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Antelope
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hearing the high pitch
of a ceremonial flute
chanting and chasing
with the friction
and rushing
currents of spirit,
how fast and far I run
through tall plains grass
waving,
my long hair streaks
across fields
of antelope racing,
released from the
pain that grounds me,
free in my flight,
the wind whistling
through hinged bones
twisted and twisting,
sweat lodge tears
preclude
when I might laugh again
The illness that won't let go of me...
.
hearing the high pitch
of a ceremonial flute
chanting and chasing
with the friction
and rushing
currents of spirit,
how fast and far I run
through tall plains grass
waving,
my long hair streaks
across fields
of antelope racing,
released from the
pain that grounds me,
free in my flight,
the wind whistling
through hinged bones
twisted and twisting,
sweat lodge tears
preclude
when I might laugh again
The illness that won't let go of me...
.
Written by
Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
Published 15th Jul 2016
| Edited 12th Jan 2019
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The illness that won't let go of me...
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Re. Antelope
15th Jul 2016 7:32pm
I can feel some of this yearning too Jade, the desire to be unencumbered by pain and frailty. I have exhilarating dreams that don't come true when I wake up and find myself still locked in this "prison of the flesh."
"the wind whistling
through hinged bones
twisted and twisting,
sweat lodge tears
preclude
when I might laugh again
The illness that won't let go of me."
This breaks my heart Jade. One day we'll be released, and I hope we can both make the most of it 'til then. Excellent work!
"the wind whistling
through hinged bones
twisted and twisting,
sweat lodge tears
preclude
when I might laugh again
The illness that won't let go of me."
This breaks my heart Jade. One day we'll be released, and I hope we can both make the most of it 'til then. Excellent work!
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Re: Re. Antelope
Thank you, my crowfly friend. It means so much the words, the sentiment, and a special part of yourself you've imparted to me.
Yes, the caged confinement that one's mind never can completely wrap itself around. Meantime, even when we know release is eminent, the wait is too often unbearable.
Yes, the caged confinement that one's mind never can completely wrap itself around. Meantime, even when we know release is eminent, the wait is too often unbearable.
Re. Antelope
15th Jul 2016 8:01pm
Re: Re. Antelope
16th Jul 2016 2:36am
Re. Antelope
15th Jul 2016 9:51pm
with delta blues as the back drop to my reading (spoonfull - howlin wolf) it dosen't and does enhance - for I hear the howl in both...
expressed in free flight
distressed in precluding pain
sweat lodge tears, indeed...
geoff
expressed in free flight
distressed in precluding pain
sweat lodge tears, indeed...
geoff
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Re: Re. Antelope
16th Jul 2016 2:47am
Thanks so much, Geoffrey, and yesss... the howl, echoing around me from everywhere, every waking moment.
Re. Antelope
16th Jul 2016 00:03am
I love the sense of freedom in this poem...I can feel it, and if it's from ailments...oyes! A talented write as always, Jade:)
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16th Jul 2016 1:34pm
Re. Antelope
16th Jul 2016 1:37am
Jade, I thrill at your use of Native American mysticism and spirituality that you weave into this as well as so many others of your poems. To be, for a time, released from the shackles of pain even if only in ou r minds is a blessing. Bravisima!
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Re: Re. Antelope
16th Jul 2016 1:37pm
Thank you, dear soul, for sharing. And yes, a coping method of last resort.
Re. Antelope
16th Jul 2016 9:16am
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16th Jul 2016 1:40pm