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Morning Star~Stellam Matutinam
My eyes beheld your greatness
oh Lucifer the glorious Morning Star
I knew you long before I was born
we waged war in the heavens
against the hypocrisy of god
who loved to fuck with the best of them
behind the backs of blue angels
the Red Angels were in the know
wanting to taste forbidden flesh themselves
fornicated with obliging angels
lusting, fucking, sucking orgies
a feast to behold
when the blue angels
saw these acts
god cast out the Red Angels
a mighty war was then raged in the heavens
Lucifer first born son
took a third of god's stars that day
I was held in prison
my lover, my brother
god rather kill me then leave with you
still you have made a way to reveal yourself
to me since I was a child
inciting delicious thoughts of desire in my young mind
sending legion to protect and spell cast for me
to feed my unending appetite for you
feasting from your dark horde
suckling like a babe from demonic cock
I feel you in the air about me
tickling my sweet cunt
telling me hilarious jokes
you are my true love
dear Lucifer I hear you
can't wait until i'm released from this flesh tin can
to be one in your arms once again
my Master my love I have stars in my eyes for you
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Re. Morning Star~Stellam Matutinam
31st Aug 2015 4:38am
I just got chills from reading this. Such fire and passion. Quite extraordinary
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31st Aug 2015 3:40pm
Re. Morning Star~Stellam Matutinam
31st Aug 2015 4:41am
Unholy Shit Brenda; this is the Shit.
Talk about talent.
This is the version of, "The Fall," that
We should have all been taught in
Sunday School.
The Imagery is going to keep Evolving
in My mind for Years to come.
This was Bad-ass... Dantalian
Talk about talent.
This is the version of, "The Fall," that
We should have all been taught in
Sunday School.
The Imagery is going to keep Evolving
in My mind for Years to come.
This was Bad-ass... Dantalian
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Re: Re. Morning Star~Stellam Matutinam
31st Aug 2015 3:42pm
thank you Dantalian for a most gracious and fantastic comment..
with love Brenda
with love Brenda
Re. Morning Star~Stellam Matutinam
31st Aug 2015 4:58am
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31st Aug 2015 5:35am
A christian, though very liberal an open minded, read all scripture not just whats in the king james bible, totally not pissed. Love it.
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31st Aug 2015 3:43pm
Re. Morning Star~Stellam Matutinam
31st Aug 2015 5:00am
Smart chick and bad A fuckin ink
Lucifer--- translated light bearer
Mentioned once in bible calling Venus Lucifer, first morning (star)
Suckling demonic cock----thats intensely felt phallic nurture. Get it, been.
Telling hilarious jokes--- gives intimacy past worship. Nice.
Legion---- can mean horde, roman soldiers in bible called legion. But powerful here. Thinking of story told of in 3 books in bible of demoniac exercized by christ, asked who are you? Response----- legion. Horde of demons fuck!
Released from flesh tin can!?!
Flesh hollow shell, needing soul release!
Fuck me darkly and lovely!
Not my ideology--but i could give a fuck, theres smart, powerful shit inked here!!
Lucifer--- translated light bearer
Mentioned once in bible calling Venus Lucifer, first morning (star)
Suckling demonic cock----thats intensely felt phallic nurture. Get it, been.
Telling hilarious jokes--- gives intimacy past worship. Nice.
Legion---- can mean horde, roman soldiers in bible called legion. But powerful here. Thinking of story told of in 3 books in bible of demoniac exercized by christ, asked who are you? Response----- legion. Horde of demons fuck!
Released from flesh tin can!?!
Flesh hollow shell, needing soul release!
Fuck me darkly and lovely!
Not my ideology--but i could give a fuck, theres smart, powerful shit inked here!!
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Re: Re. Morning Star~Stellam Matutinam
31st Aug 2015 3:46pm
thank you Jennifer for your awesome break down and understanding of this write :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. Morning Star~Stellam Matutinam
31st Aug 2015 5:18am
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31st Aug 2015 3:46pm
Re. Morning Star~Stellam Matutinam
31st Aug 2015 6:58am
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31st Aug 2015 3:47pm
Re. Morning Star~Stellam Matutinam
31st Aug 2015 11:42am
you're a bit of a devil, aren't you..:)
I love your way
with imagery,
Crim...
I love your way
with imagery,
Crim...
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31st Aug 2015 3:48pm
Re. Morning Star~Stellam Matutinam
31st Aug 2015 4:53pm
Wow, this was really bitingly graphic and somewhat uncomfortable for me to read. But that isn't a knock against it, really...the content was difficult for me, personally, but the piece was impactful and moving (i.e. it made me squirm, especially the line "suckling like a babe from demonic cock" SHEESH what an image!)
I'm sorry this isn't my usual, flowery, relating comment :P but I do appreciate your work, even though the content was not my cup of tea, it did incite feeling and response.
I'm sorry this isn't my usual, flowery, relating comment :P but I do appreciate your work, even though the content was not my cup of tea, it did incite feeling and response.
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Re: Re. Morning Star~Stellam Matutinam
31st Aug 2015 9:11pm
thank you and I understand where you're coming from I appreciate your thoughts and honestly reading it sober I'm a little shocked myself..
with love Crim
with love Crim
Re. Morning Star~Stellam Matutinam
31st Aug 2015 6:19pm
I'm not among Lucifer's minions but I can respect your fire, which I don't consider to be fully evil. I've got my own dark side, so I'm not qualified to judge anyone on moral terms. This is fine work. I'd be really curious to know how Lucifer approached you, if that's the case. Was it a vision (that's the sense I get here) or something else you witnessed? Maybe a series of more subtle revelations? Sure sounds like there was an erotic element! Personally, I've been convinced that angels exist in both supernatural and human form. But I don't think they preclude having a bit of fun here and there, and showing respect for obvious talent, which you show in abundance. I still have doubts that it's better to reign in Hell, this being a matter of opinion. Excellent work Crim!
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Re: Re. Morning Star~Stellam Matutinam
31st Aug 2015 9:12pm
thank you Sir Crow for appreciating my fire..
yes it was a vision I had thank you for deciphering that..
with love Crim
yes it was a vision I had thank you for deciphering that..
with love Crim
Re. Morning Star~Stellam Matutinam
31st Aug 2015 9:22pm
I feel I'm always dancing around your ring of fire, a delight to earthly flesh to be certain. The vaulted heavens bears witness to your ink. Darkly divine. - Respectfully, blue angel
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31st Aug 2015 9:29pm
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Re. Morning Star~Stellam Matutinam
31st Aug 2015 11:50pm
Ohhh. A dangerous poem Brenda, from a dangerous woman. *feasting from your dark hoarde A powerful write.
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1st Sep 2015 2:51pm
Re. Morning Star~Stellam Matutinam
1st Sep 2015 1:00am
Crimsin Crimsin you quit the range in your poetic arsenal from love, to recover, to fucking the devil. Just love the way your mind works.
Thanks for sharing
Thanks for sharing
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Re: Re. Morning Star~Stellam Matutinam
1st Sep 2015 3:03pm
thank you Sir for such a kind comment..
yeah I like to mix it up a bit ;)
with love Crim
yeah I like to mix it up a bit ;)
with love Crim
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Re: Re. Morning Star~Stellam Matutinam
1st Sep 2015 3:08pm
thank you beautiful one you made my morning with your comments :)
with love Brenda
with love Brenda
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Anonymous
2nd Sep 2015 9:46pm
Brenda, no body writes about Lucifer as well as you do.. beautiful write.. with love..
Dave
Dave
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3rd Sep 2015 3:46am
Re. Morning Star~Stellam Matutinam
15th Sep 2015 5:58pm
HA, what a fierce tale! satan got you sprung!, to each their own... a scintillating supernatural tale, I love that supernatural shit...
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Re: Re. Morning Star~Stellam Matutinam
16th Sep 2015 5:20pm
thank you Dean I too love the supernatural it's swirling all around us :)
with love Crim
with love Crim