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Alienated
it's cold
i'm freezing
i need your arms
to warm me up
and hold me close
to keep me safe
and protected
from harm
from an
alien world
where i don’t
belong
i'm so tired
of trying and
pretending
i’m strong
tired of facing
my demons
alone
will you kiss me
and caress my
frozen flesh
hold me close
because it feels
like i’m dying
i'm so tired
of being alive
i'm freezing
i need your arms
to warm me up
and hold me close
to keep me safe
and protected
from harm
from an
alien world
where i don’t
belong
i'm so tired
of trying and
pretending
i’m strong
tired of facing
my demons
alone
will you kiss me
and caress my
frozen flesh
hold me close
because it feels
like i’m dying
i'm so tired
of being alive
Author's Note
The Sound Of Silence.
https://youtu.be/u9Dg-g7t2l4
https://youtu.be/u9Dg-g7t2l4
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Re. Alienated
Anonymous
20th Oct 2016 1:07pm
Vivid, beautiful, really amazing ink.
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Re: Re. Alienated
21st Oct 2016 2:23am
Thank you so much for your comment and the reading list add!
I really appreciate that!
Welcome to DUP, I'm gonna take a look at your work...
I really appreciate that!
Welcome to DUP, I'm gonna take a look at your work...
Re. Alienated
20th Oct 2016 1:07pm
& the skin aches in these times, doesn't it?
I once found myself talking to a candle
It shed light but lacked any intellect
I'm only telling you this because your lovely poem took me right there. To that sollice I know so well. Nicely put together piece here & the picture works well with it too.
Blue Skies @ you
Al -x-
I once found myself talking to a candle
It shed light but lacked any intellect
I'm only telling you this because your lovely poem took me right there. To that sollice I know so well. Nicely put together piece here & the picture works well with it too.
Blue Skies @ you
Al -x-
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Re: Re. Alienated
21st Oct 2016 2:28am
Thank you so much for your comment, Al!
I'm glad you picked up on the loneliness of these times, that was what I was trying to incorporate in this piece...
Purple skies at you ~
Duende
I'm glad you picked up on the loneliness of these times, that was what I was trying to incorporate in this piece...
Purple skies at you ~
Duende
Re. Alienated
20th Oct 2016 2:14pm
lovely Duende your poem moved me deeply these are some powerful emotions hugs dear lady..
love Crim
love Crim
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Re: Re. Alienated
21st Oct 2016 2:35am
Thanks for the hugs and the comment, dear Crim!
Hearing that my poem moved you deeply is a huge compliment!
This piece was written really fast... sometimes emotions need to get out... unfiltered... not polished...
Love, Duende
Hearing that my poem moved you deeply is a huge compliment!
This piece was written really fast... sometimes emotions need to get out... unfiltered... not polished...
Love, Duende
Re. Alienated
Anonymous
20th Oct 2016 2:36pm
Words which resonate.
Powerful. The depth of emotion is truly felt.
((Hugs)) 💓
Powerful. The depth of emotion is truly felt.
((Hugs)) 💓
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Re: Re. Alienated
21st Oct 2016 2:38am
Thank you so much, dear Heart!
I'm glad to hear you could feel this one...
I appreciate your comments... always...
Thanks for the hug ♥
Hugs back...
I'm glad to hear you could feel this one...
I appreciate your comments... always...
Thanks for the hug ♥
Hugs back...
Re. Alienated
Anonymous
20th Oct 2016 2:48pm
"I'm so tired
of being
alive...."
a heavy yet beautiful vibe.
Duende..
of being
alive...."
a heavy yet beautiful vibe.
Duende..
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Re: Re. Alienated
21st Oct 2016 2:39am
Thank you so much for your comment, Naajir
Heavy it is, but sometimes these feelings need to get out...
Heavy it is, but sometimes these feelings need to get out...
Re. Alienated
20th Oct 2016 5:28pm
So sad. It is perfection though. I can't say it enough. Your writing is awesome 😁
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Re: Re. Alienated
21st Oct 2016 2:41am
I love your 'awesome' :-)
I think you know this feeling all to well...
Thank you so much for your support, dear DC!
I think you know this feeling all to well...
Thank you so much for your support, dear DC!
Re. Alienated
Anonymous
21st Oct 2016 4:35am
Awe Dunede.......this touches me.......a sadness I feel deeply reading this.......some times no matter how we try......we still end up lonely.......touching ink my friend......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. Alienated
Thank you so much for your heartwarming comment, dear flowergirl!
I think a lot of people know this feeling... there is so much loneliness in these times...
Purple love back at ya!
Duende
I think a lot of people know this feeling... there is so much loneliness in these times...
Purple love back at ya!
Duende
Anonymous
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21st Oct 2016 6:42am
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Re: Re. Alienated
21st Oct 2016 7:13am
Thank you so much for your comment, Aemilia!
Your visits and insights I really appreciated!
Vulnerable it is...
Your visits and insights I really appreciated!
Vulnerable it is...
Re. Alienated
21st Oct 2016 6:32pm
Wow! This was deep! Beautiful melancholy! Emotional spill, Duende!
This ink makes me sad....
This ink makes me sad....
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Re: Re. Alienated
21st Oct 2016 6:58pm
Thank you so much for your comment, dear Rain!
Sometimes these feelings overflow me and they needed out...
Feeling better today, don't be sad!
Sometimes these feelings overflow me and they needed out...
Feeling better today, don't be sad!
Re. Alienated
Anonymous
22nd Oct 2016 5:39pm
Duende.. simply brilliant.. i totally feel this write.. great ink.. i'm only an average writer.. but this kicks ass..
Dave
Dave
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Re: Re. Alienated
22nd Oct 2016 6:02pm
Wow, that's an amazing comment!
That you can feel my write is the best compliment you can give me!
Thank you so much, Dave
That you can feel my write is the best compliment you can give me!
Thank you so much, Dave
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24th Oct 2016 5:05am
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24th Oct 2016 7:36am
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25th Oct 2016 1:30am
Re. Alienated
25th Oct 2016 2:54am
extremely touching to surfaces below,
..a place many of us recognize..
sincerely hope all is a little ok and better
since this was written my Du'en'de
-Howlings
..a place many of us recognize..
sincerely hope all is a little ok and better
since this was written my Du'en'de
-Howlings
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Re: Re. Alienated
25th Oct 2016 4:03pm
My dear Noire,
Thank you so much for you comment!
That my work touches you means a lot to me!
It's going up and down...
C'est la vie
Thank you so much for you comment!
That my work touches you means a lot to me!
It's going up and down...
C'est la vie
Re. Alienated
20th Nov 2016 7:11pm
I completely understand :( Soul-bearing ink! Love it, such beautifully naked words.
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Re: Re. Alienated
21st Nov 2016 2:42pm
This was emotions laid bare...
Thank you for understanding and letting me know!
Thank you for understanding and letting me know!