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Permission
May I watch you pleasure yourself
hit the plateau in solo acts
them discard all that imprisons me
much of which resides in my brain
May I watch for subtlety and nuance
while you feast on erotcica's plate
a mental note deeply recorded
what leads you to that most needy state
May I examine your voyeuristic affinities
what you find alluring in watching a man
beyond literary depictions
weak in the knees so you can barely stand
May I present a myriad of scents
to flatter and tease the nose
heightening your expectations
sweet lover your curiosity surely must grow
And finally may I leave with a token
just to verify that all was real
and give hope to the future
that the wisdom gained I can reveal...
hit the plateau in solo acts
them discard all that imprisons me
much of which resides in my brain
May I watch for subtlety and nuance
while you feast on erotcica's plate
a mental note deeply recorded
what leads you to that most needy state
May I examine your voyeuristic affinities
what you find alluring in watching a man
beyond literary depictions
weak in the knees so you can barely stand
May I present a myriad of scents
to flatter and tease the nose
heightening your expectations
sweet lover your curiosity surely must grow
And finally may I leave with a token
just to verify that all was real
and give hope to the future
that the wisdom gained I can reveal...
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Re. Permission
16th Mar 2016 1:52pm
better than just nice. i like the way the vibe seemed to shift from just a freaky voyeur to an involved person with feelings. i know sometimes they are one and the same
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Re: Re. Permission
16th Mar 2016 7:05pm
Thanks buddy. Sometimes the path I start out on with a write bends and curves way too much!
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I think sometimes voyeurism is mangled up with stalking. Just so much that can go on within the brain!
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Anonymous
17th Mar 2016 1:15am
Hey Jazz....what a gentleman you are.......hope she said "yes" to all the above..... enjoyed this sexy write....well done.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. Permission
17th Mar 2016 5:23am
There is no "she", except for inside my mind. As the Temps chimed, "Just My Imagination"
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17th Mar 2016 7:35am
Ahhh, JAZZMANOR, luv ~ :-*
This is quite an impassioned and poignant request you make. You have reminded me of how there is a very particularly pleasurable aspect to watching without touching and to being the one watched, under the right circumstances.
Thank you so for that reminder, luv... ;-*
This is quite an impassioned and poignant request you make. You have reminded me of how there is a very particularly pleasurable aspect to watching without touching and to being the one watched, under the right circumstances.
Thank you so for that reminder, luv... ;-*
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I love that you conditioned it to "under the right circumstances". At least for me there is a huge difference between giving consent to being watched and uninvited onlookers.
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Anonymous
18th Mar 2016 10:16am
How arousing is this.
Can't truly say how
long its been. Since
feeling wanted or
admired
You made me wishful
in my deep yearn.
Can't truly say how
long its been. Since
feeling wanted or
admired
You made me wishful
in my deep yearn.
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Re: Re. Permission
18th Mar 2016 8:04pm
Thanks. This was motivated by a talk my friends had about finding Bliss and longing from a distance.