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State of Arousal
Voice light with constricted airflow to her trachea , that air he's consuming out of her
Head dizzy with pure desire
Eyes dilated, low and hazy
Muscles relaxed facially
Breathing labored , steady pace
Chest rises and falls slowly , so slowly
Nipples harden like Hershey Kisses, unwrapped chocolate tickling your fancy, probing your tongue causing your mouth to water with hunger
Belly tight and firm
The core of me is burning
Her lips, giving way to creamy talk
Waiting to be probed, touched, licked, sucked
Attended to ; I'm needing that reinforcing love
Love that goes hard, hard enough to cut through steel
And push, push, and push
To explore those spots,
Those beautiful places
The ones that give way to beautiful faces
Made from loves paces
Of how your hardness intrudes to make love offerings
Sincerity and Passion in the drive of his hips
Desire and Love possessing his kiss
Pelvis dominantly collapsing and hugging into mine
Hugging in to mine
And I'm starving to have you stay there and feed
Please let your soul
And pieces of your life into me
Slowly
So that I may
Continue to contaminate your whole existence
Haunting you daily
Making you
Making you
Need me
Head dizzy with pure desire
Eyes dilated, low and hazy
Muscles relaxed facially
Breathing labored , steady pace
Chest rises and falls slowly , so slowly
Nipples harden like Hershey Kisses, unwrapped chocolate tickling your fancy, probing your tongue causing your mouth to water with hunger
Belly tight and firm
The core of me is burning
Her lips, giving way to creamy talk
Waiting to be probed, touched, licked, sucked
Attended to ; I'm needing that reinforcing love
Love that goes hard, hard enough to cut through steel
And push, push, and push
To explore those spots,
Those beautiful places
The ones that give way to beautiful faces
Made from loves paces
Of how your hardness intrudes to make love offerings
Sincerity and Passion in the drive of his hips
Desire and Love possessing his kiss
Pelvis dominantly collapsing and hugging into mine
Hugging in to mine
And I'm starving to have you stay there and feed
Please let your soul
And pieces of your life into me
Slowly
So that I may
Continue to contaminate your whole existence
Haunting you daily
Making you
Making you
Need me
Published 8th May 2016
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8th May 2016 2:12pm
8th May 2016 5:18pm
Ted,
Your comments are always most appreciated! I was a bit shaky on that aspect but I decided to keep it like that. Thank you so much for your kind words!
Your comments are always most appreciated! I was a bit shaky on that aspect but I decided to keep it like that. Thank you so much for your kind words!
8th May 2016 5:31pm
What it does is start the piece from a more remote position and then take it to a personal intensity that can't be denied
8th May 2016 9:52pm
Ahhhh, See.. I didn't even think of it like that! But I can now, so I thank you again!
10th May 2016 2:18am
State of Arousal, should have an addendum..."to soul blazing inferno!" Lol whew my god this was smoking hott my dear!!! Lush passionate wording, n very vivid n distinct imagery, along with a dizzying dreamy effect made this an easy choice to add to my list... :)
10th May 2016 2:42pm
Aw, I really appreciate those kind words Poe. I'm more than grateful for your feedback and thank you so much for adding this piece to your reading list. Anytime a great writer like yourself leaves praise It's a great feeling!
