Carnal Desires

`they're feral & wild
I'm starved for raw meat`

this made me blush ...
boxer VS. lover
in the Ring of Lust ...
genius, my Queen!

thank you my Dark Queen it makes me blush to be so brazen ;) love you my Queen.. xo Brenda

Sheeeesh! This is the third straight I've read in this vein! Maybe I need to eschew that cocktail party tonight! LOL!

*Fans*

thank you lovely lady for bathing in our poetic pool of lust today ;) adore your thoughts.. happy to have had this affect on you :) love Brenda

Lol @ poetic pool of lust! I'll keep the drinks to a minimum tonight for sure!  <3

lmao & giggling wildly :)

Here I go fashionably late an hour!

LOL! 🍸

Yeaaaaa! She wants a hard, wild ride, and you can leave yer fuckin' boots on, with spurs, she has a pair her own.

I'd pay good money to watch that action. Fuck away, fuck away, fuck away to oblivion.

thank you Jerry I absolutely love your comment :)  love Brenda

Heh.Heh

Oh hot damn!

"makes me wonder
if you go at it like this in bed
pound a lass
into the next dimension
with your passion
& sexual rage" > nothing can beat sexual rage!

Yep... ejoyed... immensely...

Love, Duende

thank you beautiful Duende.. love Crim

it's sex that feeds the beast of desire, Crim,
then desire returns for more;
it goes like that...

thank you John it is indeed.. love Crim

whew...i'm a little dizzy from that one...i wouldn't know where to start identifying favorite lines here...it such a great impactful flow...i feel like he may be in for the bout of his life.

thank you Poetrician for feeling the heat of this write.. love Crim

Holy hells, but I feel this one.  I do believe you read my mind here.  That gravel and ruggedness will light me every time.  I really loved the imagery you brought to the mat here.  BIG like!

thank you beautiful one your comment put a big smile on my face :) love Crim

perfectly titled, carnal desires indeed I think you are probably the best writer of this genre I have read. this one is just perfect, just the right amount of detail to allow the imagination to flow - I loved this :-)

you da bestest :-)

thank you dearest David you are the best :) love you.. xo Brenda

The beast gives you his best, and "Desires" is a rough and thrilling ride until the last stanza.

primal & greedy
in my passion
my body feeds off its self
as I cream out my frustration

I hate to see a lady disappointed.  Sublime work in any case dear Crim.  This one satisfies.

thank you dearest Sir Crow my frustration stems from knowing he is out of reach though I crave him.. love Crim

Brenda.. you're the best.. i love reading you.. love always..








Dave

thank you Dave love you my friend :) xo Brenda

I had to show you my love.  Many of the comments echo my sentiments.

Hugs to you beautiful.

thank you dearest Kym for the love and hugs.. hugs you back lovely soul.. xo Brenda

Ohhhhh My Beautiful Brenda....this got the fires of my own nether regions burning! Primal and feral have a way of overtaking to the point where there is no stopping it and what gets each of us going...a fabulous mystery! You have me all sorts of squishy before bed with this one because of the thoughts conjured in my head! LOVE!!!

I love you!

Love Taryn xoxo

thank you beautiful one so happy this made you feel this way.. primal indeed lol ;) I love you lady! xo Brenda