Raw Sewage

thank you most graciously..

love Crim

Ah, Miss Crim. . .Vomit to The Bone. . .Anger doesn't even begin to describe this. . .Maddening, is the word!. . .love to you. . .~xo, Devlin.

thank you my Queen over darkness for getting this write..

love Brenda

Kickass goddamn poetry, Crim. Nothing left to
the imagination, and the more gross it gets it
suits me just fine.

thank you Sir yes this write is a bit visceral and bourbon neat..

love Crimsin

My Beautiful Brenda, such fierce in this most darkened right...darkness fueling this fire...watch as I dance around the flames...

I love you so much

Xoxo Taryn

thank you beautiful one we shall dance together around the flame and watch as it burns it down :)

I love you..

xoxo Brenda

Not sure what to make of this... like it... but still floundering a bit  :-/

The last line IS amazing though...

I guess it's a bit of shock poetry to feel something anything even if it's repulsion..

thank you for digging the last line..

love Crim

This is great, Crim, very raw  indeed.

thank you most graciously my Darkest Lord Hades..

in perpetual darkness Crimsin

thank you graciously lovely lady..

love Crim

I got the check for dinner then what ?

far as our dark imaginations take us ;)

love Crim

Raw raw raw!!!! Like torn flesh hanging on the bone. Made my morning! Glad I opened this this

thank you graciously Ed you made my morning with your response to this write..

love Crim

Ain't seen nothing like this since the "two girls and a cup" video. However, I will be back for more of your dark offerings.
You're like an upgraded gene splice of Poe, Dickinson, and an evil Marilyn Manson or Ozzie, with a little high ass Amy Winehouse for flavor. Only Richard Laymon or Jack Ketchum come close.
Bet Freddy has nightmares of you
I like. And I will be back

never seen that video and don't expect I will lol..

honored to be compared to such greats thank you graciously Sir :)

love Crimsin

I like your perverted thoughts.

thank you kindly..

love Crim

Rough stuff Crim, and beautifully written.

" feed this cunt bitch        
your most vile thoughts        
I promise to leave you cold"

Kind of reminds me of the "sin eaters" of the middle ages but you might just swallow vile thinkers whole.  Justice would prevail.  Loved this!        

thank you Sir Crow for showing love to this write..

love Crim

straight, no chaser.
we are all in love w/the burn.
brutal poetry, Crim...

thank you John yes this brand of liquor was a bit hard to swallow..

love Crim

Brenda, love the rawness.. it's like punk music, full of attitude.. and punches you in the throat.. way to get your raw on.. loved this.. love..



Dave

thank you Dave love your description of this write :)

love Brenda

you really know how to write a poem with a punch - I read it allowed - it reeks of violence and dark desire - it is so well written, I want more :-)

thank you graciously David I will do my best..

love Brenda

attraction/ repulsion is my favourite dichotomy

but saying that there is something coming through in newer work of yours that a pure gore fest doesn't have ... but... but i do love a gore fest

thank you Anna I wanted you to know in part it's your presence that encourages me to let the darkness out once again...

so what I'm saying is you're deeply appreciated...

love Brenda