Satin Scripture

Sonsista....making sacrifices which in the end seemingly have no relevance can be quite painful indeed...perhaps the only one we should hold up on such a pedestal is ourselves...thank you for this and I'm happy to see your ink flowing again...

xoxo Lady T

Cheers to your comment, Taryn!  Completely agree!  xo  
Listening to gospel music, directly off of watching romance re-runs, while reading some erotic ink from this site, created this.... :)  
 
...although my subconscious purse is full....anything could have fallen out. ;)

Wow,  beautifully erotic are words that seem woefully inadequate  to describe this wonderful work. You are truly are a talent to savour.
Glad you're back my lady.

Tony, it's good seeing you luv. I wrestled with deciding which category. I know it's laced with sexual metaphors but I tried very hard to frame it with a religious veil, if you will. Thank you....

I struggle to find words that feel up to the task of expressing how amazing your writing is.  I missed seeing your beautiful posts and I'm so very glad to see you here again...sharing your incredible thoughts with us.  (I am very relieved I didn't read this at work...heaven knows what my coworkers would have thought of my blushing.)   :)
Willow

aww...thank you so much sweety! I'm happy my pen is playing with ink again.
Ditto on missing your lovely lines and posts, Willow. :)

...and I promise, I wasn't trying to make you blush......much.  :)

This is absolutely dripping with sensuality and naughtiness... it never ceases to amaze me how you manifest imagery from the tip of your pen that colors my senses with a rainbow of passion!
Rain washes away the dust of the day to bring growth beneath the moonlight...
JJ

lol...Naughtiness? But.....but I was trying to be a good little nun. o_O    
Your comments are always so sweet and complimentary JJ. I swallow them whole so I can become full on your positive substance. ;) Thanks luv, for listing her.

*sigh*

I am speechless.
Sorry, Miss Rain;(

~love you, Devlin

Dev, your sigh is the greatest of responses because whenever you sigh... it hangs in the air, while the atmosphere bow. It's just that powerful! ;) Thanks sexy lady...  
 

This literally took my breath away. My mind somehow conjured a voice for you and I could literally hear the soft, dark, melodic tune of the emotion in this ink....so graciously seductive.....damn...amazing

Lyrical A, this was such a lovely comment. :) Thank you so much!
So happy you enjoyed it and I'm honored you decided to babysitting' her.

Poetic bow~
  

What an amazing ending! I was not expecting that.

I love the biblical references and attribute them to the natural state of man and woman from the beginning. The attraction, beauty, carnal desires, and then subsequent relaxing into fantasy. Your perspective is from the deep-seeded love of a woman, especially in relation to the manna reference and bended knee. When a man loves a woman as a queen, he undoubtedly will feel a king.

I am happy to see you back, Tara. And pray your new year is blessed with much love and happiness.

I always love when you visit me, Ahavati! Love receiving commentary by such an amazing writer. :) As per the ending....I love shockers! lol..

Also, thank you for the encouragement and blessings. I do appreciate it and hoped you and your family kicked off 2017 with lots of joy and laughter...xo

you never cease to amaze me Tara.
this here is a perfect blend of erotic and religious
overtones..your use of metaphors is impeccable..
and the level of connectivity so genuine

" You made me feel unbelievable! "

yeahh..just like that





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Well, I guess both of us will be two individuals who never cease to amaze one another, eh?! ;)

....and you always make me feel unbelievable whenever I visit your poetic palace, Naajir. Thank you...

A spiritual component is just one element of the purest love.  There's the emotional and carnal to consider.  The sacred must be balanced by the sensual, and God help those who disregard what makes us human.  Your nun seems to have the right idea, but the priest has some learning to do if he offers his seed as manna.  Fine work Rain, and you make brilliant use of those sexual metaphors.

....that priest must be a voyeur?! o_O  Don't remember inviting him in. lol...  
Thank you hon for the wonderful response. Feels good reading your words again. :)

Yea u can call ME reality, becuz I'd def. Spank your hot ass for being such a good bad girl!! lol mmmmmmm... Yea got a brotha dreamin' n sshhh... lol

lol.... 'A spanking was the only thing you drew from the imagery?!  :)
Only you, Rich! Only you!
And I wouldn't have you any other way. Thank you for loving on her enough to take her home with you. ;)

Rain, dammit this is purely epical, the referneces are perfectly placed within context, there's sensuality and pain (as some think its actually the same intensity of pleasure points) you exectued it perfectly.

Vee, you always have the most thoughtful comments. :) Thank you...

I absolutely LoVe your description Melia! :) Thank you...

take me to church, rainy lady!
holy mother of god
you have out done yourself
with this sensual wonder
xo

I'm so happy to see you back on the du dancedoll! :) Your vibe was missed greatly. Thank you gorgus'!

Let me hear a " Halleuijah! " ....can i get an " Amen "....?? ;)

(Seriously, though), Rain, this is metaphorically mesmerizing! Your combination of the spiritual aspects, as well as the basic human desires and satisfactions regarding love.....along with your signature eloquent expression of the erotic, makes this an outstanding piece!

Even your choice of the word 'satin' carries with it a certain dichotomy, with respect to what might be considered the relationship between love /lust :

  White satin being regarded as purity, while black--or red--satin is frequently associated with passion or lust-----as these connotations, in turn, might be linked to  those  which are thought of as more acceptable, pure ( "innocent") vs.those which are considered more forbidden and therefore more desirable....) Just  IMHO--only! :))

Anyhow.....may i say that i am ever soo glad that you are back with us again!! I have so surely missed you, Mo Chara Chotha`imid!!

Gosh DarkE! Your beautiful spirit always seeps out through your amazing commentary. :) You always make me smile when you visit,... I mean always! xoxo Thank you...

......the inevitable betrayal sure to come.  This sassy, yet sensual and so metaphoric.  So........Tara :-)

I am so happy to see your pen once again.....

Thank you Archie, and it does feel good to be pushing my pen once more! :)

You left me in awe once again...

I love it when hints of religion mingle with erotism... such an exquisite cocktail :-)

This was truly a pleasure to read and that ending was just epic!

Thank you Duende!  I was hoping the ending would shock. Glad it did! :)

Your profile pic rocks! Pretty!

This is beautiful, sensual, and honest all rolled up together. Your words once again flow and form together quite beautifully. It is great to see you back here on DUP, my dear.

Thank you so much for the lovely reply, es!
Great to feel your presence on my page. :)

"as if I  
truly believed that manna did not rain from God’s abode….
but flowed directly from you. "
My goodness! My graciousness, your poetry is undoubtedly top notch. You're like Queen Midas with that pen, but what amazes me the most about the many poems I've read from you is that you always have verses like the one above that could stand alone. I rarely have time to write or read these days, but when I do, you know I'm coming for some of the Rain 'Fire'.

There goes my poetic king! :) Such a joy to read your commentary, DP!  You have always managed to stir my cerebral juices with your words. I've definitely missed you and your truthful-pen. Xo Pen love~

Rain, I add my humble observations to this long list of admirers. You weave a perfect sensual prayer shawl with these words. To look on the beauty of a woman and see her as "Zion" is a captivating notion filled with the anticipation and allure of exploring this new, exciting promised land. I bow low to your artistry. Bravisima Goddess Rain!

What an amazing comment coming from such an amazing writer as yourself GW. It's great to see you visiting me. Appreciate the poetic support... xo

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Thank you for the compliment, Again. You dont have to comment on my poetry. I dont follow you because your poetry is not my cup of tea. No disrespect!

Lady Rain.. simply brilliant, and beautiful.. into the list it goes.. much love..





















Dave

awww Dave, ...got a girl smiling big!😊 Thank you luv, for listin' her..😘

beautiful Rain your muse loves you lady
this is some stellar inking
you really got down on this
& the ending is a real stunner..

love Brenda

Crim, everytime you stop by you leave a glow  of radiance.,😘 Thank you for kidnappin' her! Xo

Just brilliant. Brilliantly put forward the real need over the manufactured obligations.

Thank you luv! Appreciate you stopping by, Ronnie! 😘

"oh please let it rain today, this town is so filthy ,
like mind in many ways"
the seeds you  plant with this work
with attention to the overflowing
expressions of terror and exultation
it magnifies all these things I have done-
You shoot lava through me. please keep it coming-

What an amazing comment! I'm flattered ! Thank you!😊

Fantastic writing.
i really liked the line
"the royalty that
singed your skin in Hebrew script. "
and
"Have you misplaced a safe word
that has yet to be written… "
i love your style and imagery,keep'em coming RainC_Tara

Thank you so much for reading! 😊

Hy ,

thank you very much for your replay . I enjoy your poem and  will read all your erotic creation.

Thank you!😊

Your pen is truly blessed. Your flow and writing style unique. The way you capture the readers attention from start to end as if I'm there live watching feeling a voyuer.

Such a sweet compliment! Thank you!😊

Your words are those of a woman whose sensuality is boundless and deep. Your verse is a literary delight. Your use of language is magnificent and serves your erotica purpose exquisitely. Your poems like this are why I fell in love with your literature.

John

John, it's so great to read your feedback once again. Thought I lost you. Thank you!-😘

And still, you inspire majestically
Bringing forth forgotten memories and planting seeds that develop into raging need
Magnificent as always
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Hey there! It's been awhile! Pleased you stop through to leave a lovely comment! Thank you!😊

...and will do.

very sexy

Thank you so much!😊

Oh Lord Jesus.....these words!!....sigh.