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(Black)Star of David
First anniversary of return
Lazarus risen from death
Blackstar a window'd cloud
The Wolf Moon hexagram'd
O! Thou external of man
Evolved from matrix'd dust
O! Thou internal of Spirit
Play'd David's secret chord
Experienced we its fall to earth
Beheld its sanctuary'd Truth
~
Lazarus risen from death
Blackstar a window'd cloud
The Wolf Moon hexagram'd
O! Thou external of man
Evolved from matrix'd dust
O! Thou internal of Spirit
Play'd David's secret chord
Experienced we its fall to earth
Beheld its sanctuary'd Truth
~
Published 12th Jan 2017
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12th Jan 2017 12:09pm
This entry gave me chills
Our world took a wrong turn into a black hole when Bowie left the platform.
I wanted to write about him but it's too personal for me, glad you did.
This is where our spiritual worlds meet A
Will have to listen to LOW soon
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Our world took a wrong turn into a black hole when Bowie left the platform.
I wanted to write about him but it's too personal for me, glad you did.
This is where our spiritual worlds meet A
Will have to listen to LOW soon
Like
12th Jan 2017 12:51pm
Thanks, Poet. It has been a year, and who knows what's ahead. Hard to believe he would've been 70.
This was a quick reception during a moment with the moon. I don't feel it's finished. But, then again, none ever are.
This was a quick reception during a moment with the moon. I don't feel it's finished. But, then again, none ever are.
12th Jan 2017 1:05pm
Anonymous
12th Jan 2017 1:20pm
i always leave your writes
with a lingering sense of awe,
again speechless by your gentle touch
on such poignant subject matter
xo
with a lingering sense of awe,
again speechless by your gentle touch
on such poignant subject matter
xo
12th Jan 2017 2:36pm
What a mighty tribute to the man. Heartfelt and touched my own heart . . .
Anonymous
12th Jan 2017 2:41pm
Beautiful expression, and imagery 💓
12th Jan 2017 7:39pm
Felt the earth get lighter!!!
Flowing Write AV!!!
Cryptic in the Beautiful manner-Befitting
Flowing Write AV!!!
Cryptic in the Beautiful manner-Befitting
14th Jan 2017 00:33am
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14th Jan 2017 00:39am
Ahavati, I read this a couple of days ago and couldn't find the right words to express just how spiritually moving and mesmerizing this ink is.
....and I still haven't found the right words. xo
....and I still haven't found the right words. xo
14th Jan 2017 3:29pm
14th Jan 2017 3:31pm
17th Jan 2017 5:20pm
Appropriately, this poem feels like semi-cryptic song lyrics from one of Bowie's albums. The archaic use of contractions ("sanctuary'd") and mythological imagery work well here, to create an almost psalm-like effect. Thank you for the read.
17th Jan 2017 6:52pm
[...] this poem feels like semi-cryptic song lyrics from one of Bowie's albums. The archaic use of contractions ("sanctuary'd") and mythological imagery work well here, to create an almost psalm-like effect.
Thank you greatly for that.
Thank you greatly for that.
