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Where's the Air ?
flat tire
over flow in the loo
grey skies too
all on a monday
wtf
wish i could
head back to bed
close my eyes
and dream away
turquoise skies
puffy clouds
and bright sunshine
while i ride on my trusty unicorn
munching on chewy caramel turtles...
over flow in the loo
grey skies too
all on a monday
wtf
wish i could
head back to bed
close my eyes
and dream away
turquoise skies
puffy clouds
and bright sunshine
while i ride on my trusty unicorn
munching on chewy caramel turtles...
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Re. Where's the Air ?
5th Oct 2015 5:01pm
Stuff happens that makes life hard...but stuff happens to make happy too...good read Hashman.
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5th Oct 2015 9:33pm
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5th Oct 2015 5:22pm
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5th Oct 2015 9:35pm
Re. Where's the Air ?
My friend.....
Indeed--Life doesn't always deal us a winning hand, and somehow, it invariably seems as if Monday's are especially known for making our existence difficult!
However, i think i would really enjoy visiting your fantasy realm ! I mean, being the chocolate addict that i am, any day that involves satisfying my insatiable craving is like a dream come true!! (....And turtles just happen to be one of my favs , too !! )
Your imaginative ink brought me welcome smiles!!! xo
Indeed--Life doesn't always deal us a winning hand, and somehow, it invariably seems as if Monday's are especially known for making our existence difficult!
However, i think i would really enjoy visiting your fantasy realm ! I mean, being the chocolate addict that i am, any day that involves satisfying my insatiable craving is like a dream come true!! (....And turtles just happen to be one of my favs , too !! )
Your imaginative ink brought me welcome smiles!!! xo
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5th Oct 2015 9:37pm
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5th Oct 2015 8:22pm
This reminds me of the irony of parents getting children out of bed and then sending to that same room when they get in trouble.
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5th Oct 2015 9:42pm
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6th Oct 2015 8:34am
brings a smile to my face Hashman...you on a unicorn...hmmm, forget the caramel turtles, i think luscious pink fairy floss is the go...not sure what you call it over there :)
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8th Oct 2015 1:02am
yummy :) ha pink fairy floss,cool name we call it cotton candy over here (keep smiling)
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14th Dec 2015 5:03pm
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Anonymous
25th Dec 2015 4:13am
Merry Christmas Hash......luvin this write that describes most of my days......well stated frustration......enjoyed. Xo
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Re. Where's the Air ?
19th Mar 2017 5:45pm
It's always the best thing to take a unicorn for a ride when shit happens.
Have fun, you both!
I like your poem. It's tragic though funny and positive!
Ride on!
Have fun, you both!
I like your poem. It's tragic though funny and positive!
Ride on!
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26th Mar 2017 1:11pm
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3rd May 2017 9:56pm
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10th Oct 2017 1:10pm
hah !!
i think we've all been there at one time or another - but -
i dont think anybody has expressed those kind of days quite so well
Onward Unicorns & Caramel Turtles !!
Thanks for the Laugh !!
jonni
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Trusty Unicorn huh? All I see is a rusty fill valve.
Say something then!
Hasheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeesh!!!!!
Say something then!
Hasheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeesh!!!!!
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Re. Where's the Air ?
13th May 2019 9:02pm
I enjoyed this poem very much, especially the way you ended it. Very clever piece! Well done! It's so good reading you again.
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Re. Where's the Air ?
13th May 2019 9:04pm
I meant to tell you that I loved your poem's title. It's catchy and it drew me in.
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Re. Where's the Air ?
8th Dec 2019 12:39pm
Liked your creativity and playfulness in this one. Some days your imagination need take you from your current situation, a vacation of the mind. Much enjoyed your poem :)
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