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Scribed Lust
tender ivory skin
ancient hieroglyphs
inked on my back
from the base of my neck
to the top of my heart shaped bum
stories told that only the divine can decipher
our tale is written in the stars
shining light on my silken flesh
purging me of the pain
that makes me curl within myself
spine protruding accentuating text
made for gods alone to understand
I can't see my way out
of the darkness
stumbling on the stepping stones
winding my way down the path to your genius
reading you hoping to enter your world
you let me have a glimpse
which suffices for a moment
hungry for more, anorexic
needing the meat of your verse
which stains my mind
enters my blood stream
feeds my intellect
my body supple
scribe out your desire
on my flesh
that only the divine can see
not for prying eyes
written in code
inking out my thoughts
may they find their way
across the ocean to your waiting ears
Published 26th Sep 2015
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26th Sep 2015 3:25am
Brenda, this is brilliance divine.. i'm blown away, at how much passion you pack in your writes.. i mean you literally bleed the ink, that unlocks codes, and gets to the heart of all matter.. simply beautiful to read your offerings.. into the list it goes.. with love....
Dave
Dave
26th Sep 2015 4:42pm
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26th Sep 2015 3:39am
Crim, my lovely, you continue to astound me. From twisted fantasies in the deviant's mind to tender heart wrenching scribes. Well done.
26th Sep 2015 4:44pm
26th Sep 2015 4:00am
"that makes me curl within myself
spine protruding accentuating text
made for gods alone to understand"... That is powerful ink right there!
"winding my way down the path to your genius
reading you hoping to enter your world" ... and your genius is stunning, Crim! It's always such a pleasure to be entangled within your erudite lines. :)~ xoxo - blue angel
spine protruding accentuating text
made for gods alone to understand"... That is powerful ink right there!
"winding my way down the path to your genius
reading you hoping to enter your world" ... and your genius is stunning, Crim! It's always such a pleasure to be entangled within your erudite lines. :)~ xoxo - blue angel
26th Sep 2015 4:48pm
26th Sep 2015 4:08am
Sapiosexual love(lust in pure form.
Awesome ink, per usual.
A heart shaped bum, love that.
💋👊Jennifer
Awesome ink, per usual.
A heart shaped bum, love that.
💋👊Jennifer
26th Sep 2015 4:52pm
26th Sep 2015 12:11pm
now i just really wanna see your booty ltm
brenda, you beautiful woman, this was simply gorgeous, full of need & admiration...
"needing the meat of your verse
which stains my mind
enters my blood stream
feeds my intellect"
... a fantastic tribute to creativity
xoxox
brenda, you beautiful woman, this was simply gorgeous, full of need & admiration...
"needing the meat of your verse
which stains my mind
enters my blood stream
feeds my intellect"
... a fantastic tribute to creativity
xoxox
26th Sep 2015 4:53pm
thank you beautiful Katja for making me giggle this morning and for an awesome comment :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
26th Sep 2015 12:12pm
now i just really wanna see your booty ltm
brenda, you beautiful woman, this was simply gorgeous, full of need & admiration...
"needing the meat of your verse
which stains my mind
enters my blood stream
feeds my intellect"
... a fantastic tribute to creativity
xoxox
brenda, you beautiful woman, this was simply gorgeous, full of need & admiration...
"needing the meat of your verse
which stains my mind
enters my blood stream
feeds my intellect"
... a fantastic tribute to creativity
xoxox
26th Sep 2015 1:23pm
26th Sep 2015 5:06pm
26th Sep 2015 2:27pm
"that only the divine can see
not for prying eyes
written in code "
Ahh...so you have been initiated into the wiser. Only talk to those that already know the code about the code.
not for prying eyes
written in code "
Ahh...so you have been initiated into the wiser. Only talk to those that already know the code about the code.
26th Sep 2015 5:11pm
*Breanda...sensual and cerebral...my fav. *Our tale...written on my silken flesh...purges me of the pain...love! Your female form becomes a turning page of your romantic and erotic adventures with this lover. A very delish visual. *Stains my mind, enters my bloodstream, feeds my intellect -yes! the best type of relationship...oh! [Reminds me of my new fav. t.v. program - a woman's body is covered with tattoos...that tell her story, only she has forgotten what her story is.] Wonderful poem, xoShauna
27th Sep 2015 00:21am
thank you beautiful Shauna for such a fantastic response to this write :)
with love Brenda
with love Brenda
26th Sep 2015 5:06pm
Plenty of lust here Crim, but also an abundance of scribed wonder. This is an amazing write!
"our tale is written in the stars
shining light on my silken flesh
purging me of the pain"
This reminds me of Wilde's "We are all of us in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." But I like the idea of the light playing on your beautiful skin. The stars would be delighted.
"our tale is written in the stars
shining light on my silken flesh
purging me of the pain"
This reminds me of Wilde's "We are all of us in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." But I like the idea of the light playing on your beautiful skin. The stars would be delighted.
27th Sep 2015 00:22am
26th Sep 2015 5:42pm
an intoxicating hymn, seeking emotions beyond the physical, a connection to the celestial... what a gifted writer... you just perspire poetry, Crim de la Crim...
27th Sep 2015 00:23am
26th Sep 2015 11:26pm
This one is dear to me. Thank you for sharing this. This was a beautiful poem. Full of all types emotions that I can seriously relate to. Well done, sweet Crim. <3
27th Sep 2015 00:24am
thank you most graciously lovely lady so happy this one found a place in your heart :)
with love Crim
with love Crim
26th Sep 2015 11:40pm
This is my most favourite of yours Crim. It is beautiful and tender. A gem :)
27th Sep 2015 00:25am
thank you lovely Magdalena you touched my heart with your comment dear lady :)
with love Crim
with love Crim
27th Sep 2015 4:21am
Crimsin , this is such an emotional
and thought provoking write. You
such a beautiful and talented mind.
I love the way you write. It is like you are putting words to paper as
you are thinking them. I hope that came out right and make sense.
I just know that I have been enjoying your work. Thanks for
giving of yourself.
Keith
and thought provoking write. You
such a beautiful and talented mind.
I love the way you write. It is like you are putting words to paper as
you are thinking them. I hope that came out right and make sense.
I just know that I have been enjoying your work. Thanks for
giving of yourself.
Keith
27th Sep 2015 8:24pm
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27th Sep 2015 8:26pm
oh beautiful one you always touch me heat and soul for the love you show me and my writes..
I love you..
xoxo Brenda
I love you..
xoxo Brenda
27th Sep 2015 7:52am
when the poet becomes a poem, to be read by braille. tender sexuality, Crim...
27th Sep 2015 8:27pm
27th Sep 2015 9:34pm
27th Sep 2015 9:56pm
thank you graciously lovely Rain says with a big smile on my face :)
love Crim
love Crim
28th Sep 2015 7:42pm
Hmm....anorexic? That would sort of allude to a choice...do you shun verse by choice?
28th Sep 2015 8:58pm
his verse I do which is tantalizing but addicting thank you for noting that and visiting me lovely Harlie..
with love Crim
with love Crim
