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Satin Scripture
Do you recall the moment when your gaze
was glued to my hips and the faint hints of
Vera Wang trailed my silhouette…
teasing your desires as I walked by?
You saw me as Zion…
and confessed that I was the majestic residue
that lingered on your lips and the royalty that
singed your skin in hebrew script.
You made me feel unbelievable!
Do you recall when my heated essence
was an element of your altar’s prayer?
When the wet-lust that settled between my breasts
was gathered in your carnal image and used to
satiate the appetite of biblical passion?
Your analytical eyes always catalogued the
freedom of my curves right before I summoned
your sacred seeds through sucks.…as if I
truly believed that manna did not rain from God’s abode….
but flowed directly from you.
Have you misplaced a safe word
that has yet to be written…
but declared through the cortex of your tongue
and sequences that had me draped around
your shaft, while wearing a nun’s coif?
On bended knees, I rise...
brushing the remnants of you from my lips,
remembering how I thought the religious credence
of a spiritual connection was enough to form
the purest of love…
then well….
then reality bent me over…pulled out Juda’s belt
and spanked me.
Rain~
*muse credit goes to my imagination....and a few lines of inspiration ;)*
Written by
RainC_Tara
(rain1courtel)
Published 4th Jan 2017
| Edited 5th Jan 2017
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Re. Satin Scripture
Anonymous
5th Jan 2017 00:36am
Sonsista....making sacrifices which in the end seemingly have no relevance can be quite painful indeed...perhaps the only one we should hold up on such a pedestal is ourselves...thank you for this and I'm happy to see your ink flowing again...
xoxo Lady T
xoxo Lady T
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5th Jan 2017 1:07am
Cheers to your comment, Taryn! Completely agree! xo
Listening to gospel music, directly off of watching romance re-runs, while reading some erotic ink from this site, created this.... :)
...although my subconscious purse is full....anything could have fallen out. ;)
Listening to gospel music, directly off of watching romance re-runs, while reading some erotic ink from this site, created this.... :)
...although my subconscious purse is full....anything could have fallen out. ;)
Re. Satin Scripture
5th Jan 2017 1:58am
Wow, beautifully erotic are words that seem woefully inadequate to describe this wonderful work. You are truly are a talent to savour.
Glad you're back my lady.
Glad you're back my lady.
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5th Jan 2017 3:58am
Tony, it's good seeing you luv. I wrestled with deciding which category. I know it's laced with sexual metaphors but I tried very hard to frame it with a religious veil, if you will. Thank you....
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Anonymous
5th Jan 2017 2:11am
I struggle to find words that feel up to the task of expressing how amazing your writing is. I missed seeing your beautiful posts and I'm so very glad to see you here again...sharing your incredible thoughts with us. (I am very relieved I didn't read this at work...heaven knows what my coworkers would have thought of my blushing.) :)
Willow
Willow
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5th Jan 2017 4:04am
aww...thank you so much sweety! I'm happy my pen is playing with ink again.
Ditto on missing your lovely lines and posts, Willow. :)
...and I promise, I wasn't trying to make you blush......much. :)
Ditto on missing your lovely lines and posts, Willow. :)
...and I promise, I wasn't trying to make you blush......much. :)
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5th Jan 2017 3:15am
This is absolutely dripping with sensuality and naughtiness... it never ceases to amaze me how you manifest imagery from the tip of your pen that colors my senses with a rainbow of passion!
Rain washes away the dust of the day to bring growth beneath the moonlight...
JJ
Rain washes away the dust of the day to bring growth beneath the moonlight...
JJ
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lol...Naughtiness? But.....but I was trying to be a good little nun. o_O
Your comments are always so sweet and complimentary JJ. I swallow them whole so I can become full on your positive substance. ;) Thanks luv, for listing her.
Your comments are always so sweet and complimentary JJ. I swallow them whole so I can become full on your positive substance. ;) Thanks luv, for listing her.
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Anonymous
5th Jan 2017 4:24am
*sigh*
I am speechless.
Sorry, Miss Rain;(
~love you, Devlin
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Dev, your sigh is the greatest of responses because whenever you sigh... it hangs in the air, while the atmosphere bow. It's just that powerful! ;) Thanks sexy lady...
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5th Jan 2017 10:42am
This literally took my breath away. My mind somehow conjured a voice for you and I could literally hear the soft, dark, melodic tune of the emotion in this ink....so graciously seductive.....damn...amazing
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6th Jan 2017 10:52pm
Lyrical A, this was such a lovely comment. :) Thank you so much!
So happy you enjoyed it and I'm honored you decided to babysitting' her.
Poetic bow~
So happy you enjoyed it and I'm honored you decided to babysitting' her.
Poetic bow~
Re. Satin Scripture
5th Jan 2017 2:25pm
What an amazing ending! I was not expecting that.
I love the biblical references and attribute them to the natural state of man and woman from the beginning. The attraction, beauty, carnal desires, and then subsequent relaxing into fantasy. Your perspective is from the deep-seeded love of a woman, especially in relation to the manna reference and bended knee. When a man loves a woman as a queen, he undoubtedly will feel a king.
I am happy to see you back, Tara. And pray your new year is blessed with much love and happiness.
I love the biblical references and attribute them to the natural state of man and woman from the beginning. The attraction, beauty, carnal desires, and then subsequent relaxing into fantasy. Your perspective is from the deep-seeded love of a woman, especially in relation to the manna reference and bended knee. When a man loves a woman as a queen, he undoubtedly will feel a king.
I am happy to see you back, Tara. And pray your new year is blessed with much love and happiness.
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6th Jan 2017 10:57pm
I always love when you visit me, Ahavati! Love receiving commentary by such an amazing writer. :) As per the ending....I love shockers! lol..
Also, thank you for the encouragement and blessings. I do appreciate it and hoped you and your family kicked off 2017 with lots of joy and laughter...xo
Also, thank you for the encouragement and blessings. I do appreciate it and hoped you and your family kicked off 2017 with lots of joy and laughter...xo
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5th Jan 2017 5:47pm
you never cease to amaze me Tara.
this here is a perfect blend of erotic and religious
overtones..your use of metaphors is impeccable..
and the level of connectivity so genuine
" You made me feel unbelievable! "
yeahh..just like that
.
this here is a perfect blend of erotic and religious
overtones..your use of metaphors is impeccable..
and the level of connectivity so genuine
" You made me feel unbelievable! "
yeahh..just like that
.
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6th Jan 2017 11:02pm
Well, I guess both of us will be two individuals who never cease to amaze one another, eh?! ;)
....and you always make me feel unbelievable whenever I visit your poetic palace, Naajir. Thank you...
....and you always make me feel unbelievable whenever I visit your poetic palace, Naajir. Thank you...
Re. Satin Scripture
5th Jan 2017 10:55pm
A spiritual component is just one element of the purest love. There's the emotional and carnal to consider. The sacred must be balanced by the sensual, and God help those who disregard what makes us human. Your nun seems to have the right idea, but the priest has some learning to do if he offers his seed as manna. Fine work Rain, and you make brilliant use of those sexual metaphors.
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....that priest must be a voyeur?! o_O Don't remember inviting him in. lol...
Thank you hon for the wonderful response. Feels good reading your words again. :)
Thank you hon for the wonderful response. Feels good reading your words again. :)
Re. Satin Scripture
5th Jan 2017 11:31pm
Yea u can call ME reality, becuz I'd def. Spank your hot ass for being such a good bad girl!! lol mmmmmmm... Yea got a brotha dreamin' n sshhh... lol
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6th Jan 2017 11:10pm
lol.... 'A spanking was the only thing you drew from the imagery?! :)
Only you, Rich! Only you!
And I wouldn't have you any other way. Thank you for loving on her enough to take her home with you. ;)
Only you, Rich! Only you!
And I wouldn't have you any other way. Thank you for loving on her enough to take her home with you. ;)
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Anonymous
6th Jan 2017 11:21pm
Rain, dammit this is purely epical, the referneces are perfectly placed within context, there's sensuality and pain (as some think its actually the same intensity of pleasure points) you exectued it perfectly.
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12th Jan 2017 3:32am
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12th Jan 2017 3:34am
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Anonymous
7th Jan 2017 3:30pm
take me to church, rainy lady!
holy mother of god
you have out done yourself
with this sensual wonder
xo
holy mother of god
you have out done yourself
with this sensual wonder
xo
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12th Jan 2017 3:38am
I'm so happy to see you back on the du dancedoll! :) Your vibe was missed greatly. Thank you gorgus'!
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Let me hear a " Halleuijah! " ....can i get an " Amen "....?? ;)
(Seriously, though), Rain, this is metaphorically mesmerizing! Your combination of the spiritual aspects, as well as the basic human desires and satisfactions regarding love.....along with your signature eloquent expression of the erotic, makes this an outstanding piece!
Even your choice of the word 'satin' carries with it a certain dichotomy, with respect to what might be considered the relationship between love /lust :
White satin being regarded as purity, while black--or red--satin is frequently associated with passion or lust-----as these connotations, in turn, might be linked to those which are thought of as more acceptable, pure ( "innocent") vs.those which are considered more forbidden and therefore more desirable....) Just IMHO--only! :))
Anyhow.....may i say that i am ever soo glad that you are back with us again!! I have so surely missed you, Mo Chara Chotha`imid!!
(Seriously, though), Rain, this is metaphorically mesmerizing! Your combination of the spiritual aspects, as well as the basic human desires and satisfactions regarding love.....along with your signature eloquent expression of the erotic, makes this an outstanding piece!
Even your choice of the word 'satin' carries with it a certain dichotomy, with respect to what might be considered the relationship between love /lust :
White satin being regarded as purity, while black--or red--satin is frequently associated with passion or lust-----as these connotations, in turn, might be linked to those which are thought of as more acceptable, pure ( "innocent") vs.those which are considered more forbidden and therefore more desirable....) Just IMHO--only! :))
Anyhow.....may i say that i am ever soo glad that you are back with us again!! I have so surely missed you, Mo Chara Chotha`imid!!
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12th Jan 2017 3:43am
Gosh DarkE! Your beautiful spirit always seeps out through your amazing commentary. :) You always make me smile when you visit,... I mean always! xoxo Thank you...
Re. Satin Scripture
9th Jan 2017 4:44am
......the inevitable betrayal sure to come. This sassy, yet sensual and so metaphoric. So........Tara :-)
I am so happy to see your pen once again.....
I am so happy to see your pen once again.....
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12th Jan 2017 3:46am
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10th Jan 2017 1:49pm
You left me in awe once again...
I love it when hints of religion mingle with erotism... such an exquisite cocktail :-)
This was truly a pleasure to read and that ending was just epic!
I love it when hints of religion mingle with erotism... such an exquisite cocktail :-)
This was truly a pleasure to read and that ending was just epic!
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12th Jan 2017 3:49am
Thank you Duende! I was hoping the ending would shock. Glad it did! :)
Your profile pic rocks! Pretty!
Your profile pic rocks! Pretty!
Re. Satin Scripture
15th Jan 2017 6:57am
This is beautiful, sensual, and honest all rolled up together. Your words once again flow and form together quite beautifully. It is great to see you back here on DUP, my dear.
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16th Jan 2017 2:22am
Thank you so much for the lovely reply, es!
Great to feel your presence on my page. :)
Great to feel your presence on my page. :)
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22nd Jan 2017 3:02am
There goes my poetic king! :) Such a joy to read your commentary, DP! You have always managed to stir my cerebral juices with your words. I've definitely missed you and your truthful-pen. Xo Pen love~
Re. Satin Scripture
26th Jan 2017 10:48pm
Rain, I add my humble observations to this long list of admirers. You weave a perfect sensual prayer shawl with these words. To look on the beauty of a woman and see her as "Zion" is a captivating notion filled with the anticipation and allure of exploring this new, exciting promised land. I bow low to your artistry. Bravisima Goddess Rain!
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14th Jun 2017 4:16pm
What an amazing comment coming from such an amazing writer as yourself GW. It's great to see you visiting me. Appreciate the poetic support... xo
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26th Jun 2017 9:18pm
Thank you for the compliment, Again. You dont have to comment on my poetry. I dont follow you because your poetry is not my cup of tea. No disrespect!
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Anonymous
28th Jun 2017 2:36am
Lady Rain.. simply brilliant, and beautiful.. into the list it goes.. much love..
Dave
Dave
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28th Jun 2017 2:43am
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28th Jun 2017 2:49am
beautiful Rain your muse loves you lady
this is some stellar inking
you really got down on this
& the ending is a real stunner..
love Brenda
this is some stellar inking
you really got down on this
& the ending is a real stunner..
love Brenda
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28th Jun 2017 3:04am
Crim, everytime you stop by you leave a glow of radiance.,😘 Thank you for kidnappin' her! Xo
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13th Jul 2017 8:20pm
Just brilliant. Brilliantly put forward the real need over the manufactured obligations.
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13th Jul 2017 9:01pm
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4th Aug 2017 2:52am
"oh please let it rain today, this town is so filthy ,
like mind in many ways"
the seeds you plant with this work
with attention to the overflowing
expressions of terror and exultation
it magnifies all these things I have done-
You shoot lava through me. please keep it coming-
like mind in many ways"
the seeds you plant with this work
with attention to the overflowing
expressions of terror and exultation
it magnifies all these things I have done-
You shoot lava through me. please keep it coming-
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22nd Dec 2017 11:50pm
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4th Aug 2017 12:23pm
Fantastic writing.
i really liked the line
"the royalty that
singed your skin in Hebrew script. "
and
"Have you misplaced a safe word
that has yet to be written… "
i love your style and imagery,keep'em coming RainC_Tara
i really liked the line
"the royalty that
singed your skin in Hebrew script. "
and
"Have you misplaced a safe word
that has yet to be written… "
i love your style and imagery,keep'em coming RainC_Tara
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22nd Dec 2017 11:51pm
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22nd Aug 2017 8:47am
Hy ,
thank you very much for your replay . I enjoy your poem and will read all your erotic creation.
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22nd Dec 2017 11:52pm
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4th Sep 2017 3:28am
Your pen is truly blessed. Your flow and writing style unique. The way you capture the readers attention from start to end as if I'm there live watching feeling a voyuer.
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22nd Dec 2017 11:54pm
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7th Dec 2017 2:53am
Your words are those of a woman whose sensuality is boundless and deep. Your verse is a literary delight. Your use of language is magnificent and serves your erotica purpose exquisitely. Your poems like this are why I fell in love with your literature.
John
John
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23rd Dec 2017 00:02am
John, it's so great to read your feedback once again. Thought I lost you. Thank you!-😘
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20th Dec 2017 1:49am
And still, you inspire majestically
Bringing forth forgotten memories and planting seeds that develop into raging need
Magnificent as always
Please, check our Satin Scripture Seduction
Bringing forth forgotten memories and planting seeds that develop into raging need
Magnificent as always
Please, check our Satin Scripture Seduction
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23rd Dec 2017 00:10am
Hey there! It's been awhile! Pleased you stop through to leave a lovely comment! Thank you!😊
...and will do.
...and will do.
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26th Dec 2017 6:32pm
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26th Dec 2017 7:02pm
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2nd Jul 2023 8:17pm
A poem which shows some biblical inspiration, such as these lines:
Your analytical eyes always catalogued the
freedom of my curves right before I summoned
your sacred seeds through sucks.…as if I
truly believed that manna did not rain from God’s abode….
but flowed directly from you.
Your analytical eyes always catalogued the
freedom of my curves right before I summoned
your sacred seeds through sucks.…as if I
truly believed that manna did not rain from God’s abode….
but flowed directly from you.
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