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The Lusting, a Dream come True
his dream...to fill the void in his empty life
to feel touches and whispering
of love lust affirmation with moans
and satisfy a woman's desire and his own
the streets he walked was always indifferent
no one met his eyes his hot gaze avoided
he was alone lusting for gentle curves
and at smooth thighs all around him
his usual haunt spell emptiness to him
until she looked over and they fell
hook line sinker and the whole barrel
of rump, soon rolling on hay
he was stuck on her
and she was enjoying his line
knees skinned, back scratched
his lusting was fulfilled
his days were spent waiting for nights
his nights were sleepless with delights
she was perpetually affirming
his virility and her desire
his joyous chants within himself
his little self died and went to heaven
the buxom woman of his dream
was riding him like a horse released
days to weeks to months
she pulled him from the door
soon as he stepped home from work
and fed his deepest fantasy
until at last he realised
he was half the man he was
bones showing through his chest
his body complained...no sleep no rest
still she lavished her attention
on his shrinking frame
as long as the little of him
stood to attention as usual
at last on one long joyous spurt
he screamed his final release
and slumbered soon after
never to wake again.
to feel touches and whispering
of love lust affirmation with moans
and satisfy a woman's desire and his own
the streets he walked was always indifferent
no one met his eyes his hot gaze avoided
he was alone lusting for gentle curves
and at smooth thighs all around him
his usual haunt spell emptiness to him
until she looked over and they fell
hook line sinker and the whole barrel
of rump, soon rolling on hay
he was stuck on her
and she was enjoying his line
knees skinned, back scratched
his lusting was fulfilled
his days were spent waiting for nights
his nights were sleepless with delights
she was perpetually affirming
his virility and her desire
his joyous chants within himself
his little self died and went to heaven
the buxom woman of his dream
was riding him like a horse released
days to weeks to months
she pulled him from the door
soon as he stepped home from work
and fed his deepest fantasy
until at last he realised
he was half the man he was
bones showing through his chest
his body complained...no sleep no rest
still she lavished her attention
on his shrinking frame
as long as the little of him
stood to attention as usual
at last on one long joyous spurt
he screamed his final release
and slumbered soon after
never to wake again.
Written by
Grace
(IDryad)
Published 24th Jan 2016
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Re. The Lusting, a Dream come True
24th Jan 2016 1:22am
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24th Jan 2016 4:58pm
Re. The Lusting, a Dream come True
24th Jan 2016 5:58am
What a nice narrative sequential of smooth happy -solace romance !!.
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24th Jan 2016 4:59pm
Re. The Lusting, a Dream come True
24th Jan 2016 6:45am
Wow (Idryad); this was an
captivating and passionate
write!
"until at last he realized
he was half the man he was
bones showing through his chest
his body complained...no sleep no rest"
When I got to this section I
thought, "Oh No," what's wrong
and then, You brought closure.
It, to me, now reads like an bitter-sweet
love-story, where two Lovers were able
to spend one last night of heart-breaking
but blissful Love-making before He
passed-on...
This reminds me of the closing-scene in the
Nicolas Cage movie "Leaving Las Vegas,"
where Elizabeth Shue finally gives it to Him
as He lay dying...
it was an intense scene that brought closure
to an well-acted movie.
Sorry to ramble-on... Pan
captivating and passionate
write!
"until at last he realized
he was half the man he was
bones showing through his chest
his body complained...no sleep no rest"
When I got to this section I
thought, "Oh No," what's wrong
and then, You brought closure.
It, to me, now reads like an bitter-sweet
love-story, where two Lovers were able
to spend one last night of heart-breaking
but blissful Love-making before He
passed-on...
This reminds me of the closing-scene in the
Nicolas Cage movie "Leaving Las Vegas,"
where Elizabeth Shue finally gives it to Him
as He lay dying...
it was an intense scene that brought closure
to an well-acted movie.
Sorry to ramble-on... Pan
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Re: Re. The Lusting, a Dream come True
24th Jan 2016 5:01pm
Hi Pan...honoured to have you drop by and read my humble work...:) and leaving encouraging comments.
Re. The Lusting, a Dream come True
24th Jan 2016 10:10am
This has a haunting vibe - makes one think and makes one pause - nice write. s.o.
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24th Jan 2016 5:02pm
Re. The Lusting, a Dream come True
24th Jan 2016 5:42pm
The connections you make with some people can drain you into nothing... Hot but Thought provoking read...
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25th Jan 2016 10:24am
Re. The Lusting, a Dream come True
26th Jan 2016 1:50am
I can't imagine a more fitting way to pass from this mortal coil. I think of the French expression about "the little death" and see it reflected here. I'm feeling my age, and I can only hope I go out with a bang, or spurt. Loved this Grace!
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Re: Re. The Lusting, a Dream come True
26th Jan 2016 6:54am
Oyes indeed Crowfly, a good way to go as any. A bang or a spurt amounts to the same thing:) thanks or reading me.
Re. The Lusting, a Dream come True
26th Jan 2016 5:12am
A fantastic piece, grace. It encapsulates so many things well. The desire for love, the void thereof. The cautionary tell to always be careful what you wish for, because, you just may receive it. I enjoyed this quite a lot. Thank you for sharing it.
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Re: Re. The Lusting, a Dream come True
26th Jan 2016 6:56am
Theshadow, thank you for reading. Yes some wish may come true and sometime its not always a good thing.:)
Re. The Lusting, a Dream come True
27th Jan 2016 5:19am
....the pursuit of the well-hunted. mmmmm, lust is a rush many are willing to fall inside a drowning pool for. This for me was the perfect passion-play erotique. Very strong sexual undercurrents here. I quite enjoyed bathing inside your words dear. Thinking of a mingling of your words with my own. #wondersfoundinsideherabyss
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Re: Re. The Lusting, a Dream come True
27th Jan 2016 5:53am
Hi MrM. As a master of the erotic, your comments are indeed high praise. Humbled that you liked it. One day I hope to collaborate with you. :) Thank you so much.:)
Re. The Lusting, a Dream come True
8th Feb 2016 3:29am
I really enjoyed your poem, Grace, I'm sorry that's all I have to say, but everyone else already said It
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9th Feb 2016 4:57am