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just rambling...
bought a poem
off a guy
on the street,
which wasn't
very good
and I couldn't see
where it was
meant
to be
taking
me...
Written by
dartford
(Paul S...)
Published 13th Jun 2016
| Edited 14th Jun 2016
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Re. just rambling...
14th Jun 2016 00:17am
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14th Jun 2016 00:35am
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14th Jun 2016 1:34am
...giggle...
I love reading your responses to comments almost as much as I enjoy your writing. ☺
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Re. just rambling...
14th Jun 2016 3:36am
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14th Jun 2016 3:38pm
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15th Jun 2016 1:54am
The meter is a tough thing for for peeps to get their heads around... no wait, that was the metre... or was it? Oh hell, I dunno.
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14th Jun 2016 3:43pm
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14th Jun 2016 10:24pm
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Sure you would! It's simple.
Go to the old country store (the one with the new city store front but it's still the old country store) just past the liberty lane bowling alley which is now a CVS on the right. Just across the street from that you'll see where the ice queen milkshake parlor burnt down (all except for the tiara). Just keep going straight until you pass the tree stump remnant from lightening on the right. Just keep going straight and you'll come to an intersection. On your right will be the burger bonanza family restaurant (which I highly recommend if'n ya hungry), on your left will be Dooley automotive auto center. There's a broken statue across the street that pastor pinkley ran into one night late while out "helping" a young lady in distress *winkwink*, and right across from that is the putt putt golf center with the broken giraffe's neck where Ollie Peterson's boy tried to run up it from a skunk he thought was a cat. Let's see, was thaT all the corners of the intersection? Oh, yes. Now just go straight and the pub is on the left up the road a bit.
Go to the old country store (the one with the new city store front but it's still the old country store) just past the liberty lane bowling alley which is now a CVS on the right. Just across the street from that you'll see where the ice queen milkshake parlor burnt down (all except for the tiara). Just keep going straight until you pass the tree stump remnant from lightening on the right. Just keep going straight and you'll come to an intersection. On your right will be the burger bonanza family restaurant (which I highly recommend if'n ya hungry), on your left will be Dooley automotive auto center. There's a broken statue across the street that pastor pinkley ran into one night late while out "helping" a young lady in distress *winkwink*, and right across from that is the putt putt golf center with the broken giraffe's neck where Ollie Peterson's boy tried to run up it from a skunk he thought was a cat. Let's see, was thaT all the corners of the intersection? Oh, yes. Now just go straight and the pub is on the left up the road a bit.
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15th Jun 2016 00:37am
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20th Jun 2016 6:22pm
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20th Jun 2016 10:57pm