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WHERE
Whet the stone wheeze the bellows
Where wise whale once whored
Where the shuddering hulls dock
Where pigeon mock gull squawk
Where wharf hulk at the harbour weigh
Where the sick shit shocks
Of pavement crack maps
The crap shoot crack rocks
Fried in zoot mind traps
There you'll find me
Where warriors are dance partners
Whirl polyphony with me
Where lawyers are mandala choirs
Whirl counterpoint with me
Where our scientists become saints
Whirl Hadron and Heaven
Wailing sweetly between may and be
Listen oh devotee
Depth heart breath
And find me
Where wise whale once whored
Where the shuddering hulls dock
Where pigeon mock gull squawk
Where wharf hulk at the harbour weigh
Where the sick shit shocks
Of pavement crack maps
The crap shoot crack rocks
Fried in zoot mind traps
There you'll find me
Where warriors are dance partners
Whirl polyphony with me
Where lawyers are mandala choirs
Whirl counterpoint with me
Where our scientists become saints
Whirl Hadron and Heaven
Wailing sweetly between may and be
Listen oh devotee
Depth heart breath
And find me
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Re. WHERE
17th Oct 2016 7:24pm
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Re. WHERE
17th Oct 2016 7:57pm
great atmospheric write bringing me the ocean on this day..
wonderful..
love Crim
wonderful..
love Crim
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17th Oct 2016 8:47pm
Re. WHERE
17th Oct 2016 10:19pm
Wailing sweetly between may and be
Listen oh devotee
Depth heart breath
And find me
That holds the entire poem as an anchor
would a ship tossed about in a storm, Whale.
Listen oh devotee
Depth heart breath
And find me
That holds the entire poem as an anchor
would a ship tossed about in a storm, Whale.
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17th Oct 2016 10:42pm
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18th Oct 2016 6:14am
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18th Oct 2016 5:50am
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22nd Oct 2016 6:18pm
The phrasing in this one is just outstanding!
You left me in awe... this is so clever :-)
You left me in awe... this is so clever :-)
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24th Oct 2016 5:56am
Re. WHERE
Where? oh..oh yes there..
inside,.. inside the most
strangest..perculiar places..
you'll find
I love your unsurpass'd ink
-Howlings
inside,.. inside the most
strangest..perculiar places..
you'll find
I love your unsurpass'd ink
-Howlings
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Re. WHERE
31st Oct 2016 7:17am
I would give you a rousing heartfelt applause if the meeting of my hands in the air were audible from here to there. Fantastic.
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Re. WHERE
17th Nov 2016 4:04pm
Whale, I have to tell you how on time this grazed my eyes.
Arrghh haha!
Absolutely brotha
Arrghh haha!
Absolutely brotha
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17th Nov 2016 7:51pm
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28th Jan 2017 2:26am
"Where warriors are dance partners
Whirl polyphony with me
Where lawyers are mandala choirs
Whirl counterpoint with me
Where our scientists become saints
Whirl Hadron and Heaven
Wailing sweetly between may and be"
Darn right, good pairs o' word.
Whirl polyphony with me
Where lawyers are mandala choirs
Whirl counterpoint with me
Where our scientists become saints
Whirl Hadron and Heaven
Wailing sweetly between may and be"
Darn right, good pairs o' word.
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