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Poet Whore
I've had many poetic lusts
some would call me a poet whore
for men who lay it down hard
fucked with turn of phrase
pussy pulsing from their passion
their cock of the walk attitude
lapping at my mind's cherry
caressed me taking me to dizzying heights
with fist fuck prose
It's no secret I like it rough
you're a devious sexy beast
tasting my very soul
round the clock I feel you
better than any cocaine rush
you're my drug
want your attention
a rare a talent
mental masturbation
caressing me
touched my aching bud
with skilled precision
a man who knows how to tame this slut
one word from you is all I need
to be brought to my knees
obedience earned
a man of wealth and class
I burn with need
only you have what it takes
to put this cunt in her place
Published 26th Sep 2016
| Edited 27th Sep 2016
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27th Sep 2016 00:22am
27th Sep 2016 1:07am
This is funny... no really, it is. When I saw the title, what did I read? Not 'Poet Whore'... but 'Pet Whore'.
Of course the pic only reinforces that I really may not have been so wrong. Freudian slip or prescience? Who knows. S'pose I should go read the poem now...
Of course the pic only reinforces that I really may not have been so wrong. Freudian slip or prescience? Who knows. S'pose I should go read the poem now...
27th Sep 2016 5:31am
28th Sep 2016 2:49pm
27th Sep 2016 1:10am
Ms. Brenda,
I think that we have all
partaken in "mental masturbation"
through the words and phrases of others here. I find it a quite satisfying release in my brain.
Enjoyed as always...btw
Hot pic
Loves
Keith
I think that we have all
partaken in "mental masturbation"
through the words and phrases of others here. I find it a quite satisfying release in my brain.
Enjoyed as always...btw
Hot pic
Loves
Keith
27th Sep 2016 5:32am
27th Sep 2016 1:22am
27th Sep 2016 5:33am
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27th Sep 2016 5:35am
27th Sep 2016 4:19am
27th Sep 2016 5:36am
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27th Sep 2016 5:37am
There is a demon in your writing sometimes Crim and what's most beautiful about that demon is she is effortless in her delivery (which is not something you see everyday)
It's that demon that drops lines like "fist fuck prose" which lets face it is as rough as being anal fucked by a cactus, when it hits the page but it sits so naturally on your page. Brings back memories of a poet I haven't seen on DU for ages... "RedTBird" do you remember him? Like his style you've stripped and humiliated your subject her just as effortlessly.
Your narrative in this piece starts as a story teller and she's sexy AF then for some reason suddenly she moves into the "you" and "I" / "me" thing ... I think it changes your piece and you would be better choosing one or the other (and the story teller narrative works well) !
Nice, rough, dark and sexy write... Gets my vote...thanks for the read my friend
Al-x-
It's that demon that drops lines like "fist fuck prose" which lets face it is as rough as being anal fucked by a cactus, when it hits the page but it sits so naturally on your page. Brings back memories of a poet I haven't seen on DU for ages... "RedTBird" do you remember him? Like his style you've stripped and humiliated your subject her just as effortlessly.
Your narrative in this piece starts as a story teller and she's sexy AF then for some reason suddenly she moves into the "you" and "I" / "me" thing ... I think it changes your piece and you would be better choosing one or the other (and the story teller narrative works well) !
Nice, rough, dark and sexy write... Gets my vote...thanks for the read my friend
Al-x-
28th Sep 2016 2:53pm
thank you AL yes you're right about that demon it sometimes steals the pen and poems like these are born.. yes I do remember him now that I think about.. tricky business for me to not get sidetracked when writing.. thank you for enjoying the narrative in this write before I got a little derailed..
love Brenda
love Brenda
"a man of wealth and class
I burn with need
only you have what it takes
to put this cunt in her place "
love it 😈 I miss having a sub :(
I burn with need
only you have what it takes
to put this cunt in her place "
love it 😈 I miss having a sub :(
28th Sep 2016 2:54pm
27th Sep 2016 8:47am
if it's not rough it's not fun slow and sweet tan be enjoyable sometimes tho good write
28th Sep 2016 2:55pm
27th Sep 2016 9:38am
poetry is definitely a rush, Crim,
we chase her like a harlot.
solid & erotic writing...
we chase her like a harlot.
solid & erotic writing...
28th Sep 2016 2:56pm
27th Sep 2016 12:25pm
Honestly, when I read the title I wasn't sure I would like this. As I read I just was drawn in. It's not crude, just rough. I couldn't help but selfishly want someone to feel like this about what I wrote. Kudos here. Very sexy stuff.
28th Sep 2016 2:57pm
thank you i'm happy you enjoyed the ride someone could be writing about you without you knowing it so don't feel bad..
love Crim
love Crim
Anonymous
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27th Sep 2016 1:17pm
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28th Sep 2016 2:58pm
27th Sep 2016 8:02pm
A rough and sexy ride, Crim. I seriously doubt anyone could tame you. Even the gent you're addressing here should proceed with caution. It's an honor and privilege to read the Poet Whore, and learn.
28th Sep 2016 2:59pm
thank you Sir Crow you may be right about that.. my demons are wild and can't really be tamed..
love Crim
love Crim
Anonymous
28th Sep 2016 3:48am
My Beautiful Brenda...you know I have been here...and at times we have been here at the very exact same time *wink with an evil grin*...love this ink lovely one.
I love you
Taryn xoxo
I love you
Taryn xoxo
28th Sep 2016 3:00pm
thank you my beautiful lady yes we have says giggling :)
I love you..
xo Brenda
I love you..
xo Brenda
3rd Oct 2016 9:30pm
Brenda.. brilliantly done.. i know the feeling.. from a male prospective.. many poetess's have had me.. whether they knew it or not.. loved this ink.. and love you!!
Dave
Dave
6th Oct 2016 5:53pm
I think as poets we fall deep for each other on a fairly regular basis.. thank you Dave..
love you my friend..
xo Brenda
love you my friend..
xo Brenda
