carousel

thank you dearest Amelia glad to have brought back some good memories :)

love Crim

The carousel of life,such a dizzy ride.
The perfect metaphore. I enjoyed these words....

it is dizzying this ride called life thank you lovely Kasai..

love Crim

brightly painted horses on the round, Crim,
I'd get on & never get off.

a gypsy knows...

you're a gambling man I see John ;) thank you..

love Crim

" bet on black you'll lose more than you think..." That cuts BUT not becuz of your intent... Just heard the update of 2 more unarmed black men shot n killed by cops...
Feels to me like WE are the losers...:( but I disgress, U my dear
are a TRUE poetic force. :)


P.S. Apologize for my pissin' session on the news report. :(

aw Poe that is devastating news you are not the losers and you know I meant roulette yes? I love you Poe chin up you know when things will be set right I have faith you do..

love Brenda

Love your latest poems

A little esoteric,  so very much like that .....

Like

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thank you Poet you made me smile :)

love Brenda

Wow! I love the carnival theme throughout this. I have always felt carnivals
were double entendres of darkness offering light in the form of relief
and illusion of fun and games. This is beautifully crafted to illustrate
the dilemma of being pulled toward uncertainty despite warnings.

thank you Sage one you understood better than me the feelings I was conveying..

love Brenda

I love this piece.
The metaphors are brilliant.
Words which were felt deeply.
Wonderful ink, lovely Crim 💓

thank you lovely Heart..

love Crim

bet on black you'll lose      
more than you think > that is just brilliant!

I love this one, dear Crim!
It feels like your style is changing...
as if desperation made place for deep insights...

That makes me smile :-)
Love, Duende

pain has made a way thank you lovely Duende..  
 
love Crim

Such a ride ... You would think Carousel`s go round `n round when in actuality they take you to places you never for once expected ... Excellent ink, my Queen, thought light you still manage to keep a bit of darkness to it ... so brazen ... love to you and this dizzying piece ... ~Devlin.

thank you my Queen indeed they do..

love Brenda

Left me with a feeling of longing, a spark of hope that still burns in spite of the odds, tinged with heartache. Brings to mind Joni Mitchell's Circle Game: "We're captive on the carousel of time."

thank you for feeling the emotion I was conveying..

love Crim

I don't know why but I've always found carousels to be haunting. You captured a bit of that fear here amidst your words and the wistful sadness.

thank you lovely Willow for feeling that I was feeling some fear of the unknown..

love Crim

My Beautiful Brenda...this brought me to my childhood...fixated on a certain object as the carousel went round and round and my hand was extended to touch as I passed...just out of reach with all else around it a blur...makes me feel even life now is like that...focused on what consumes us regardless the surroundings...

I love you

xoxox Taryn

thank you my beautiful one I love you I deeply appreciate you for getting me..

xo Brenda

So brilliant.. lovely one.. love you!!



Dave

thank you love you my friend..

xo Brenda