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Feeding my Midnight
The sighs echo off my brain..
"weak felled prey".. tonic of blame.
Shadows casting jagged light,
caress empty arms in cry.
Moon, be my solace from fear,
drinking full, heart-twisted tears.
The wonder, the wounding spite,
the mind-fucking plightless plight.
And so, I feed my Midnight..
Hot soul-bashing, drained and lain,
masterful.. its compelling wane.
Endless flow, cryptic by dream,
seeing, awake.. the crumble of Me.
Relinquishing worthless bones
to monotones.. lying on stone.
Ensconcing deep in night's tomb,
etching curses to healing moon.
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Re. Feeding my Midnight
28th Aug 2015 00:27am
lovely d~ such a somber ink so masterfully inked..
I hope you find some solace by our Mother Moon..
with love Crim
I hope you find some solace by our Mother Moon..
with love Crim
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Re: Re. Feeding my Midnight
28th Aug 2015 1:44am
Spanking my whine fer lettin' this out, darlin CrimCrims.. the release by ink tho, a-mazing in itself [u'knw!]
Mother Moon and that draw, gotsa push me rightly [hopes]..
hugs & dark sighed moon-blessins on you, fer taking the time!
wif loves
~d
Mother Moon and that draw, gotsa push me rightly [hopes]..
hugs & dark sighed moon-blessins on you, fer taking the time!
wif loves
~d
Re. Feeding my Midnight
28th Aug 2015 00:43am
Sigh.......
I have smoked a million cigarettes
Waiting for you moon. do please cum make me forget
To sleep perchance to dream? Sir Will
Aye choose a different rub and it soothe me some with my responding scream
D, this poem speaks an ocean to me. I wrote that verse a few months back. This piece sent me running to it.
I think its my favorite of yours. You beautiful writhing soul of dark sighs.
Giggles and love to you suhweeeet darlin o mine.
☔Jennifer
I have smoked a million cigarettes
Waiting for you moon. do please cum make me forget
To sleep perchance to dream? Sir Will
Aye choose a different rub and it soothe me some with my responding scream
D, this poem speaks an ocean to me. I wrote that verse a few months back. This piece sent me running to it.
I think its my favorite of yours. You beautiful writhing soul of dark sighs.
Giggles and love to you suhweeeet darlin o mine.
☔Jennifer
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Re: Re. Feeding my Midnight
28th Aug 2015 1:51am
In puff[of sumfen besides my cigs/lol] .. I thank you's w/rightly maulins fer the read.. tyty
And get back to that write!! ..[sed w/ *lil foot stamp & hmpft!]
The moon holds all to all when felt so keenly.
you get hugs fer the favoring of this trinket & I adore ur time..
wif luvins on ur giggle, gal of heart ;)
~d
And get back to that write!! ..[sed w/ *lil foot stamp & hmpft!]
The moon holds all to all when felt so keenly.
you get hugs fer the favoring of this trinket & I adore ur time..
wif luvins on ur giggle, gal of heart ;)
~d
Re: Re. Feeding my Midnight
28th Aug 2015 2:37am
Re: Re. Feeding my Midnight
28th Aug 2015 3:18am
aww CRAP!... I sooo lost! *willingly!
kindred country gal dares.. y'know, get me grinnin every time ;)
needed it, *mwah
~d
kindred country gal dares.. y'know, get me grinnin every time ;)
needed it, *mwah
~d
Re: Re. Feeding my Midnight
28th Aug 2015 3:49am
Re. Feeding my Midnight
28th Aug 2015 00:44am
I take this as a fight against depression, one that I'd say you're winning. Words are your weapons and comfort. You pray to that old devil moon and it listens, being on your side all the way. "...masterful...it's compelling wane," and you're its cool mistress with a few curses up your sleeve. "Cryptic by dream." Love your phrasing here Darksighs whether or not I read it right.
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Re: Re. Feeding my Midnight
28th Aug 2015 2:00am
I'm now leavin you in charge of uplifting comment, sir Crow.. *g's
emotions depressed are grateful that you see a win 'midst my grrz... gracious thanxU's!
The moon is a constant that I can't breathe w/out feeling..you read my emotion rightly sweetie-
[body-fukd at moment] w/swirly other turmoils. and? wud never ding you if you mis-pegged, cuz our
poetry is always taken in many ways & I even gain the "oh yeah!" insight from all whom read..
hugglets fer your time m'dear friend!
~d
emotions depressed are grateful that you see a win 'midst my grrz... gracious thanxU's!
The moon is a constant that I can't breathe w/out feeling..you read my emotion rightly sweetie-
[body-fukd at moment] w/swirly other turmoils. and? wud never ding you if you mis-pegged, cuz our
poetry is always taken in many ways & I even gain the "oh yeah!" insight from all whom read..
hugglets fer your time m'dear friend!
~d
Re. Feeding my Midnight
28th Aug 2015 4:33am
Re: Re. Feeding my Midnight
28th Aug 2015 7:35am
.. my lil cali mountain has caught chill it seems.. ty SO much fer taking time on me- appreciate you darlins.
Ever sendin' you west coast huggins dear Sirs o D,
~d
Ever sendin' you west coast huggins dear Sirs o D,
~d
Re. Feeding my Midnight
Anonymous
28th Aug 2015 6:45am
The moon, a companion... solace for the wakeful...
wonderfully dark, love it!
wonderfully dark, love it!
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Re: Re. Feeding my Midnight
28th Aug 2015 7:38am
Grateful welcomes to my page, from one D to another, very much appreciate your read!
Companion is the best summation.. well put & agrees.
darkly sweet night to you,
~d
Companion is the best summation.. well put & agrees.
darkly sweet night to you,
~d
Re. Feeding my Midnight
28th Aug 2015 11:10pm
I love this piece, hard-hitting with that darkness you encompass so well. Beautiful miss, simply beautiful.
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Re: Re. Feeding my Midnight
1st Sep 2015 5:48pm
Much thanx sweet poet.. I shine a bit brighter to have your friendship & support.
low days call fer healing curses, I've figured out.. lol. [whatever works, yes?] *smirkn winks
huggs on your day hun,
~d
low days call fer healing curses, I've figured out.. lol. [whatever works, yes?] *smirkn winks
huggs on your day hun,
~d
Re. Feeding my Midnight
29th Aug 2015 8:06pm
Beautifully written as always.
You convey emotion so well
In these heavy laden lines.
Hope there is healing in these
lines for you. Well wishes
Keith
You convey emotion so well
In these heavy laden lines.
Hope there is healing in these
lines for you. Well wishes
Keith
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Re: Re. Feeding my Midnight
1st Sep 2015 5:53pm
Ah.. misters Keith.. ty fer the healing hopes.. I find solace here amongst my fav people
[yes you included] aaand my cuervo.. eg. would sacrifice neither ;)
appreciate your presence everly, sir!
hugs & curtsies,
~d
[yes you included] aaand my cuervo.. eg. would sacrifice neither ;)
appreciate your presence everly, sir!
hugs & curtsies,
~d
Re. Feeding my Midnight
29th Aug 2015 8:39pm
I can feel the hollowness of the Spirit in this, sterile as a whitewashed tomb under Luna's heavy breath, and lack of lover tonight.
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Re: Re. Feeding my Midnight
1st Sep 2015 5:57pm
You equal my balm, dear one.. always seeing & knowing. loves you much Lady A!
ty fer taking time on me, these are hollow days assuredly. our latest sturgeon moon has
held me tight, but let loose the waves as she does, you well know ;)
hugs hun,
~d
ty fer taking time on me, these are hollow days assuredly. our latest sturgeon moon has
held me tight, but let loose the waves as she does, you well know ;)
hugs hun,
~d
Re. Feeding my Midnight
1st Sep 2015 4:39pm
Feed the midnight. Some wonderful imagery here Darksigh. The crooked light. It can etch a sign that lights the way. And where it strikes, there is only upwards to go.
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Re: Re. Feeding my Midnight
1st Sep 2015 6:04pm
A very solid point, sir of fine pen.. dare I say.. *goin up! [??] ;)
Much respect to have you here sweetie.. bunk days and the brightest super moon threw
this one my way. [oh, those vibes]. *do hope you caught sight of it this past week.
Luna was perfect!
aaand? see.. no sour here.. just dark feed! *giggles
take care m'friend.. you are cherished on my page..
~d
Much respect to have you here sweetie.. bunk days and the brightest super moon threw
this one my way. [oh, those vibes]. *do hope you caught sight of it this past week.
Luna was perfect!
aaand? see.. no sour here.. just dark feed! *giggles
take care m'friend.. you are cherished on my page..
~d
Re: Re. Feeding my Midnight
1st Sep 2015 6:37pm
I did see Miss Luna and it was gorgeous as the rising night light. I am always disappointed when it reaches the high midnight as it seems so much smaller in size than on the horizon.
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Re. Feeding my Midnight
2nd Sep 2015 5:58am
"Endless flow, cryptic by dream,
seeing, awake.. the crumble of Me.
Relinquishing worthless bones
to monotones.. lying on stone. "
Nope, no words for you sug'r but a hard
beating heart doused in panics & aches,
How haunting you are my dear dear sighs!
yes I know you heard mine ..release..painfully
long & deep.
Soothing hugs & kisses there & there..
seeing, awake.. the crumble of Me.
Relinquishing worthless bones
to monotones.. lying on stone. "
Nope, no words for you sug'r but a hard
beating heart doused in panics & aches,
How haunting you are my dear dear sighs!
yes I know you heard mine ..release..painfully
long & deep.
Soothing hugs & kisses there & there..
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Re: Re. Feeding my Midnight
17th Sep 2015 12:17pm
am honored to be ensconced in those sighs from you my everlovies..
to be solaced yet trapped by that same eerie yearn is a profounding heady haunt, surely sweet hell.
snuggle-fuss & lovely soothes your way, as you warm me..
loves you much,
~d
to be solaced yet trapped by that same eerie yearn is a profounding heady haunt, surely sweet hell.
snuggle-fuss & lovely soothes your way, as you warm me..
loves you much,
~d
Re. Feeding my Midnight
5th Sep 2015 4:19am
Re: Re. Feeding my Midnight
17th Sep 2015 12:23pm
In humbled curtsies, SirHades.. for your shadow on my page..
much thankins & deeply appreciated misters!
~d
much thankins & deeply appreciated misters!
~d
Re. Feeding my Midnight
17th Sep 2015 11:30am
Cryptic dreams indeed, with intoxicating imagery to satiate the hunger of midnight churning within us all...
JJ
JJ
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Re: Re. Feeding my Midnight
17th Sep 2015 12:28pm
You always read me well, sweetie.. and still evoking wicked grin. was a viscous mood-set and
clinging, it seems. hence those grand ole dark sighs ;)
adores your presence JJ.. have a sweet morn!
~d/T
clinging, it seems. hence those grand ole dark sighs ;)
adores your presence JJ.. have a sweet morn!
~d/T