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Dreamlight Friendship
His friendship, like a ribbon of melody
heard only in quiet nights
subtle like roses rustling
as their blooms inhale the wind
it is he that sits under the moon
revels on the wind upon his face
grateful for a life though not perfect
extracting wonder in his every day
he shares no pompous words
nor does he crave for accolades
just a right to exhale inhale
on his own little patch of sun
a caring hello...telepathic touch
of a kindred spirit
lift his aloneness a little
the smile on his lips linger longer
he has the quiet fire of a poet
an element that symbolises strength
and he sends flowers
unpretentious friendship.
*this poem was entered in a competition here. thank you for reading*
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Written by
Grace
(IDryad)
Published 2nd Mar 2017
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Re. Dreamlight Friendship
2nd Mar 2017 1:26am
That is a beautiful tribute Grace. I am moved. I hope you do well in the competition. *hugs*
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Re: Re. Dreamlight Friendship
2nd Mar 2017 1:36am
Hi Daniel. Thank you for dropping by and reading. I am glad you liked it.:) I simply love writing. If I win, it will be a bonus.
Re. Dreamlight Friendship
2nd Mar 2017 2:01am
This is a gorgeous piece of poetry, Grace. I thank you for blessing us with your talents.
~anonshadow😏
~anonshadow😏
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2nd Mar 2017 5:39am
Re. Dreamlight Friendship
2nd Mar 2017 3:38am
Beautiful tribute, Grace! I knew it was for Daniel immediately. You described him perfectly.
Best of in the comp.
Best of in the comp.
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Re: Re. Dreamlight Friendship
2nd Mar 2017 5:40am
:) Ahavati, thank you so much for reading me. I described him well? Ohhh I am glad.
Re. Dreamlight Friendship
2nd Mar 2017 5:50am
Gorgeous sentiment and Written with the adept ink You own-Flowing!!!
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2nd Mar 2017 5:53am
Re. Dreamlight Friendship
2nd Mar 2017 9:32am
Sounds like someone we should all strive to emulate...
Nice write Grace!
JJ
Nice write Grace!
JJ
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2nd Mar 2017 9:37am
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2nd Mar 2017 6:51pm
Re: Re. Dreamlight Friendship
2nd Mar 2017 9:06pm
and your kindness in reading and commenting is very much appreciated:) thank you SweetOblivion for reading me.
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2nd Mar 2017 9:47pm
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2nd Mar 2017 10:25pm
Re. Dreamlight Friendship
2nd Mar 2017 10:37pm
Congratulations! This poem has been nominated for Deep Underground Poetry's Featured Poem of the Month Competition. You may view the nomination at the link below, and will be notified if selected.
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/9494/
Best of Luck and thank you for being a member of the Deep Side!
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/9494/
Best of Luck and thank you for being a member of the Deep Side!
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Re: Re. Dreamlight Friendship
2nd Mar 2017 11:00pm
Bringing the Beauty of a Man Life
25th Mar 2017 2:08am
I loved how at times the field, the flow, and the man became one succinct beautiful entity.
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Re: Bringing the Beauty of a Man Life
25th Mar 2017 8:32am