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The Ballet
dancing among the stars
a ballet in the cosmos
pirouetting across the night sky
a dancer spinning in the ether
bedecked in moonlight
shining my light
a graceful beauty
who can't be touched
by Earthly hands
seen by angelic eyes
they are the symphony
that I'm tuned into
hurled into my lovers arms
he catches me with strong sure hands
gazing at me with lust, love
we continue our ballet
of push, pull
give and take
grand plié over his waiting mouth
a dance of seduction
he tantalizes my pink blush
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Re. The Ballet
26th Aug 2015 6:57am
Grand plie over his waiting mouth.....
A graceful way of putting things
Wicked grin.
You certainly danced into my heart love.
Very nicely done mih enticin darlin
💛J
A graceful way of putting things
Wicked grin.
You certainly danced into my heart love.
Very nicely done mih enticin darlin
💛J
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26th Aug 2015 7:28am
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Re: Re. The Ballet
26th Aug 2015 7:29am
thank you beautiful Taryn for making me giggle with your comment :)
love you Brenda
love you Brenda
Re. The Ballet
26th Aug 2015 7:37am
ballet is certainly the poetry of dances. delicate composition, Crim...
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Re: Re. The Ballet
26th Aug 2015 7:50am
Re. The Ballet
26th Aug 2015 8:06am
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26th Aug 2015 8:18am
Re. The Ballet
26th Aug 2015 11:38am
This is even more miraculous because of your other content .....
I love this side of you !
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I love this side of you !
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Re: Re. The Ballet
26th Aug 2015 5:25pm
thank you Poet trying on a softer side see how it fits you know?
with love Brenda
with love Brenda
Re. The Ballet
26th Aug 2015 12:41pm
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26th Aug 2015 5:25pm
Re. The Ballet
26th Aug 2015 1:47pm
a dancer spinning in the ether
bedecked in moonlight
shining my light
a graceful beauty
who can't be touched
by Earthly hands
These stanzas stood
out and spoke loudly
to Me Brenda.
I could envision it in
My mYnd.
Great write here... Dantalian
bedecked in moonlight
shining my light
a graceful beauty
who can't be touched
by Earthly hands
These stanzas stood
out and spoke loudly
to Me Brenda.
I could envision it in
My mYnd.
Great write here... Dantalian
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Re: Re. The Ballet
26th Aug 2015 5:26pm
thank you for showing love to my softer side Dantalian aka Pan :)
with love Brenda
with love Brenda
Re. The Ballet
26th Aug 2015 3:52pm
So Beautiful Lady Crim....
A breathtaking ride into the Universe
Pen Praise so Amazing
XOXO
Fire
A breathtaking ride into the Universe
Pen Praise so Amazing
XOXO
Fire
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26th Aug 2015 5:27pm
Re. The Ballet
26th Aug 2015 6:13pm
Thanks to Miss_Sub, I was listening to Ludovico Einaudi's "I Giorni" while reading this and it seemed such a beautiful backdrop to it.
Beautiful, ethereal piece!
Beautiful, ethereal piece!
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Re: Re. The Ballet
26th Aug 2015 7:14pm
i'll have to listen to that..
thank you graciously for a lovely comment :)
with love Crim
thank you graciously for a lovely comment :)
with love Crim
Re. The Ballet
26th Aug 2015 10:00pm
I might try reading this while playing "Swan Lake." Really elegant eroticism, Crim, a class act all the way and then a perfect climax. Wouldn't mind trying something like this if my back could handle it. I'm no Baryshnikov, sad to say.
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26th Aug 2015 10:56pm
Re. The Ballet
26th Aug 2015 11:25pm
Most beautiful dear Brenda. A delicate and sensual write...the beauty of women. I am obsessed with ballerinas.
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Re: Re. The Ballet
26th Aug 2015 11:39pm
thank you lovely Shauna for such a beautiful comment :)
I too am enamored with ballerinas..
with love Brenda
I too am enamored with ballerinas..
with love Brenda
Re. The Ballet
Anonymous
27th Aug 2015 1:10am
Brenda, this is simply luscious.. A truly beautiful ink.. Nice to see your softer side.. With love, and respect..
Dave
Dave
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Re: Re. The Ballet
27th Aug 2015 2:11am
Re. The Ballet
27th Aug 2015 3:29am
"a dancer spinning in the ether
bedecked in moonlight
shining my light"
~weepin gorgeous & ethereal with a dark shine. fav!
You master the page here darlin.. building from adoration & enticement to exchanged pleasures
& end on passion's blush. [perfectly left me in heated pout for more blush!] I f-ing adore the slow kindled inferno!
loves & awww lady..
~d
bedecked in moonlight
shining my light"
~weepin gorgeous & ethereal with a dark shine. fav!
You master the page here darlin.. building from adoration & enticement to exchanged pleasures
& end on passion's blush. [perfectly left me in heated pout for more blush!] I f-ing adore the slow kindled inferno!
loves & awww lady..
~d
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Re: Re. The Ballet
27th Aug 2015 6:31am
lovely d~ you have me blushing ;) at your gorgeous comments..
seriously thank you beautiful :)
with love Crim
seriously thank you beautiful :)
with love Crim
Re. The Ballet
27th Aug 2015 5:43pm
wow! - this is truly beautiful with just a hint of sexual tension - I really love this one
Just WOW!
Just WOW!
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27th Aug 2015 10:08pm
Re. The Ballet
5th Sep 2015 2:10am
This was sweet and very sassy and I used to dance the ballet a long time ago....makes me want to start again! Nicely and deliciously done.
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5th Sep 2015 3:51am