aching passion

Cool

thank you kindly..

love Crim

The thing with modern freeform writing is it hardly ever comes across as a conversation (I've worked tirelessly trying to make conversational freeform poetry). You do it well here... It's like your subject is speaking to her lover over a cup of coffe baring her soul... 'twas a good read this... Thanks

Blue Skies @ You M'lady

Al -x-

hello AL thank you for seeing this write came naturally from my soul to this person..

love Brenda

"lover of my soul"

Love that. Such a deep loving write :-)

thank you DC..

love Crim

a *sigh*, my Queen ... love this, love you ...~Devlin.

thank you my beautiful Queen..

love you..

xo Brenda

the ache, it's so much a part of love.
felt it.  feel it.

Crim...

indeed it is thank you John..

love Crim

I like this one from you.  Loneliness yes, but the love still is stronger.  Great write.

thank you kindly..

love Crim

thank you graciously OS..

love Crim

Dearest Brenda,
 A very lovely and wanting
peice...the ache and need so
evident. This is such a relatable
peice my sweet lady. I know very
well this longing and need to bridge
such a distance.

Loves
Keith

thank you dearest Keith..

love Brenda

thank you graciously Todski i'll think about the opening line :)

love Brenda

You have such gorgeous edges and facets.  The way you express things is so incredibly beautiful, dark and stark at times and still breathtaking.  That comes from within...Beautiful, my lady, beautiful

thank you lovely Willow graciously..

love Crim

Distance is imposed to remove the physical aspects of union
so that the spiritual remnants may be remembered and honed.

Lovely recognizing, Brenda.

thank you Sage one yes that makes sense..

love Brenda

Love this one, dear Crim!

Did you know I think I love you > I hope you don't mind me calling this cute, but I thought it was cute :-)

soul's mate > it's 'tiny' details such as this, that makes a poem 'big' (just my humble opinion)

Love, Duende

thank you lovely Duende love your comment..

love Crim

A brave write 📝 indeed Brave Brenda!  For it nails the fear and liberates the soul in one go!!

thank you KDAmB..

love Brenda

You may be shameless but you're also tender and reflective.  I think you're exactly what your lover needs.  There's the present distance and partings in the past, but your souls are still very much joined.  A fine love poem Crim.

thank you Sir Crow what a beautiful way of seeing things..

love Crim

achingly exquisite crim, your ability to affect the heart is, well, crim de  la crim,lol...

thank you Dean my friend :)

love Crim

Such poems as these by you, always express such vulnerability through such refined words and phrases, that the idea of a rough, object of passionate financed exchange (rhymes with wore and bore) seems impossible. Nevermind that object of your intimate words becomes even more mysterious, and make the poems like intercepted correspondence.
You write the passion, and it makes us ache in response at the beauty.

thank you Lord Viddax for such a wonderfully endearing comment..

love Brenda

A side of you I would like to see more of! Passionately beautiful Bren!
JJ

thank you JJ would that I feel like this always..

love Brenda

My Beautiful Brenda, such tenderness and longing felt within this ink....feeling and knowing there is a connection and the inability to be within the others touch...a wanting that is what one would think indescribable, but is accomplished here....

"reaching, touching finger tips  
though it's my heart that aches for you

*
you tenderly undress me  
touch me in the lonely places  
the one's only you know about
lover of my soul"

I love you so much!!

Taryn xoxox

thank you beautiful one I love you so much :)

love Brenda

Felt deeply into the depths.
The longing. The ache. The need.
A true beautiful masterpiece.
Love this write 💓

thank you lovely Heart..

love Crim

*sigh*
i have known this
& hated it
& yet... miss it betimes.
beautifully written, brenda
xo

thank you beautiful Katja for feeling and understanding this write..

love you lady..

xo Brenda

You are the best

thank you most graciously..

love Crim

Beautiful write crimsin

thank you kindly Mr :)

love Crimsin

It truly is an ache .. my beautiful Brenda. Find a way.... there is always a way, my friend.
✨Trish

we will find our way thank you beautiful Trish..

love Brenda

No, i didn't know.  But i'm here for you , dear.

eXcellent

aw thank you Daniel :)

love Brenda

indeed lovely Amelia..

love Crim

This does ache... Deeply, soulfully...
Outstanding!

thank you dearest Poe :)

love Crim

Beautiful and heart wrenching...I think that was redundant;)❤️❤️❤️

thank you lovely Sara..

love Crim

Brenda.. simply beautiful, tugging at the heartstrings of love.. i feel this write.. love you!!



Dave

thank you Dave for feeling me :)

love Brenda