliment for me indeed! Thanks David for your unwavering support since my beginning here! Always means a lot!
warm regards
KDAmB
21st Apr 2017 4:56pm
It is easy to support a talent when that talent is as powerful as yours :-)
21st Apr 2017 5:34pm
Now if that is not the killer blow, then I surely would've been dead already! Humbled I am indeed Mate!!
21st Apr 2017 10:54am
Damn, that was amazing brother! So much in such a short poem, I admire you, this piece displays why, brilliant, simply brilliant! To the RL!
~anonshadow😏
~anonshadow😏
21st Apr 2017 10:58am
glad we're oceans apart- would've embraced you a brotherly hug for the kind affection and generous appreciation bro Anon!! A poet of your calibre appreciating such a scribble is indeed a matter of honor for me!
I thank you sincerely Mate!!
warm regards
KDAmB
I thank you sincerely Mate!!
warm regards
KDAmB
22nd Apr 2017 5:11am
Nicely written. I too have pissed under and on her wondering if she will forgive and enjoy my sents left for her. Nice. Keep the write!
22nd Apr 2017 11:38am
Welcome UncleSlam!! glad you liked it! lol! so marked her as your tereritory aye?! glad to see you here bro, much appreciated your kind appreciation.
