Because

Jade, this is absolutely beautiful. A wonderfully written piece from start to finish. I can feel the emotion pouring out of you. Thanks for sharing and writing this piece. I really enjoyed it.

Thank you greatly, dear S...
the emotion, yes, very much so.

Positively gorgeous poem, Jadey. Love it from start to finish!




~anonshadow😏

Thank you, dear Anon, for gifting your thoughts about mine to me.

beautiful love song..

Why thank you so much for sharing that with me.

Melia, dear Celestial sister - from your words I feel we share a constellation as one.  Thank you for such expression, and a place of honor in your Reading List.  
   
ever  
tiger jade xo

Shadows of reeds o'er me
when I'm gone, who's roots would
embrace me tenderly

as he does now, not worthy this pain
indulging the fragrance that
conceals my absence

despite what cannot be spoken
and the broken whorls of my fingertips.

To reach but not touch,
while unknowingly,
the saddest moments I write

Because I love.

My heart in shreads...

RL

*quietly leans into, paw on paw*🐾

This would be a beautiful ballad Jade, quite a contender for the "Songwriter" comp.  This has tenderness and delicacy even in the saddest moments.  I love this just "Because."

Thank you so much, my crowfly friend, for such kindness & generous support of this piece.

Beautiful, Jade. Simply.

Thank you, dear Ahavati, so much.

Have you ever cast your eyes across the poem "Tonight, I can write the saddest lines" by Pablo Neruda? I have a feeling you would enjoy this particular work if this poem is anything to go by.

Thank you for the read.

Thank you, Missy!  I'll "search" it today for a read.  And it's sweet to know you stopped by to visit. xo

Lovely. well written. I am impressed. it has a good rhythm to it & tells a touching story.

Thank you, that's most kind.