cocaine cunt

At first she seems like the perfect girl, but after three months of her constant nagging for more and more attention, the Honeymoon comes to an abrupt end.

Good ink.

thank you Snuggle too true..

love Crim

Temptation's very much a bitch when it comes to coke or meth, once my personal fave.  It's a daily struggle, one you know well.

"hard thing remembering when you're on the curb
the gutter doesn't seem too far to fall"

Love those last two lines!  It's the reverse of Oscar Wilde's way of seeing stars from street level.  Fine work Crim.  Let's blow those lines away...

thank you Sir Crow I will keep picking myself up and trying again..

love Crim

I think 'ballsy' depends on how the author feels before posting. that's to say, titles don't make for a ballsy,  or cuss words etc

bit of a typo on top of the third stanza.

all in though, a grand job translating your feelings

good on you Craic for pointing out my error and encouraging me to in honesty confront myself by posting this thank you..  
   
I see you point in the cussing and the likes it could probably be done without it..  
 
just so much disdain I have for the drug and my own weakness concerning it..  
 
all the while being caught up in it from time to time..  
   
thank you again my friend..  
   
love Crim

the truth from your heart is always going to be good poetry....you are a talented writer & next time  poison comes a calling write about it instead of taking it....did you read Basketball Diaries yet ?.

I haven't read the Basket Ball Diaries yet though I will make that I do..  
 
thank you for saying so Satan and for the sound advise..  
 
love Brenda

just remember there is someone out there [ me ] that thinks you are worthy of all the good things in life :)

thank you from my heart SS..

love Brenda

She is not that honest as she seems to be. More aggressive I would say. It's more that she will take back from you, than you will take back from her...

"sit the whore on my bed and sniff her cunt ".
I like the way you are using her here. But still, with this verse you give her joy. It's so weird the unconsciousness...

Well, been there for a while. It's just a line that can't be written and she makes you suffer because of her ego. Blow it away and sing happy birthday ;)
Love the title! Good job.

Kiss,
Art

thank you Art you're right she is a dishonest thief that steals little pieces of your life away..

love Crim

Precious Crim......this is very much a heart tugging write......so happy you're still here gracing us with your brilliant ink......you're an inspiration to many.....purple luv & hugs xo :)

thank you dearest Flower I have to remember how much joy I have here among you and creating because I'm off down that path.. my muse is stolen away..

love Crim

My Beautiful Brenda....although I am unable to speak from experience, I feel your struggles with this...we must wipe ourselves down and begin a new day, learning what needs to be different the next time the "bitch comes knockin' ".....I pick you up, incidentally, so far from the gutter and embrace you in my never ending supportive arms...loving you eternally...we say it together...Over with, done with, gone, we begin a new day....

I love you so much

xoxo Taryn

thank you lovely one you touch my heart with such beauty..

feeling your warm embrace..

I love you so much..

xoxo Brenda

Ahhh . . . How well I remember those coke-filled days.
And you are flat out right the damn stuff made me feel
like I was Superman in the flesh,.

thank you Jerry for understanding and relating..

love Brenda

Never had the temptation to even try it. Not that it wasn't all around me. my rule has always been, if I can't control IT, then fuck if I want it controlling me... POETRY whores me out enough... :)

Poe love your strong spirit thank you for giving me a smile with your comment :)

love Crim

it's tough to love dope & tough not to, I guess, Crim.
like the song says, go ask Alice
when she's ten feet tall...

thank you John tricky business this..

love Crim

the mind dear Crimson, the most powerful of tools if properly operated...the power steering it's a bitch though. the clutch/crutch occasionally needed to shift in a gear or two, but respect of purpose.... less evasive within greenery.  choosing a path of enlightenment other than escape.... the ride of awakening.... also less bumpy off road.

lots of love to you Crim... dkruie

thank you Dkruie wise observation..

good idea sticking to the greenery..

love Crim

This makes me so sad :-(  I wish I could wave a magic wand for you - You are such a magnificent talent I am in awe of your words and your poetry - as a poet you are ten foot tall - I fuckin hate coke, heroin etc, etc, etc - all I can do is send you multiple warm e-hugs and let you know that I recognise just how good you are :-)

please take care of yourself :-)

thank you David for the kind thoughts.. yes these drugs are a real plague.. I will do my best my friend..

love Brenda

sweet Brenda - doing your best is all you can do - I will not think less of you if you falter I of all people know how hard life can be - you just gotta keep tryin

Tell ya what If you try your best then so will I - sending you drug protection e-hugs :-)

thank you for the hugs David..

hugs you back tight..

love Brenda

I loved this. Despite your first line, you put it out there. Maybe not ballsy, but eight-ballsy. Maybe when you are high, you are already low...  Anyway. Great write, Crim!

thank you for saying so DPW..

love Crim

That bitch is a false god, it was the only religion I believed in for a time ..

Solid elevation and misery  

Like

Xx

thank you Poet you're right bitch is a false god..

love Brenda

Love everything about this especially the title. No grey areas in your writing and I love that about your poetry. Bare knuckle boxing with words!

thank you Ed for such a great comment..

love Crim

Ahhh, oh yeaaa

tell that cunty whore you don't
want or need her anymore..
and that she never meant anything
to you. So, no praise can be exalted
when she cums.

I love this ladyloves but she
need to be blown to winds. I
agree with the above beings.

-Howlings

thank you lovely lady..  
 
you're right of course and when I'm in my right mind I know better as I do now..  
 
it just leaves me flat every time..  
 
I will kick it to the curb and not let it kick me..  
 
love Crim

This is one of those poems that makes the reader feel uneasy with feelings of helplessness watching a movie in slow motion.  
There are very few writers here on du who can write about the raw truth in such a way that they invite the readers in to witness every detail and emotion and you're one of them Brenda.  It's not easy, I know it because i can't do it which makes me respect your ink greatly.

thank you dearest Rina for the kindest of comments..  
 
this poem was really hard to write..  
 
being honest with one's self let alone others isn't easy..  
 
love Brenda

I have a mirror like that one...<3 dont be too hard on yourself, love. Life is tough no matter what we all have demons....<3

thank you for your kindness beautiful lady..

love Crim

Brenda.. demons will always walk amongst us.. the vices of addiction are so hard to deal with.. that everyday fight is tiring.. and the whispers never fade completely.. but i know you'll continue to fight.. i know this write had to be difficult for you.. but it's truly a brilliant ink.. love you always..



Dave

thank you Dave I will indeed continue the fight..

love Brenda

The gutter so close indeed. And so many people young and old die from the garbage of drugs, Terribly sad.    Regards, Robert.  PS:  I do hope that this is your imagination speaking and you are not in that hell yourself.

hello dearest Robert sadly I still need speed to operate properly thank you for the love 💕