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Her Back On Black [Chevy]
Dark-as-sin Chevy.. chromed sixty~nine Ride,
Her back on black curse.. skirt tickles thigh high.
In truck bed, half bare, 'tween midnight and pride,
he Will own her screaming submission cries.
Placed 'tummy to tailgate' .. hips grinding hurt,
teeth rip tank top sideways.. tossing to dirt.
He bites wicked neck trails, welting red lines,
porcelain marring from palm stings behind.
Past her waist, scarlet hair-fisted tether,
~arching wet silk~ to view sluicing pleasures..
His low growls promise sweet pain unfettered,
sharing whiskey laced breath and cool leather.
Opened hard from behind.. pinning legs wide,
he dips kisses inside, bottom held high.
His suck, the buck.. licking button to bliss,
fingers grace soaked mess, sinking two in-twist.
'Flavor-savers' catch every squeaked drip.
Downcast, her eyes blaze at thick probing tip,
his slow burn taunts entry.. pout wrapping slick.
Beg, in pale bend .. punished inch by steel inch,
he fights towards her core, chrome bruising hips.
She leaks lust tears, lashes closed on choked sigh,
his deep sink ~ecstasy~ stretching her tight..
Adding three knuckles [forced frenzy-slammed fit]
he grants hot burst at her whimpered~ "I submit!"
..cursing-thankful for that chrome bumper grip!
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Re. Her Back On Black [Chevy]
26th Aug 2015 8:06pm
this set me on FIRE, so creamily hot is this masterful ink lovely d~
these lines sent me reeling..
"Downcast, her eyes blaze at thick probing tip,
his slow burn taunts entry.. pout wrapping slick.
Beg, in pale bend .. punished inch by steel inch,
he fights towards her core, chrome bruising hips.
She leaks lust tears, lashes closed on choked sigh,
his deep sink ~ecstasy~ stretching her tight..
Adding three knuckles [forced frenzy-slammed fit]
he grants hot burst at her whimpered~ "I submit!"
..cursing-thankful for that chrome bumper grip!"
thank you for this delicious ink ;)
with love Crim
these lines sent me reeling..
"Downcast, her eyes blaze at thick probing tip,
his slow burn taunts entry.. pout wrapping slick.
Beg, in pale bend .. punished inch by steel inch,
he fights towards her core, chrome bruising hips.
She leaks lust tears, lashes closed on choked sigh,
his deep sink ~ecstasy~ stretching her tight..
Adding three knuckles [forced frenzy-slammed fit]
he grants hot burst at her whimpered~ "I submit!"
..cursing-thankful for that chrome bumper grip!"
thank you for this delicious ink ;)
with love Crim
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Re: Re. Her Back On Black [Chevy]
26th Aug 2015 10:10pm
Thankies, hawt Crim de la crème.. I'm licking your dainty paws&claws fer reading..
& fer inspiring visions of fire & cream by ur comment too! so yum. ty!
luv-luvzu
~d
& fer inspiring visions of fire & cream by ur comment too! so yum. ty!
luv-luvzu
~d
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Re: Re. Her Back On Black [Chevy]
26th Aug 2015 10:22pm
Omfg.. *giggles midday from you, sweet Taryn OFK! this [CS] says..sooo gd funny! w/a*drip.
& this?.."My heavens, the faeries are in a flying frenzy!!" <~~ I really[really] wanna see this
magicks in action. lip biting grins on image of the frenzy!
Layin big wet luvins on dainty curves, you minxy sissy *mwah~mwah~Maul
~d
& this?.."My heavens, the faeries are in a flying frenzy!!" <~~ I really[really] wanna see this
magicks in action. lip biting grins on image of the frenzy!
Layin big wet luvins on dainty curves, you minxy sissy *mwah~mwah~Maul
~d
Re. Her Back On Black [Chevy]
Sex over the tailgate of a truck!
Sweet jeezus beggin for mercy at this one D!
Thats one Fuck that will make the devil blush.
Im filled with images, and a few id like to try!!
Now bow to you sweet!!
Love and 💋
🚬💋J
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Re: Re. Her Back On Black [Chevy]
26th Aug 2015 10:28pm
sweet jeezusus & devils impaling sumfen I'd hope? wicked grins to both!
omg, needed the bright hug of your words dearest.. so much thanx, ..been kicking my muse
in her lazy arse lately & vera glad to have you here!
naughty blessins & luvz on you darlins Jen..tyty.
~d
omg, needed the bright hug of your words dearest.. so much thanx, ..been kicking my muse
in her lazy arse lately & vera glad to have you here!
naughty blessins & luvz on you darlins Jen..tyty.
~d
Re. Her Back On Black [Chevy]
26th Aug 2015 8:26pm
wow this ink is wickedly sexyyy... whoooweee the imagery set this place ablaze... awesome flow and rhymes too... a pleasure to behold and read :D
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Re: Re. Her Back On Black [Chevy]
26th Aug 2015 10:33pm
Always appreciate your seeing of the art & content misters Magic, thanx so much fer gracing my page!
have a lovely day & be well m'friend! pleasure is mine ;)
~d
have a lovely day & be well m'friend! pleasure is mine ;)
~d
Re. Her Back On Black [Chevy]
26th Aug 2015 9:39pm
I was once riding in the back of an El Camino when it caught fire. "Her Back" kind of reminds me of that, only your version is a complete turn on. "Dark-as-sin-Chevy...chromed sixty-nine Ride." The stage is set, no mistake that this vehicle is the perfect getaway. The year "sixty-nine" is a sly hint at the fun to be had. "His low growls promise sweet pain unfettered." The sound of his voice far better than the throb of the engine. "Beg, in pale bend..punished inch by steel inch." Brutal, but his entry is possibly more coerced than forced. And finally " ...cursing-thankful for that chrome bumper grip." A perfect punch line! Your powers of description are perfectly cherry, Darksighs. You might catch me hitching at some point.
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Re: Re. Her Back On Black [Chevy]
26th Aug 2015 10:53pm
uhoh.. ElCamino.. now you've dunnit sweet Crow! ..'66 or 67 is my favfav dream of aaall wicked
sexy Chevy's..
will have a moment of silence fer that burned baby....;(
.........[sssshhhh]
appreciate your time m'dears.. and you even pegged a great unspoken growl/vs engine. tyty
grins to your "brutal vs coerced".. truly getting the hard-soft of this one is heartwarming to my
lazy muse ;) we both thanxu in hughug.. best day to you!
~d
sexy Chevy's..
will have a moment of silence fer that burned baby....;(
.........[sssshhhh]
appreciate your time m'dears.. and you even pegged a great unspoken growl/vs engine. tyty
grins to your "brutal vs coerced".. truly getting the hard-soft of this one is heartwarming to my
lazy muse ;) we both thanxu in hughug.. best day to you!
~d
Re. Her Back On Black [Chevy]
26th Aug 2015 9:45pm
Well u know what they say...it's that grip on the slit that gets you lit!! lol
Hottness all day long my sexiness! :)
Hottness all day long my sexiness! :)
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Re: Re. Her Back On Black [Chevy]
26th Aug 2015 11:01pm
...wud you believe I've never heard that one, exactly? lit duz incite toked cravins tho! *lmsao...
Still a good one to remember.. taking sum notes here.. teehee.
Ever awesome you are.. fer takin time m'dears.. and with a much needed giggle..tyty!
curtsies to bad~ass incarnate ;)
~d
Still a good one to remember.. taking sum notes here.. teehee.
Ever awesome you are.. fer takin time m'dears.. and with a much needed giggle..tyty!
curtsies to bad~ass incarnate ;)
~d
Re. Her Back On Black [Chevy]
27th Aug 2015 6:23am
Very hot read this is a great piece one of my faves by far hugs sent your way
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Re: Re. Her Back On Black [Chevy]
28th Aug 2015 7:52am
Awwwes & fancy seeing you darlin lady! Appreciate your time
on my Chevy-fetished luvins..
hugs ever shared ;)
~d
on my Chevy-fetished luvins..
hugs ever shared ;)
~d
Re. Her Back On Black [Chevy]
27th Aug 2015 3:31pm
Re: Re. Her Back On Black [Chevy]
28th Aug 2015 7:56am
You *Know I adore your giggles on my heated page lady, luvluv havin you!
and dittos to that damn hand-hold.. we all starts needing it- lol.
you honor me & my muse, ty! *hugs
~d
and dittos to that damn hand-hold.. we all starts needing it- lol.
you honor me & my muse, ty! *hugs
~d
Re. Her Back On Black [Chevy]
Anonymous
27th Aug 2015 11:56pm
darksighs,
you got me staring at my old truck in a hole new light, in fact I'm thinking on heading out to wash 'er. Might get lucky and polish the chrome ;-)
HOT write!!!
tornado
you got me staring at my old truck in a hole new light, in fact I'm thinking on heading out to wash 'er. Might get lucky and polish the chrome ;-)
HOT write!!!
tornado

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Re: Re. Her Back On Black [Chevy]
28th Aug 2015 8:02am
Much obliged for ur presence sweet Tor.. and giggles to your truck.. I say- show that baby
sum polishing luvs! ...you always produce the wittiest grin. awesome, you, gotts my thanx ;)
great eve, m'friend!
~d
sum polishing luvs! ...you always produce the wittiest grin. awesome, you, gotts my thanx ;)
great eve, m'friend!
~d
Re. Her Back On Black [Chevy]
28th Aug 2015 7:31am
Re: Re. Her Back On Black [Chevy]
28th Aug 2015 8:10am
Weak-kneed on Chevy's.. weaker on whiskey sighs.
Much appreciate the read SirJ.. title came with AC/DC in my ear ..must accredit my twist on ;)
wishin' you a dazzled eve!
~d
Much appreciate the read SirJ.. title came with AC/DC in my ear ..must accredit my twist on ;)
wishin' you a dazzled eve!
~d
Re. Her Back On Black [Chevy]
29th Aug 2015 8:12pm
Ms darksighs, you may have
outdone yourself with this one.
I never quite pictured you as
A truck girl. Beautiful, sexy, hot
read.
Keith
outdone yourself with this one.
I never quite pictured you as
A truck girl. Beautiful, sexy, hot
read.
Keith
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Re: Re. Her Back On Black [Chevy]
3rd Sep 2015 4:26am
..see- now you gots me wondering bout what that other category was before the truck luvins here..
wicked you .. to have me in wonder. lmsao* ..am weak on that Chevy most assuredly..;)
ty sweetly fer the read and touching comment. cuervo tips to you darlins..
~d
wicked you .. to have me in wonder. lmsao* ..am weak on that Chevy most assuredly..;)
ty sweetly fer the read and touching comment. cuervo tips to you darlins..
~d
Re. Her Back On Black [Chevy]
2nd Sep 2015 8:36pm
This got my engine revved up, Dark.... I think I read this over three times...one for each knuckle ;)
You can guess the outcum.
You can guess the outcum.
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Re: Re. Her Back On Black [Chevy]
3rd Sep 2015 4:45am
unholy hellz man, you *do realize it takes alot to make me at a loss fer words.. yes?
blink.. blink... ..... .....
you have plucked at one of my favored lines here.. that said- I'm banking on Outcum good? ;)
making my night with 'hottest comment' sweetie.. you get that title again. virgo tally, y'know!
lowest curtsies m'dear, ty fer taking time.
~d
blink.. blink... ..... .....
you have plucked at one of my favored lines here.. that said- I'm banking on Outcum good? ;)
making my night with 'hottest comment' sweetie.. you get that title again. virgo tally, y'know!
lowest curtsies m'dear, ty fer taking time.
~d
Re. Her Back On Black [Chevy]
3rd Sep 2015 1:50am
Hell ya Sweet Darlin; felt like Twas 27 again, Fuk, am hitting hard against the zipper, the hurt is sweet though hehehe... Bein a mechanic, and a master horn dog here, reminds me of some o my most favorite memories little darlins... Though rarely comment on erotic, I do reserve it to read and comment on any o yer works there ma lovely darksighs: wolf
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Re: Re. Her Back On Black [Chevy]
3rd Sep 2015 5:01am
Gawdamn perfect to touch base m'darlins.. wanna hugg you hard fer venturing in fer comment,
I know well the honor it is to successfully lure you to the naughty pages.. very cool wolf!
and? any pain you've 'endured'.. [eg] you've given back by reminding me of my next weakness
after Chevy chunk & cool chrome. flashing back to the scent of a mechanics hands, that no amount
of orange de-greaser can rub away nor mask.. almost transmission & warm male. we are *so even!
Hope your moonlight is jagged-bright tonight sweet man!
~d
I know well the honor it is to successfully lure you to the naughty pages.. very cool wolf!
and? any pain you've 'endured'.. [eg] you've given back by reminding me of my next weakness
after Chevy chunk & cool chrome. flashing back to the scent of a mechanics hands, that no amount
of orange de-greaser can rub away nor mask.. almost transmission & warm male. we are *so even!
Hope your moonlight is jagged-bright tonight sweet man!
~d
Re. Her Back On Black [Chevy]
Hotter than any Hot Rod. Over the tailgate of a Chevy pickup or maybe even an El Camino or possibly a station wagon - your details exquisite. Brings back great memories. The chrome bumper grip providing some stability in a chaotic state.
"..porcelain marring from palm stings behind." _ ha another way of saying crimson cheeks. I like.
I should think any car club would make you an "Honorary" member!! LOL.
"..porcelain marring from palm stings behind." _ ha another way of saying crimson cheeks. I like.
I should think any car club would make you an "Honorary" member!! LOL.
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Re: Re. Her Back On Black [Chevy]
12th Sep 2021 4:46am
It is My turn to ty for takin me back, sir Leo.. i am evergrateful for such a comment here, ah the days of posting with frequency.. lol.
id venture to say that all wise old souls love Chevys.. the El Camino is my alltime fondest fav.. and the ease of workin on them is glorious.. i grew up around sum of the best oldie models with a family of many male car enthusiasts n cant stop my smirk on ur "car club" thots..
sincere thankins, mfriend..
~d
id venture to say that all wise old souls love Chevys.. the El Camino is my alltime fondest fav.. and the ease of workin on them is glorious.. i grew up around sum of the best oldie models with a family of many male car enthusiasts n cant stop my smirk on ur "car club" thots..
sincere thankins, mfriend..
~d