'Senses Senseless'

Hey Rain - palpable poetry  spiced with an edible eroticism - cool writings indeed

hey there Whale, you know.... I didn't even pen this with sensual intentions whatsoever. It was simply me being fond of his mind, actually desiring to know what makes the linguistics of him, both vocabulary and syntax move with such fluidity....but after reading your comment and the rest of the replies, I completely agree, I do see where it could be interpreted as sensual.  
 
....always so pleased to see you passing through my poetic woods....

*shivers up the spine* - another stunning piece - every word is perfectly placed.

...creating shivers up your spine is a grand compliment to any writer/poet! Your reply moves me, Raa!  :)
Thank you so much.....

How delicious words can be as they roll on your tongue and glide across your lips, bouncing back and forth between your teeth and humming in your throat. They fill the air with the scent of your words and tickle my ears with the rhythm of each syllable as I get high on the imagery in your poetry and prose... my mind aburst with colors from witnessing your verse... sometimes the only things that make sense to me are the lines that you compose...
JJ

"How delicious words can be as they roll on your tongue and glide across your lips, bouncing back and forth between your teeth and humming in your throat."<----Oh my! I kid you not, my mind went another direction reading this sentence. Erotic ink comin' soon at a page near you! ;) Seriously though, what a beautiful image of expression you've giving me JJ! You are so incredible at conveying your thoughts and it showed gorgeously in this response. Your last line made me sigh! Thank you fella! Luv's ya!

You have so inspired me I had to turn this into a full blown poem for you Tara...
:)
jj

OMG! Can't wait to read it JJ, I know it will be amazing, be over soon.....xo

What can one say? Cerebral, sensuous and silkily sexy all at one and the same time. You have a beautiful mind my dear Tara.

Yup Tony, as I read over my words, the title, even the image, it’s quite clear that they all carry ‘sensuous and silkily sexy’ connotations. Maybe my mind subconsciously went there, though it was definitely not the intent. Thanks luv…

*sigh*
oh my... could apply this to a few of my fave poets... not quite so eloquently ltm
loved this, lady rain
xo

“not quite so eloquently?!”…. Woman, your poetry exemplify eloquence! You’re the prototype for poetic-perfection that I aim for.... :)  Thank you luv…xo

Spectacular in nature
Brilliant verse

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Spectacular is this day, because you actually stopped by to show me some poet-hospitality! :) It’s been way too long sir…. Great seeing you, Thankya kindly!

What the power of words can achieve.........

Mo Chara chotha`imid...such satin sensuality--to be sure!! In lines of vivid imagery, the (subtle) erotic is so elegantly expressed..... filling the senses to overflowing...as an 'aphrodisiac' for mind, body, and soul....

Rain...i continue to be mesmerized by your incredible ink!!! xo

 “filling the senses to overflowing...as an 'aphrodisiac' for mind, body, and soul....” <--- indeed this sums up the ink. I can never state just how happy I become whenever I see notifications of you. Delighted you enjoyed DarkE.  #Love&Life to you my friend! 

Softly sensual and wonderfully smooth.  An eloquent piece Rain, beautifully written. :) x

Hi pretty lady! Thank you for stopping by with lyrical love, Mag!… adore you! :) xo

Miss Rain, Miss Rain. . .such a yenning write; and to the poet perhaps desired?. . .Hmm. . .If and so; if and not. . .this piece resonates in beauty. . .~xo, Devlin.

 “such a yenning write; and to the poet perhaps desired” <--- just his mind, Dev! :) Nothing more, but then again….the mind is the first thing I usually desire, I'm a sucker for 'intelligence'. This is more of a respect poem. Thank you for the poetic-kiss of support….

Lady Rain.....when I saw that dynamic pic.....I knew this was going to be great and I was not disappointed......I'm lost for words of how touching this was to read......your words though short are so powerful to the soul that read them.....enjoyed as always......leaving purple luv upon your page xo :)

...that pic is sexy, huh? ;)
Aww….your comment is drenched in sweet admiration and I do accept it graciously! Thank you pprincess for the wonderful reply! Xo

Thank you Lady T.! Stimulation of the mind- what more could a girl ask for, eh?! ;)  That pic was quite pleasing to my eyes too! Glad you like it, and…..’don’t be green-jelly-bean.’ :) lol…. Pen love~

I'm at a loss for words. The concision of this piece as a whole leaves it difficult to pick out a favourite line or stanza. The cohesion of concepts within the text was done superbly. I wonder who was the invisible muse behind this piece. Lol... the brilliance here is absolute. Once again, It definitely deserves an RL entry, along with all the rest.

Dala, your comment is much too flattering, so please stop it!! I’m just playin’....I’m just playin’, please continue suga! lol ….and don’t try too hard wondering about my muse, tis why I didn’t drop names, I’ll never kiss and tell… although, he knows. ;)

Hott damn!!! This was silky smooth
n sexy, n a huge compliment to some lucky S.O.B.! lol... Eloquent Perfection!

lol... thank you darlin'! Yeah, he's lucky! I don't muse over just anybody. I'm very select! :)
Lyrical love sent your way Poe!

Senses senseless

Chaotically stirred
From curves
That openly confess
The depth
Of his insertion

Those lips of yours surely undress his desires much the same. Thank you always for letting us feel your words in the fashion that only you can bring

....no, thank you for always being there to hear my words in supportive fashion that brings out the best in my pen. Such a sensual and lovely comment, G! Thank you......xo

thunderous applause, im senseless after reading this, "and I wish I could taste your story beneath my tongue" the entirety of this poem is titanic but that stuck out the most to me, it melts on my mind goddess...

 ;) You do know what to say and how to say it Dean! Thanks luv, and so pleased that you're keeping her... xo

..... :) Thank you Gabe! xo