Locked Out Of Heaven

Interesting perspective. I have often wondered how much pain it brought God when Lucifer fell. I often think he agonizes about wanting Lucifer to come back home and never letting him return. How does any parent whose child goes down the wrong path would lock the doors to their return... great write Brenda!
JJ

thank you JJ I think God has repented of his decision but Lucifer will not enter the gates of heaven with God in charge..

love Brenda

Amazing....what a beautiful twist you put on an ancient tale...gl with the contest Brenda

Love Michael

thank you Michael just thinking out loud with this one..

love Brenda

Precious Crim......you've made my imagination run crazy........such a thought provoking write.......you're amazing.....good luck in the comp.....purple luv & hugs xo :)

thank you lovely Flower you're a precious soul..

love Crim

castaways wondering together on those golden streets.
provocative poetry, Crim...

thank you John yes I'd rather not see those golden streets without him..

love Crim

You have proposed a lot of questions here Brenda and,
given a lot to think about conserning this older than
time itself tragedy.

I myself, think that man himself is also tied-up in this
ancient feud and plays a huge part in the outcome of
it.

  But, I have a lot of thoughts on it and all kinds of
  shit... Great write - Dantalyon

thank you Dantalyon I have a lot of thoughts on this as well.. I believe God wants him in heaven to this day but Lucifer will not submit.. I knew would get this write..

love Brenda

Okay, Brenda, you have woven an unearthly spell in the form of a beseeching,
not quite holy prayer. I can understand and hail this defense of Lucifer,

thank you Jerry for showing Lucifer and this write love..

love Brenda

You have the prodigal son who returned
humble and Lucifer who refuses to submit.
There's a lesson for each of us, Crim,
and you've capture the essence of both
through this.

thank you wise one and in there lies my answer Lucifer to this day isn't locked out of heaven but chooses not to bow or submit..

love Crim

Brenda.. i really loved this.. such an emotional write.. brilliantly done.. love..




Dave

thank you my brother Dave..

love Brenda

"streets of old, streets of gold
are a lonely place to be without you
I shun the heavens to walk by your side"

I loved those lines.

Lucifer, God, heaven and earth makes for powerful poetry. Cool stuff, Crim.

thank you most kindly Mr. Case

love Crim

A wonderful love poem to Lucifer, and I hope he receives it with the grace it deserves.  He can be a tough customer.

"my soul weeps for the loss of him
a millennium at least separated
as he wanders the Earth alone"

You present him as a tragic figure, not a destroyer.  Fine work!

thank you graciously Sir Crow yes I suppose my view of him is a bit romantic..

love Crim

Woooo, omyfuckingdelicate
feelings are feeling everything.  

Woman!  you know..  

I can't ..I can't even tread this  
one

for my rope is thin lol Im all over ..everywhere.
its like not being wanted by  
heaven or hell.  So yeah I get it.


Muwah

- Howlings

thank you lovely Howlings for getting this write..

love Crim

My Beautiful Brenda, how I loved many lines in this write, you easily seduce and capture me within he darkness with one's like this....

"Lucifer my love
we will have our moment
walking the shadows with you
 
streets of old, streets of gold
are a lonely place to be without you
I shun the heavens to walk by your side"

I love you

xoxo Taryn

thank you beautiful one for loving me and my Lucifer writes..

those are my favorite lines too :)

I love you..

xoxo Brenda