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Repositioned (Dirty)~
Its those silent seconds when sensual borders tie,
that I yearn for you to bind me down seductively
with your verbs,
securing metaphoric-rope burns around ankles
readying myself for an orgasmic journey.
Your carnal sighs have got me whispering my dirty secrets
Inhaling deeply….
the apex of convulsive climax salaciously pursued.
Not caring mathematically the time it takes you to
turn my dry straight-mane into wet hair,
when you add those spanks that have me erotically-
screaming, “Baby, right….there!”
Alter my stance like a bitch unearthing her bone,
palm sunk in the arch of my back while you lustfully rip it.
Forced from my risqué deepness and spewed
perfectly out while you passionately hit it.
Expecting you to release every bead from my…
syrupy essence, with your ghost thickness-
leisurely exploring intimate places,
pause….
and let pleasure resonate in designated spaces
causing the dip in my hips to shift due north,
when you bend me just a little harder,
then flip me forcefully to positional kneel
so my lips can push you a little farther.
Slurping my saccharine-frost off your pompous pride
simmering on that weak-spot, gently sucking the
tip of your mind,
slight brush of teeth, tongue gymnastically folds….
slips, slides under and around
looking up, with hunger in my almond browns
solidifying there’s no denying that my lips.…
were purposely made to enjoy this.
Groans conjugate with moans, echoing aphrodisiac-tic tones
discharging odoriferous highs,
on drenched breasts and ripe nest that plea for…..
ejaculated offerings.
Rain~
Written by
rain1courtel
(RainC)
Published 3rd Feb 2016
| Edited 1st Apr 2016
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Re. Repositioned (Dirty)~
3rd Feb 2016 11:13pm
Good god Rain you write wonderfully erotic poetry. Reading this you made me want to spank and be spanked.
Lustful, lyrical and lovely write full of burning yearning!
Smokin' baby just smokin'
Lustful, lyrical and lovely write full of burning yearning!
Smokin' baby just smokin'
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Re: Re. Repositioned (Dirty)~
8th Feb 2016 7:47pm
Lol… bend over…I can give a good spanking tony! Thank you for such a nice comment, my funnyman! Appreciate ya! :)
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Re: Re. Repositioned (Dirty)~
8th Feb 2016 7:51pm
Love, love, love this response! You should know that you are a pro at #makingwomenwetandmenhardwithprintthatmakesusallwanttofuck… ;) .... just sayin’!
“I could just simply eat you up!” <---my mind went there, took it to another level! lol…. forgive me!
So much respect for you young lady! Thank you Sonsista and adore that you’re keeping her….xo
“I could just simply eat you up!” <---my mind went there, took it to another level! lol…. forgive me!
So much respect for you young lady! Thank you Sonsista and adore that you’re keeping her….xo
Re. Repositioned (Dirty)~
Ms Rain,
You have left me breathless and in awe. So beautifully written and brought to life by such colorful language. Truly a work of erotic art.
I am so exhausted and overwhelmed at just the read.
You are certainly a talented lady.
This was such a delicious delivery.
Keith
You have left me breathless and in awe. So beautifully written and brought to life by such colorful language. Truly a work of erotic art.
I am so exhausted and overwhelmed at just the read.
You are certainly a talented lady.
This was such a delicious delivery.
Keith
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Re: Re. Repositioned (Dirty)~
8th Feb 2016 10:03pm
Keith, I respect the fact you speak of how physically and mentally some of my ink moves you. It truly is a huge compliment when a reader tells you that your erotic ink ‘strained’ them, or sad ink made them cry, or love ink broke their hearts etc…. it’s the ultimate praise,… at least for me. :) Thank you so much and I’m pleased you decided to take her home….
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Re: Re. Repositioned (Dirty)~
8th Feb 2016 10:09pm
Wally, thank you kind sir! I love that you enjoyed that line. I actually started to remove it, felt it didn’t flow correctly, but I liked where my mind was going so…. ;) Love your reply, very kind to say. Pen love~
Re. Repositioned (Dirty)~
4th Feb 2016 4:44am
If anyone thought I exaggerated in my poetic comments on your verse, the proof is in your pudding... a rainbow of flavors wash over me with each tasty verb that takes my taste-buds to imaginary lands where lovers lay together, tempting each other beyond chocolate and vanilla, where berries delight in whipped cream dishes with a side of salty nuts and goblets of sweet liqueurs to quench the endless thirst of hungry hearts...
"bind me down seductively
with your verbs,
securing metaphoric-rope burns around ankles
readying myself for an orgasmic journey.
Your carnal sighs have got me whispering my dirty secrets
Inhaling deeply….
the apex of convulsive climax salaciously pursued.
Not caring mathematically the time it takes you to
turn my dry straight-mane into wet hair "
That is damn sexy Rain!!!
jj
"bind me down seductively
with your verbs,
securing metaphoric-rope burns around ankles
readying myself for an orgasmic journey.
Your carnal sighs have got me whispering my dirty secrets
Inhaling deeply….
the apex of convulsive climax salaciously pursued.
Not caring mathematically the time it takes you to
turn my dry straight-mane into wet hair "
That is damn sexy Rain!!!
jj
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Re: Re. Repositioned (Dirty)~
8th Feb 2016 10:11pm
JJ, I told you there was a line from a comment of yours that inspired me, well….. xo I know your comment had a tone of genuine sincere, pure and respectable admiration for my ink, but my mind went (dirty) from one single line. lol…. I’m so in love with your comment, lyrical art at its finest! The supportive-push you give my pen should be bottled up and sold. It’s powerful, always has been! Thanks hun!
Re: Re. Repositioned (Dirty)~
8th Feb 2016 11:58pm
Well I am just going to sit here and absorb all of that with a big smile on my face... :)
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Re. Repositioned (Dirty)~
4th Feb 2016 2:06pm
rope! oh my gawd i love really really good rope & you, lady rain give some fine rope ;)
hempen verses, simply loved
xo
hempen verses, simply loved
xo
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Re: Re. Repositioned (Dirty)~
8th Feb 2016 10:13pm
Lmbo…. Your comment is to die for, dancedoll! So freakin’ adorably sexy, like you!
Thanks pretty-young-thang! (…in my Michael Jackson voice) xoxo
Thanks pretty-young-thang! (…in my Michael Jackson voice) xoxo
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Anonymous
5th Feb 2016 3:18am
Wowzers Sexy Rain......this iiiissss.....um seem to have picked up studdering......mmmmmmm...actually I'm sweating and I'm speechless at the same time.....I think that be gooooooood.......you're so sexy....purple luv your way xo :)
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Re: Re. Repositioned (Dirty)~
8th Feb 2016 10:15pm
Lollol…. a girl does get stoked when she makes folks' speech impaired, due to lust heightened-distress. ;) Happy you felt this ink purple princess…Thanks sweety! xo
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5th Feb 2016 1:05pm
Mmmmmmmmmm....Jessica Holter/The Punnany Poets ain't got nothing on you! His got me yearning my own "repositioning" this morning. Delicious like strong hot coffee.....whatever hath gotten into of late, I hope it willl continue sensually "grind away" at you posterior aft and in flight. #wet.org
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Re: Re. Repositioned (Dirty)~
Haha… I think you’re bias a wee bit Archie, but the compliment makes me blush all the same. :)“.....whatever hath gotten into of late” <--- more like whomever?! ;0 Just exposing my edge, a little. Thank you for the poetic-love and adding her to your library. xo
Re. Repositioned (Dirty)~
6th Feb 2016 1:51am
Definitely down and 'dirty'.....Naughty....Naughty......but......( O, soooo) NNNIIICCCEE!!!
( "...leisurely exploring intimate places,
pause---
and let pleasure resonate in designated spaces..." ) <------- Just these lines, alone, increase my heart rate...and cause my breath to catch......and suddenly, i realize that i might need to lower the thermostat by more than just a few degrees...LOL!
This piece is sensually decadent.....like nibbling dark chocolate and sipping Merlot.......pure bliss.....
Erotic Enjoyment--To Be Sure
( "...leisurely exploring intimate places,
pause---
and let pleasure resonate in designated spaces..." ) <------- Just these lines, alone, increase my heart rate...and cause my breath to catch......and suddenly, i realize that i might need to lower the thermostat by more than just a few degrees...LOL!
This piece is sensually decadent.....like nibbling dark chocolate and sipping Merlot.......pure bliss.....
Erotic Enjoyment--To Be Sure
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Re: Re. Repositioned (Dirty)~
8th Feb 2016 10:38pm
“Just these lines, alone, increase my heart rate...and cause my breath to catch......and suddenly, i realize that i might need to lower the thermostat by more than just a few degrees” <-- trust me, I was warm creating the scene .….lmbo…. I turn myself on writing some of this sensual pieces. ;) So glad you enjoyed DarkE! btw... that chocolate and Merlot sound mighty nice right now...
Re. Repositioned (Dirty)~
6th Feb 2016 8:26pm
Mmmmmm... Such seductively sexy imagery!! Rain-bound hhhmm
I'm thinkin' I could love that vision in '3D' lol... Super smokin hottness!!!
I'm thinkin' I could love that vision in '3D' lol... Super smokin hottness!!!
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Re: Re. Repositioned (Dirty)~
8th Feb 2016 10:40pm
Up close and personal peek-a-boos are always what you lust for, Rich! lmbo..... Please, don’t ever change sir…. ;) Thanks luv….appreciate you!
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6th Feb 2016 9:27pm
Re: Re. Repositioned (Dirty)~
8th Feb 2016 10:41pm
Lmao @ mind ejaculation……. I love giving those… ;) Thanks Dean, your support is always felt… xo
Re. Repositioned (Dirty)~
10th Feb 2016 1:50am
The cool collected Rain
That falls into the shadows
And invites the darkness
To sip the power of her submission
Creates an inferno
Steam that screams pure sex
Sight
Taste
Smell
Touch
All infected
With the pleasures
That is you
Blowing the candle out
Fullfilling many of wishes
That falls into the shadows
And invites the darkness
To sip the power of her submission
Creates an inferno
Steam that screams pure sex
Sight
Taste
Smell
Touch
All infected
With the pleasures
That is you
Blowing the candle out
Fullfilling many of wishes
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Re: Re. Repositioned (Dirty)~
11th Feb 2016 3:15am
G, your comments always seem to bring forth sighs, and those sighs always seem to manifest into mental moans....
....please don't ever stop! ;) Happy you decided to hang on to her.... Thanks luv... xo
....please don't ever stop! ;) Happy you decided to hang on to her.... Thanks luv... xo
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10th Feb 2016 4:39am
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Re. Repositioned (Dirty)~
25th Feb 2016 00:34am
anyone have a clapper....'cause i have fallen and i can't get up.....WOW!!!! this is so very scorchingly hot...you must use a fire-proof pen....loved it
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Re: Re. Repositioned (Dirty)~
...You are a hoot SS! :) I'm super excited my words have 'repositioned' you sprawled out on the floor; missionary style 'dirty' perhaps?! lol...Thank you so much for the ink nod, the subscription and for adding her to your cyber shelf. Looking forward to the poetic-connection...
Re: Re. Repositioned (Dirty)~
25th Feb 2016 3:35am
when i read something i hope others will read i put it on my list....hoping others will find it as enjoyable as i have
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Re. Repositioned (Dirty)~
27th Feb 2016 6:04am
You and your words and the images and memories they evoke. Oh my Gawd! And Dddamn!!
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Re: Re. Repositioned (Dirty)~
27th Feb 2016 7:01am
Hey there 3plus, so happy to see you visiting my lyrical world! Pleased you like it 'dirty'! ;) I'll be checking out your wall painting soon.... (appreciate ya keeping her)