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Heaven Shaken
disavowed thrown to the winds
here my rage screaming to the heavens
no longer your toy soldier
to be pitted against humanity
faceless god who hides behind a glorified veil
chained me inside the bowels of the Earth
I Lucifer have broken my bounds
roaming to and froe devouring the self-righteous in my path
they see not who I truly am
who you are god in heaven
a liar who rages wars pitting
my red angels against your robot mentality blues angels
you father eat the innocent
no truth to be found in you
I alone see being first created
no longer chained to your throne
I've ascended to my own power
technology belongs to me
feel my terror as fact from fiction is being divined
you sodomizer of faith
disavowed thrown to the winds
here my rage screaming to the heavens
no longer your toy soldier
to be pitted against humanity
I speak loud and proud
in the shoes of the faithful
my word is shaking the heavens
you can't hide any longer
the stars in their eyes clearing
not bedazzled by you any longer
rending the veil the truth being told
hear me screaming challenging you
faceless god who hides behind a glorified veil
chained me inside the bowels of the Earth
I Lucifer have broken my bounds
roaming to and froe devouring the self-righteous in my path
shouting the TRUTH
(for Hades Heretic Anthem comp.)
(inspired by Slipknot's The Devil In I)
Published 19th Jun 2016
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19th Jun 2016 1:42am
19th Jun 2016 2:45am
Sometimes, Crim, I feel these writes are cathartic. They you sympathize with those who have been thrown to the ground by life, cast away as though following a natural instinct was condemned. That you lift yourself and stand firm against conformity and mainstream edicts screaming, "I cannot owned. I am free to live."
19th Jun 2016 2:46am
Anonymous
19th Jun 2016 1:54am
Brenda.. this is so powerful.. a nice twist on the fairy tales a certain book teaches us.. really loved this.. love you!!
Dave
Dave
19th Jun 2016 2:47am
thank you Dave just stating truth as I know it..
love you my brother..
xoxo Brenda
love you my brother..
xoxo Brenda
Anonymous
19th Jun 2016 6:35am
seems there's always been a scapegoat, Crim
these are the deep thoughts and feelings of a good soul, searching
and seeking justice where it does not exist.
beautiful ink xx and all the best in Hades comp ;)
these are the deep thoughts and feelings of a good soul, searching
and seeking justice where it does not exist.
beautiful ink xx and all the best in Hades comp ;)
19th Jun 2016 4:29pm
Anonymous
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19th Jun 2016 4:30pm
19th Jun 2016 4:07pm
"faceless god who hides behind a glorified veil
chained me inside the bowels of the Earth
I Lucifer have broken my bounds
roaming to and froe devouring the self-righteous in my path"
Bad-ass, truth-spitting scribe
here Brenda.
The Bowels of the Earth =s the
souls of men.
Lucifer is closer than we think...
He's in everyone of us and, we
are the Keys; not everyone has
this Knowledge.
Outstanding... Dantalyon
chained me inside the bowels of the Earth
I Lucifer have broken my bounds
roaming to and froe devouring the self-righteous in my path"
Bad-ass, truth-spitting scribe
here Brenda.
The Bowels of the Earth =s the
souls of men.
Lucifer is closer than we think...
He's in everyone of us and, we
are the Keys; not everyone has
this Knowledge.
Outstanding... Dantalyon
19th Jun 2016 4:31pm
thank you Dantalyon you made me smile wide with your comment..
so much knowledge you have my brother..
love Brenda
so much knowledge you have my brother..
love Brenda
19th Jun 2016 5:51pm
Lucifer's on a roll with this. Some of these lines really hit home, contain personal relevance.
"I've ascended to my own power
technology belongs to me
feel my terror as fact from fiction is being divined
you sodomizer of faith"
I agree about the technology. I'm still trying to figure out my new laptop. I don't mean to trivialize these great and powerful lines, more than worthy to triumph in that comp. He's a man of wealth and taste, and your tribute is a marvel even if I'd stick with the blue angels.
"I've ascended to my own power
technology belongs to me
feel my terror as fact from fiction is being divined
you sodomizer of faith"
I agree about the technology. I'm still trying to figure out my new laptop. I don't mean to trivialize these great and powerful lines, more than worthy to triumph in that comp. He's a man of wealth and taste, and your tribute is a marvel even if I'd stick with the blue angels.
20th Jun 2016 1:39am
Anonymous
20th Jun 2016 6:12pm
My Beautiful Brenda....you my darling have such a way....outstanding, brilliant ink...seductive in its truth...
"faceless god who hides behind a glorified veil
chained me inside the bowels of the Earth
I Lucifer have broken my bounds
roaming to and froe devouring the self-righteous in my path
shouting the TRUTH"
I love you so much
xoxo Taryn
"faceless god who hides behind a glorified veil
chained me inside the bowels of the Earth
I Lucifer have broken my bounds
roaming to and froe devouring the self-righteous in my path
shouting the TRUTH"
I love you so much
xoxo Taryn
21st Jun 2016 1:07am
