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Ghost Words
If ever you see a sight that reminds
you of me,
either happily jesting or sadly
staring--
If you remember me in a most
sudden way; down a quiet road
walking or a decent conversation
holding ---
It is then you'd know the beginning
of all the words I never said
you of me,
either happily jesting or sadly
staring--
If you remember me in a most
sudden way; down a quiet road
walking or a decent conversation
holding ---
It is then you'd know the beginning
of all the words I never said
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Re. Ghost Words
18th Jan 2016 7:24pm
This is sweet and sad and gives me much to ponder, for such a short piece. So much of what I often want to express to people is unsayable, I can only hope my ghost words get the message across somehow.
Lovely ink, made me think!
Lovely ink, made me think!
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Re. Ghost Words
18th Jan 2016 8:10pm
You said so much with few words, captivated that feeling of things unsaid.
Awesome piece.
W
Awesome piece.
W
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Re. Ghost Words
19th Jan 2016 1:10am
Re. Ghost Words
20th Jan 2016 4:35pm
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22nd Jan 2016 1:33pm
This grotesque'ly
sensual in its nature..
beautiful such a loud
impact
dear touched me deeply ..
-Howlings
sensual in its nature..
beautiful such a loud
impact
dear touched me deeply ..
-Howlings
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Re. Ghost Words
27th Jan 2016 6:27pm
Unsaid words alters silence unheard, like forces alter nature, unseen.
Thank you all for leaving wordprints of encouragement. Glad this was well received
Gratitude.
Thank you all for leaving wordprints of encouragement. Glad this was well received
Gratitude.
Re. Ghost Words
Anonymous
28th Jan 2016 1:44pm
Wow Wanderer.....another simple piece of words that makes the mind intrigued......many times in thoughts or surroundings you will think of a soul and feel them there without words......I have a soul in my heart like that.....he will never know how much he's meant to me....our words are silenced between us again.....luving this xo :)
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Anonymous
29th Jan 2016 5:36pm
That it does my friend and it hurts the most......:(
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Re. Ghost Words
30th Jan 2016 1:11am
there are many languages that require the use of the tongue to convey or the ears to receive...which this vibe so beautifully states. ...
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Re. Ghost Words
25th Jul 2016 00:49am
I read this poem when you first posted it many months back, and it still sticks with me on the reread. You have a way of saying something tremendous with so very little text. Pleasurable read AND reread.
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Re: Re. Ghost Words
25th Jul 2016 4:12am
It is really nice of you to let me know. This is one of my favourite write ups and your appreciation of it melts my heart.
Thanks again dear
Thanks again dear
Re. Ghost Words
Anonymous
9th Aug 2016 6:56pm
These words touch the depths of the heart.
Truly resonating.
I adore this piece 💓
Truly resonating.
I adore this piece 💓
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Re. Ghost Words
12th Jan 2020 2:35am