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Old Year / New Year / F You!
To the fuckers I've offended
the ones I've pained
the buggers
who took me for
Rands and Cents
and the politicians
who fucked my
country
up
The dicks who act like
plastic in window displays
[including the bitch; who steals my days]
To the family of judgment
and the artist
who screwed
my tattoo
up
Happy "Old Year" to you
May 2015 be repeated
fucking consecutively
like
"Ground Hog Day"
[The Movie]
To the rest of the fuckers
with a backbone
and life
Those with truth in their veins
black and white pictures
or videos of a night
Well hello my hunnies
my grannies
my trannies
and fags
Love you I do
Happy "New Year"
may all you wish
in twenty sixteen
come true.
Just,
truer than true.
-x-
Written by
RevolutionAL
(Alistair Plint)
Published 29th Dec 2015
| Edited 30th Dec 2015
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Re. Old Year / New Year / F You!
Anonymous
29th Dec 2015 12:05pm
this is a great piece, I admire how you've composed it.
clever and original, with soul.
have a lovely year.
clever and original, with soul.
have a lovely year.
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Re: Re. Old Year / New Year / F You!
29th Dec 2015 12:15pm
Ahh Miss Moon Dancer
May you have a fucken terrific "New Year"
Fucking Lovely soul you are, you'know!
mwah -x-x-x-
May you have a fucken terrific "New Year"
Fucking Lovely soul you are, you'know!
mwah -x-x-x-
Re: Re. Old Year / New Year / F You!
Anonymous
29th Dec 2015 12:16pm
mwah !!xxxx
thanks :)
thanks :)
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Re. Old Year / New Year / F You!
29th Dec 2015 2:59pm
Awesome!
Happiest of 2016's to you too, Al!
L'chaim, truth, and backbone, my friend!
May they all reign!
Happiest of 2016's to you too, Al!
L'chaim, truth, and backbone, my friend!
May they all reign!
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Re: Re. Old Year / New Year / F You!
29th Dec 2015 11:43pm
yeah love... I sometimes wonder if we put enough valid truth and backbone into 'em... hey?
Thank you for the wishes
may the 2016 be so cool..
I wish that for you
and it's true
...
mwah xxx
Thank you for the wishes
may the 2016 be so cool..
I wish that for you
and it's true
...
mwah xxx
Re. Old Year / New Year / F You!
29th Dec 2015 5:56pm
soooo... you're the creep pressing your face to adult world's blacked out windows lol
al, jou lekker ding! alles van die beste vir 2016
awesome write
xo
al, jou lekker ding! alles van die beste vir 2016
awesome write
xo
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Re: Re. Old Year / New Year / F You!
ek glimlag... en die wereld wa ek is beteken niks...
dankie liefie ek waardee jou woorde
maar...
"awesome" relates to you, and how you fit into the second part of that poem.. xxx
I thought you and the "mom" syndrome would find some kinda space here... where do you think I found the inspiration...?
love at you my Katja
xxx
dankie liefie ek waardee jou woorde
maar...
"awesome" relates to you, and how you fit into the second part of that poem.. xxx
I thought you and the "mom" syndrome would find some kinda space here... where do you think I found the inspiration...?
love at you my Katja
xxx
Re. Old Year / New Year / F You!
29th Dec 2015 6:51pm
not sure if I fall
into either category,
but what the hell..:)
happy you near...
into either category,
but what the hell..:)
happy you near...
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Re: Re. Old Year / New Year / F You!
29th Dec 2015 11:50pm
Oh dude...
Your writes are so peppered with truth, no one else would dare question categories other than to say...
"I'm a fuck load better off having read your work than I was without it"
Love at you
Thanks Dartford
You Rock man
Your writes are so peppered with truth, no one else would dare question categories other than to say...
"I'm a fuck load better off having read your work than I was without it"
Love at you
Thanks Dartford
You Rock man
Re. Old Year / New Year / F You!
29th Dec 2015 9:58pm
I loved this great "kick-ass" poem Al. Bloody well done mate (Fuck 'em all bar one and he can fuck himself)
Happy New Year to you. :-)
Happy New Year to you. :-)
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Re: Re. Old Year / New Year / F You!
29th Dec 2015 11:52pm
Thanks Mr cat...
Yeah let em all go and fuck em...
lets spend 2016 on the shit that matters
Love you on so many levels... especially the Happy New year part..
Hope you love it!
x-x-x-
Yeah let em all go and fuck em...
lets spend 2016 on the shit that matters
Love you on so many levels... especially the Happy New year part..
Hope you love it!
x-x-x-
Re. Old Year / New Year / F You!
30th Dec 2015 6:39am
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4th Jan 2016 7:00am
Re. Old Year / New Year / F You!
6th Jan 2016 11:27am
my sediments eXactly........
best NYeer poom I done seen in many a NYeer
best NYeer poom I done seen in many a NYeer
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7th Jan 2016 9:33am
Re. Old Year / New Year / F You!
12th Jan 2016 12:18pm
Raw and real can't ask for anything better AL
enjoyed this soulful write ")
Happy Old Year, Happy New Year aww hell,,,,
Happy Life!
Here is hoping u have love, peace and happiness all year long!
Love
Zazzles xo
enjoyed this soulful write ")
Happy Old Year, Happy New Year aww hell,,,,
Happy Life!
Here is hoping u have love, peace and happiness all year long!
Love
Zazzles xo
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Re: Re. Old Year / New Year / F You!
19th Feb 2016 10:18am
Thank you Miss Zazzles
Your comments are always gold on the page
much love
-x-x-x-
Your comments are always gold on the page
much love
-x-x-x-
Re. Old Year / New Year / F You!
11th Feb 2016 1:05pm
Alistair, luv ~ :-*
I'm adoring this (and the two following it!) I figured I'd better stop and write and then write again, luv, for you've begun the year with panache and truth and joie de vivre ~ vibrant life living... :-*
I'm doing my best to emulate your example, luv, no matter what obstacles I face.
I cannot thank you enough for this poetic manifesto right here. You bleed hope...:-*
Thank. You.
I'm adoring this (and the two following it!) I figured I'd better stop and write and then write again, luv, for you've begun the year with panache and truth and joie de vivre ~ vibrant life living... :-*
I'm doing my best to emulate your example, luv, no matter what obstacles I face.
I cannot thank you enough for this poetic manifesto right here. You bleed hope...:-*
Thank. You.
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19th Feb 2016 10:18am