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the diviner and the shade
A Collaboration: Magdalena and Alexander Case
beneath a naked crown of hickory
you stood; the diviner, dressed in black
untouched by the shadow of the moon
drawing halos in a bed of snow
that night, the one you watched
slowly burn with your touch, reaching down
you scorched the frozen earth to retrieve me
carefully unsheathed like a pecan husk
my body, my soul, split in two
held together by one—
that night
shape shifting storm clouds
ruptured spleen lightning
heart attack and thunder
mother earth unleashed
heaven felt pointless, and before i could
tell you, you covered my mouth
stealing the words under my breath
you asked me to let you in [remember]
when your chanting lips met my throat
warm spells humming through my pores
your arms curled; tying me with holy vines
static pulsed blue light between heaving chests
bare bones entrapped by divinity
i can make the darkness cry
hold your heart till the tears fall
bowing winter at your feet
untapped, red maple dripped
from your breath—
it set me ablaze
the tremor of my surrender [you felt it too]
whatever black magic you slipped inside
let it take me, find the mysteries you seek
the diviner of the dead
will have his dark angel tonight
languished love rising from the flame
unearthed whispers echoing her name
Written by Magdalena and Alexander Case for the "erotic collaboration*" comp.
beneath a naked crown of hickory
you stood; the diviner, dressed in black
untouched by the shadow of the moon
drawing halos in a bed of snow
that night, the one you watched
slowly burn with your touch, reaching down
you scorched the frozen earth to retrieve me
carefully unsheathed like a pecan husk
my body, my soul, split in two
held together by one—
that night
shape shifting storm clouds
ruptured spleen lightning
heart attack and thunder
mother earth unleashed
heaven felt pointless, and before i could
tell you, you covered my mouth
stealing the words under my breath
you asked me to let you in [remember]
when your chanting lips met my throat
warm spells humming through my pores
your arms curled; tying me with holy vines
static pulsed blue light between heaving chests
bare bones entrapped by divinity
i can make the darkness cry
hold your heart till the tears fall
bowing winter at your feet
untapped, red maple dripped
from your breath—
it set me ablaze
the tremor of my surrender [you felt it too]
whatever black magic you slipped inside
let it take me, find the mysteries you seek
the diviner of the dead
will have his dark angel tonight
languished love rising from the flame
unearthed whispers echoing her name
Written by Magdalena and Alexander Case for the "erotic collaboration*" comp.
Written by
Magdalena
(Spartalena)
Published 27th Mar 2016
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Re. the diviner and the shade
27th Mar 2016 9:27pm
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27th Mar 2016 9:53pm
Re. the diviner and the shade
29th Mar 2016 1:03am
I so hate you Brits.
Why?
Because your so damn smarter then me.
Wonderful collaboration.
Now, but I must ask, "do your significant others know what you two have been up too?
Why?
Because your so damn smarter then me.
Wonderful collaboration.
Now, but I must ask, "do your significant others know what you two have been up too?
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Re: Re. the diviner and the shade
29th Mar 2016 3:07pm
Ah, you flatterer you lol and I'm not saying anything without my lawyer present...
Thank you muchly, most appreciated. :)
Thank you muchly, most appreciated. :)
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29th Mar 2016 6:49am
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Re. the diviner and the shade
13th Apr 2016 2:36pm
Witchy poo I see you 《<⊙>》《<⊙>》lol Magda you're still wowing the the crowds with your beautiful writings!
Red
Red
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Re: Re. the diviner and the shade
13th Apr 2016 9:54pm
Hello Gypsy lady. I don't get out much these days, haha and closed down my old facebook account.
Thank you dear. I hope you're keeping well. :)
Thank you dear. I hope you're keeping well. :)
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15th Apr 2016 1:32pm
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6th Aug 2017 10:13pm
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30th Jun 2016 1:06pm
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Re. the diviner and the shade
Anonymous
6th Aug 2017 9:53pm
oh my gosh!! two of the greatest poetries i know
has a collab together?
just when my palace walls looks like a kingdom of a hoarder lol,
i want to have this piece ;)
has a collab together?
just when my palace walls looks like a kingdom of a hoarder lol,
i want to have this piece ;)
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6th Aug 2017 10:16pm
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Anonymous
6th Aug 2017 10:18pm
the name, hand over the name of it :)
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Re: Re. the diviner and the shade
6th Aug 2017 10:26pm
Haha, it's "Carmen" https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/198390-carmen-magdalena-and-alexander-case/ :)
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Re. the diviner and the shade
23rd Apr 2018 6:10pm
beautiful, but I don't think erotic is the right lable. it seems like romance. its beautiful.
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23rd Apr 2018 9:02pm
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24th Apr 2018 3:15am
no problem. I do really like how you were able to write this, make the point you ment to make and not been vulgar at all in anyway. that's impressive tbh.
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Re. the diviner and the shade
Yesterday 8:16am
Agree with brianthelion, not a vulgarly written piece, favourite verse (invoking a memory to the lover):
you asked me to let you in [remember]
when your chanting lips met my throat
warm spells humming through my pores
your arms curled; tying me with holy vines
static pulsed blue light between heaving chests
bare bones entrapped by divinity
you asked me to let you in [remember]
when your chanting lips met my throat
warm spells humming through my pores
your arms curled; tying me with holy vines
static pulsed blue light between heaving chests
bare bones entrapped by divinity
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