fight or fuck

If you were a man I'd maybe agree with your final two lines here. Powerful stuff this, great flow, raw, energetic & grainy or indeed earthy if you like. Fantastic write, cleverly constructed. Might even make good lyrics for a rock song by The Damned or some other devil-worshipping outfit. Well done.

thank you for the great comment and just know though a woman I have a raging hard on for writing..

love Crim

lmfao..I love ya Brenda...I had to bust in there and laugh at the great wit.

Stop the violence I say n lets just fuck, fuck fuck fuck fuck n more fuck...sing lol

lol fuck it is Poe thank you :)

love Crim

Wow Precious Crim.....another side of your imagination that I'm so glad you shared with us......you rocked this.....purple luv & hugs xo :)

thank you beautiful Flower..

love Crim

You are more than that

thank you dearest Kavik :)

love Brenda

Definitely not just another limp dick. You are bare knuckled poetry at it's finest! Another awesome raw poem.

thank you I guess I was wondering at the end of this poem was it effectual..

love Crim

yeah the end of the poem was very effectual to answer your question...had a profound effect on me...lol..thinking about it from so many angles...and then you being a woman and having written the rest of it, and then WHAM...shift gears instantly...brilliantly creative and a big risk to take too cause it will be lost on some but no worries..not the ones that matter:)

Love Michael

Now I have a hard on  
..on my knees, bijizus help me
;)


 this is sooo hot, so so .... hot

I love this seriously, your
brain nucleus is astounding
-

thank you Malady love your enthusiastic comment :)

love Crim

with a choice like that, I'll pass up the fighting.
naked rage is irresistible...

thank you John I like that naked rage ;)

love Crim

Hah! That last stanza threw me for a second or two.
I liked your savagery within the lines of the poem, Brenda.

thank you Jerry sorry I threw you a bit I just couldn't think of a better metaphor for what I was feeling..

love Brenda

Not either or, baby; you fight those you fuck and you fuck those you fight...

thank you kindly indeed we do ;)

love Crim

can i say this ink is fuck-in-remarkable hehe... excellent drop Crim :)

thank you Magic for a fantastic comment..

love Crim

Excellent displacement of pain through words, Crim.
Fight until the last syllable drips from the dry pen.

thank you graciously sage one..

love Crim

Brenda.. brilliant work as always.. you're raw and two-fisted, and always say what needs to be said.. i loved this.. love..




Dave

thank you Dave for making me smile :)

love Brenda

I love when you go 'raw' and wanna brawl. ;)

Where was that picture taken, Crim, if you don't mind me asking? Fascinated with the structure....

thank you lovely Rain it was taken in the California Red Woods :)

love Crim

My Beautiful Brenda...never a limp dick my lovely one....always sporting the sexiest and most delicious female wood for your craft and always done so masterfully....I adore you to the stars and back! Please forgive my tardiness and absence...I will be trying to catch up!

I love you!

xoxo Taryn xoxo

thank you beautiful one I love you so much thank you for putting big smiles on my face :)

love Brenda

seriously Brenda this ROCKS!!...love the twisted ending too about just another limp dick  trying to find a hole.


"as these words fight or fuck within my psyche".......brilliant metaphor...and the fkg hardcore feel to the poem..like yeah bitches I"M BEYOND READY TO GET DOWN..I'M DOING IT!?...

thank you Michael I loved your comment gave me big smiles :)

love Brenda

Bad-fucking-ass hardcore
spill here Brenda.

You are a masteress of breaking
bad.

Tangling with you - I'm betting -
would be both, tough and fun.

But, I say, fighting and fucking
can go hand-in-hand.

  Exhilhirating write... Dantalyon

thank you dearest Dantalyon go hard or go home right?

love Brenda

You're very beautiful Crim ^^

The poem is fantastic as well :-)

thank you graciously DC :)

love Crim

You're writing in a voice I've never heard (or read) from you before Crim, and not only do you fight, you kick ass.  

" bared teeth     
hoping to take a bite of you     
leave you leaking from the side     
     
or am I just another limp dick     
trying to find a hole?"

You're anything but.  Potent lines and quite a pic.  I wouldn't mind dropping by that tree house behind you.    

thank you Sir Crow I'm a little crazy and like to mix it up :)

the pic was taken in the Redwoods on the California/ Oregon border sigh I would love to be there right now myself.. alas back in the dusty valley..

love Crim

wow,great passion and emotion in your writing.

thank you graciously and welcome to du..

love Crim