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Sanguinem Luna
under the blood moon
I cleanse myself
by her sangria light
dancing in the shadows
cast by nightshade
bedeviled pirouetting ballerina
I cast my pain away
like cheap Mardi Gras beads
an offering to Luna Mother
grand pliés over the gaping maw of oblivion
gratifying fleshy, carnal desires
to the feasting eyes in the darkness
macabrely dressed and made up
appeasing the devil
that rips at my being
fucking and dancing
under the full moon
like a woman possessed
shedding my clothing
biting my lip until
it runs crimson
trickling down my heaving breasts
smearing it down to my cunt
where I make my final orgasmic
offering to the beast
that growls in my inner sanctum
until appeased by my sacrifice
dancing and fucking till dawn
I lie spent amongst the clover and heather
reborn by Luna's kiss
Published 28th Sep 2015
| Edited 29th Sep 2015
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28th Sep 2015 4:58pm
Your creamy flesh looks delicious 'neath the light of the Blood Moon! Hungry eyes are watching from the shadows...waiting to savor upon your essence.. Growls, blue angel
29th Sep 2015 1:31pm
thank you lovely Angel for making me giggle and the beautiful comment :)
with love Crim
with love Crim
28th Sep 2015 5:01pm
Oh Crim, stirred up into the need to dance under blood moon. Naked under its shine blood from mouth that calls out to it, blood down body over wondrous curvy woman to her own shine.
Stirred primal and naked mihself last night. Fine tribute to our mother of tides and womanly desire.
Awesome ink
💋Jennifer
Stirred primal and naked mihself last night. Fine tribute to our mother of tides and womanly desire.
Awesome ink
💋Jennifer
29th Sep 2015 1:33pm
thank you Jennifer for such a great comment yes those primal urges ;)
love Brenda
love Brenda
28th Sep 2015 5:01pm
"offering to the beast
that growls in my inner sanctum
until appeased by my sacrifice"
it's a insatiable beast, and the feedings are irresistible. passionate, sinful, magical, and mystical. one of the finest pieces i've read thus far.
that growls in my inner sanctum
until appeased by my sacrifice"
it's a insatiable beast, and the feedings are irresistible. passionate, sinful, magical, and mystical. one of the finest pieces i've read thus far.
29th Sep 2015 1:34pm
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28th Sep 2015 6:20pm
This is an exhilarating read Crim. You make it easy to visualize you dancing like an erotic dervish under the bleeding moon. I just wish I'd read this before the eclipse last night. It would have added to the experience. Still, just the thing to be rid of the Monday morning blahs. Thanks Crim!
29th Sep 2015 1:36pm
thank you Sir Crow for enjoying this write and the lovely comments :)
with love Crim
with love Crim
Anonymous
28th Sep 2015 8:52pm
Miss Crim. . .had the pleasure of seeing this "blood moon" last night. . .wonder if the witches came out to play?. . .Excellent ink, as always. . .xo, Devlin;)
29th Sep 2015 1:38pm
thank you Lady Devlin for the kind comment I think demon and witches alike were about :)
with love Crimsin
with love Crimsin
Anonymous
28th Sep 2015 10:42pm
Crim,
Of all the sacrifices to appease the beast, this goes down as a favorite!
Favorite line: "I cast my pain away
like cheap Mardi Gras beads"
Enjoyed the dance
tornado
Of all the sacrifices to appease the beast, this goes down as a favorite!
Favorite line: "I cast my pain away
like cheap Mardi Gras beads"
Enjoyed the dance
tornado
29th Sep 2015 1:39pm
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29th Sep 2015 1:40pm
I really love the intensity...
but gosh, I thought we were just
going for a quiet drink...
seriously, though, it's a very
wildly powerful piece...
but gosh, I thought we were just
going for a quiet drink...
seriously, though, it's a very
wildly powerful piece...
29th Sep 2015 1:41pm
29th Sep 2015 00:08am
Strangely, I did not see the moon. But I'm sure you dancing beneath it would have been quite a sight. Nice write.
29th Sep 2015 1:42pm
29th Sep 2015 2:09am
Crimsin. This was a wild enjoyable write
with sexy naughty images. To think
all I was able to see was a cloudy
sky. I really enjoyed, you are so skilled at your craft. ENJOYED
Keith
with sexy naughty images. To think
all I was able to see was a cloudy
sky. I really enjoyed, you are so skilled at your craft. ENJOYED
Keith
29th Sep 2015 1:43pm
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29th Sep 2015 1:47pm
beautiful one so pleased to have made you creamy with this write :)
you made my week with your comment..
I love you..
xoxo Brenda
you made my week with your comment..
I love you..
xoxo Brenda
29th Sep 2015 5:41am
good stuff, Miss
some wonderful word choice and phrases and a good all round read from start to finish
some wonderful word choice and phrases and a good all round read from start to finish
29th Sep 2015 1:48pm
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29th Sep 2015 9:37am
Wicked Crim I loved this ...
You always write with raw and vivid imagery...
Excellent scribe my friend!
((((((((((Crim)))))))))))))))
Zazzles xoxoxox
You always write with raw and vivid imagery...
Excellent scribe my friend!
((((((((((Crim)))))))))))))))
Zazzles xoxoxox
29th Sep 2015 1:50pm
29th Sep 2015 1:57pm
Mmmmm you n that creamy pussy gets me every damn time! lol
Yummy, more please! lol
Yummy, more please! lol
29th Sep 2015 5:25pm
Anonymous
29th Sep 2015 4:08pm
Brenda, this is a very luscious write.. beautifully done.. with love..
Dave
Dave
29th Sep 2015 5:26pm
30th Sep 2015 4:12pm
I didn't get to see the blood moon but your writing took my imagination to better places... beautifully and sensually done :)
30th Sep 2015 8:31pm
30th Sep 2015 4:52pm
The blood moon's erotic aroma smeared with desire and animalistic lust. If this was dark, its because it was at night, otherwise, it appealed to my personal brand of erotica. Nicely written, Crim.
30th Sep 2015 8:32pm
