Beneath Spirit Lust

"Lips ravenous.. tongues tangling  
~held cruciformed by his knee~"

I felt like this had the momentum of a boulder going down a hill, where it starts off with a few rolls, then picks up speed on the way down until it hits the water making a nice splash. You have beautiful words and how you have an angle of seeing things that few are privileged. Excellent!

Oh...and I love those two lines.

hihi's major darlin.. had to kick start the momentum of muse to boulder & vera glad the
splash was felt! always appreciate your visits and thoughts, sweet man.. tyty
my witchy thankins abound ;)
curtsies low,
~d

lovely d~ how I've missed your ravishing words ;)

love these luscious lines..

"Lips ravenous.. tongues tangling  
~held cruciformed by his knee~
swirling fingers in blushed heat,
palm soaked on passion..  offering..  
low carnal touches .. whispered needs.."

you have such a way about you lovely lady that I adore..

sexy, magical inking..

love Brenda

I love you so much fer taking time on me lovely Brenda..
your words always bring my vixen humors to a grin.. mwahs & ty's..
shinin sparkle on your day ladyluv!
~d

Beautifully written Tanya!  It has a stream-of-subconscious quality, the dream of a sorceress, and an erotic one at that:

" Lips ravenous.. tongues tangling  
~held cruciformed by his knee~
swirling fingers in blushed heat,
palm soaked on passion..  offering..  
low carnal touches .. whispered needs."

To say this flows is putting it mildly.  This is music when read aloud.

"..I lay earthly.. charmed and drowning,  
lunette bodies pressing tight..  
..beneath black silken mysteries
that burn .. within his eyes .."

This is charming in every sense.  "Black silken mysteries" like midnight lace.  Into the list "Lust" goes!  
 

awwes of thanx fer reading this aloud, T2! *that alone is humbling, yknw! [tyty..]
cherish you everly fer supporting my tardy muse around here misters and the shiny
of your comment leaves me in smile ;)
much luvins & a bewitched curtsy, sweet Crow..
~T[1]

Beautiful thoughts put into grand words for the reader to read
and wonder in awe at this poems super intense words to ingest.

"~eros leaking songs of pain~  
bare shapes of sway darkly entwine..
..rolling bruises on grass stains."

That last line just grabbed me and
would not let me go. I know I will
think about it for days.

Be well, dark, be well.

My vernacular adores you, Jerrydears, fer taking time! .. and I must giggle a bit about that
last line making an impression, was curious as to how it wud be received, spirit willing and all. lol. ;)
appreciate your presence sweetie & wish smiles on your day!
luvin respect,
~d

Absolutely love it

my sweetest thanx fer taking time mistersK!
very much appreciate your presence & lovely comment ;)
shiny wishes to you,
~d

Another darkly beautiful write dark sigh. Wonderful write poetess:)

Absolutely awesome to say hello my dear friend, ty so much fer always taking time!
I do hope life is spoiling you..;)
poetess in humble curtsy,
~d

I missed you and your ink so. What a beautiful way to return home. Simply beautiful erotic write. So many hot delicious lines in this write. Would not be able to decide on fav. Favorite thing bout it is; you are back.

Love
Keith

Graciously thanking you for just being here, dear Keith.. you humble this witch immensely with
your presence, and to be missed, even sweeter. ;) It is good to see you and I shall endeavor
to catch up to your busier-than-mine pen..;) *grins n winx
luvin respects misters,[ty]
~d

*darkly gigglin* at the thoughts you evoke SissyT ODFK.. causing smiles at those CS's asquirmin'--
a yummy vivid, you *do know..  um, yesss.
oh wait-- ..is it- 'devious snickers' or 'sultry cackles'..-that follow the dark giggle..? hmpft, I forget.. ;)

mwahs b'cuz you're in my head as always with lines.. kissing your lil faerie wings fer stoppin
in- my muse soaks up sissy-type lovins x[xx] special! ..tyty, sweetest Taryn of All..
my witchly bang in curtsied luvs,
~d of TnT

it's a rich exotic language upon which your dream extrapolates;
elegant romance gloried in nightshine...

I shall firstly thank you for your beautiful verse SirJ, and always, for your presence..
~most humbled, misters & wishing you a stellar eve! ;)
~d

Darkly sensual n very intense...
seemed equal parts a reality n dream to me, either way though
the imagery you depicted was powerful my Dark One! :)

sweet hello's dearest.. a most kick arse comment, truly! I love the way you put it, as reality
then dream.. exactly perfect! thankins always, for your presence ;)
humble luvin curtsies,
~d

holy fuck
fuck [&] holy
i'd like to press my face to your altar & see if i find religion there ltm
this is just darkly sensual, sissy of sultry pens...
"bare shapes of sway darkly entwine..
..rolling bruises on grass stains..
shadowed skins glow soft pink nightshine,
reflecting raw moon lovebites.."
^^^^^
yummy ouchies. please & yes.
... have missed your way with words
ninja kitty pounce & snuggle attacks!!!!!!!!
xoxoxox

Incredible. I felt each word absorbing into my skin, if you permit lovely lady may I use your words as inspiration for my own?

Blessings (both bright and dark)

Hell yess!! to all & this verse  
right before mine eyes :

"Harnessing arcanum twilight,    
~eros leaking songs of pain~    
bare shapes of sway darkly entwine..  
..rolling bruises on grass stains..    
shadowed skins glow soft pink nightshine,  
reflecting raw moon lovebites..  
..I lay earthly.. charmed and drowning,    
lunette bodies pressing tight..    
..beneath black silken mysteries  
that burn .. within his eyes ..   "


My Sweet Gods.... spine turning you  
send me my love..  

-Howlings