~lost in you~

There is a twist coming through your writing lately that inspires... Your love poems are daringly playing erotic love... I 'spose some would argue "clean erotica" and others "dirty love". Personally I like how it's unfolding.  
You're also tightening up your word use and I think you making this type of stuff a voice almost all of a sudden.  

Love at you  
Al -x-

thank you AL i've had a few keen editors pointing me in the write direction literary wise ;)

love Brenda

I like the visuals you have here.  There are a lot of big epuc ideas that are crossed with a very intimate act.  Nice write here.

thank you most kindly..

love Crim

glad you felt the passion..

love Brenda

I adore this piece.
So very passionate. Truly stimulates the mind's eye.
Lovely ink 💓

thank you lovely Heart..

love Crim

Might want that lol great job my friend

thank you Kavik warrior soul you made me smile :)

love Brenda

really an intense piece here Crim, well done

thank you graciously Van..

love Crim

Whoa! How powerful this is, to see what is inside, to know why you're lost

thank you soul lost in lust..

love Crim

The last line is brilliant, a perfect ending to any poem: simple, but loud, powerful, and decisive. By the way, on a small grammatical note, there's an "it's" that should be an "its" because it's being used in the possessive context, as opposed to the abbreviative ("it is"). Otherwise, good poem. Precise and gripping. - Jack xxx

thank you Jack love your keen eye..

love Brenda

I'm already lost there Crim.  Your "disease" is magnificent:

"pounding out my desire
in blood and ink
will you lose yourself in my disease?"

Fine work Lady.  Your intensity delights me.

aw thank you Sir Crow :)

love Crim

This is utterly beautiful!!!

Will you lose yourself in my disease? > this line brought me to tears and will stay with me for a while...

Thank you, lovely Crim for describing your rollercoaster of emotions in such a beautiful way!

Love, Duende

aw thank you beautiful Duende sweetheart..

love Crim

That final stanza crashes like a meteor into the the reality of understanding, Brenda.
I really love witnessing your evolution through words. Poetry has liberated many a soul;
however, that soul must first submit. Wonderful progression you are. xo

thank you Sage one for such a wonderful comment..

love Brenda

Lovely Crim ... I read all the comments [yes, I`m nosy that way;) ] and I`ve nothing to add; everything has already been said ... I`m only sorry to say that I didn`t get to this asap, so my humblest apologies ... love you lady ... ~Devlin.

My Queen I read all the comments too :) no apologies needed I love you lady am graced by your presence on my pages..

love Brenda

My Beautiful Brenda....well my oh my...what do we have going in over here? Big Bang at the end with excellence in a small package...beautifully done my lovely one. I echo all before me.

I love you so much!

Xoxo Taryn

thank you my beautiful one.. this is some heavy lusting.. I love you so much..

xo Brenda

Dear effinsweetgods..

I love when your sensuality
..come out and play, it's
something beautiful


-Howlings

thank you lovely Howlings you know how to make a woman blush :)

love Crim

thank you lovely Amelia indeed it can..

love Crim

"Dark matter crushes us"

On this the poem and our choices balance
Deep breath before the plunge indeed

Many depths here smooth crim

thank you dearest Whale..

love Crim

Such a wonderful write with brilliant visuals so large in scope. If it's a disease I hope it's contagious because your brilliant.

Keith  

thank you graciously dearest Keith..

xo Brenda

sensual love like this, it happens at night.
I feel the surrounding, Crim...

thank you John it does indeed..

love Crim

there is something different about this one, brenda...
... might be the shorter lines
or the gentle tones
but that last line is quintessentially you
loved this
xo

thank you for seeing and feeling that beautiful one..

love Brenda

Another intense beauty

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thank you dearest Poet..

love Brenda

beautifully intense!! yes! our pals up here haven't left much for me to say as I agree with them all...gem!!

so happy you felt the deep passion of this write..

love Brenda

Brenda, my sister.. you're on fire.. all these kick-ass writes.. goddamn you always deliver.. love you..



Dave

thank you Dave love you enthusiasm you rock :)

love Brenda