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Kill me why don't ya?
You stole my heart
and i let you go
now i want nothing to do with you
but there's an emotions i've never felt before.....
could it be....
that i love you?
No because i'm dead
you killed me with your lies
i've tried so hard
to ignore your pleas
to drown out your cries
but its not working
i've been begged to not kill myself
but who needs suicide,
when i've got you?
and i let you go
now i want nothing to do with you
but there's an emotions i've never felt before.....
could it be....
that i love you?
No because i'm dead
you killed me with your lies
i've tried so hard
to ignore your pleas
to drown out your cries
but its not working
i've been begged to not kill myself
but who needs suicide,
when i've got you?
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21st Jun 2011 00:38am
no your not,you have a guy who "appreciates" you,why would you care about a broken boy?
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21st Jun 2011 00:40am
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21st Jun 2011 00:53am
maybe? maybe he'll kill himself.maybe he'll slit an artery,maybe he'll take you back.....just maybe
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21st Jun 2011 1:51am
Fine it's not a maybe it's a deffinate that I care more about you than anything else.
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21st Jun 2011 2:22am
but why do you care so much?! i mean hell,i hate myself and everybody either hates or loves me >.
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21st Jun 2011 2:32pm
good poem, sad meaning
21st Jun 2011 11:25am
bro trust me i know this feeling. at least she's talking trying to apologize. 3 months and my ex never said a word to this day. threw my jewelry out. and yeah, i loved her. but it will pass. whether you get back together or you two move on and stay close, the pain will pass...believe me on that one. love ya bro
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re: good poem, sad meaning
21st Jun 2011 2:32pm