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Demon Speak
fuck my demons are biting at the chain
ugly wants to come out and play
shred your ego to bits
with razor sharp teeth
feeling dejected Crimsin steps up
speaking thug hard
I'm no little girl to be played with
full grown woman fiery in nature
set you ablaze with the taste of my tongue
legion is marching across the page
entering your home through the screen
licking balls and pussies alike
if you think I'm crazy you'd be right
meds keep me on a leash
though right now my minions are off the hook
feel them curl your stomach
bile rising choking on your own gorge
spit in disgust for this demonic lady
who seduces, tantalizes
then casts you aside
what a cunt I am
can't hide ugly for long
her face will be seen
black and white in my ink
darkness incarnate
I live in the shadows
where false light can't scorch
hell has nothing on me
I live there while walking the Earth
spitting fire now burning your flesh
eating your charred meat
sweet treat for the beast
mmm you go down sickly sweet
I vomit you out
leaving your corpse in the dust
wipe my feet on you then keep walking
Published 24th Aug 2015
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Nope. I pick myself up and ready for a fight, tough lady. Not down for the count at all. Now it's your turn, since I do speak Demon, just not as fluently as you. Fine job lovely Crim!
25th Aug 2015 2:57pm
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24th Aug 2015 8:11pm
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25th Aug 2015 2:59pm
thank you beautiful Taryn for encouraging me to post this and loving all sides of me :)
with love Brenda
with love Brenda
24th Aug 2015 8:38pm
beautifully hard as nails - difficult to get this right, you seem to do it with ease - excellent :-)
thank you David sometimes the darkness just flows of it's own accord :)
with love Crim
24th Aug 2015 8:59pm
An legion is marching across the page!!
Gone sweet, hello hell bitch!
Love it!
Chills
🚬💋J
Gone sweet, hello hell bitch!
Love it!
Chills
🚬💋J
25th Aug 2015 3:05pm
thank you lovely Jennifer for such a great comment..
this just poured out of me I wasn't sure I should post it after my peaceful poem..
with love Brenda :)
this just poured out of me I wasn't sure I should post it after my peaceful poem..
with love Brenda :)
24th Aug 2015 9:09pm
You're bringing it hard and
deadly Brenda.
Has someone pissed in Your
cornflakes? J/k
Keep hitting Us with this rawness.
Angst filled pages... Pan/Dantalian.
deadly Brenda.
Has someone pissed in Your
cornflakes? J/k
Keep hitting Us with this rawness.
Angst filled pages... Pan/Dantalian.
25th Aug 2015 3:07pm
thank you Dantalian-Pan lol no one has pissed in my cereal..
the darkness just came pouring out :)
with love Brenda
the darkness just came pouring out :)
with love Brenda
24th Aug 2015 9:16pm
Brenda, remind me to never piss you off.. i'm joking.. would never do that.. but this is so raw.. kicking ass and taking names brutality.. really feel this one.. with love, and respect..
Dave
Dave
25th Aug 2015 3:08pm
24th Aug 2015 9:55pm
25th Aug 2015 3:08pm
Anonymous
24th Aug 2015 10:59pm
Miss Crim,
I said it once
and I'll say it again:
"Bitch Wicked ink,
my Demonic friend."
Ooh, chills!. . .xoxo, Devlin:)
I said it once
and I'll say it again:
"Bitch Wicked ink,
my Demonic friend."
Ooh, chills!. . .xoxo, Devlin:)
25th Aug 2015 3:10pm
thank you lovely Devlin smiling at you with a wicked grin on my face :)
with love Crim
with love Crim
24th Aug 2015 11:22pm
"Bitch wicked ink" I like that and I think it compliments this nicely. I couldn't have said it better.
25th Aug 2015 3:11pm
24th Aug 2015 11:50pm
Crim: I'm blown away and little scared..uh oh. You have gathered all the dark skies and angry winds and placed them in this fantastic poem. Someone out there needs to shaking in their boots or kissing yours. Enjoyed this poem!!!
25th Aug 2015 3:12pm
25th Aug 2015 3:28am
Wowzer Crim....hell of a write here....I enjoyed this so very much......you need to unleash your demon side more often.....luvin this......luv and hugs xo :)
25th Aug 2015 3:13pm
thank you lovely Flower for showing love for the demon in me :)
with love Crim
with love Crim
25th Aug 2015 4:22pm
"legion is marching across the page
entering your home through the screen
licking balls and pussies alike"
~I'm justa sittin' here wif my fuzzy screen on gal, bring it! [please?]
"darkness incarnate
I live in the shadows
where false light can't scorch"
~rings like a clear bell in my head.. truth in that warm wet dark, I do know!
"wipe my feet on you then keep walking" ...excellent departure, my dark Royalty...*mwahs
Gotta confess, my Crim de la crème .. lovesitt when your minions are off da hook!
*in wicked purrs
~d
entering your home through the screen
licking balls and pussies alike"
~I'm justa sittin' here wif my fuzzy screen on gal, bring it! [please?]
"darkness incarnate
I live in the shadows
where false light can't scorch"
~rings like a clear bell in my head.. truth in that warm wet dark, I do know!
"wipe my feet on you then keep walking" ...excellent departure, my dark Royalty...*mwahs
Gotta confess, my Crim de la crème .. lovesitt when your minions are off da hook!
*in wicked purrs
~d
25th Aug 2015 5:02pm
lovely d~ how I adore and cherish your comments..
thank you beautiful one for leaving me such delicious thoughts on my ink :)
with love Brenda
thank you beautiful one for leaving me such delicious thoughts on my ink :)
with love Brenda
25th Aug 2015 8:35pm
I think you just made the sun sink in the wake of your poetic Darkness. It definitely got a shade darker here.
I'll be reading more of you
I'll be reading more of you
26th Aug 2015 00:38am
thank you DevilsPoet for such a wickedly great comment..
i'll be checking you out as well..
with respect Crimsin
i'll be checking you out as well..
with respect Crimsin
25th Aug 2015 8:43pm
Damn! What a badass you are.....love.that third stanza because I knew it would explode after that..... enjoyed it!
26th Aug 2015 00:39am
26th Aug 2015 4:20am
treading fiercely on the path of war, Crim. I can hear the hounds of hell growling...
26th Aug 2015 5:05am
26th Aug 2015 6:15pm
Wow, this was intense!
I really relate to the first stanza, that's how I've been feeling since Friday.
I really relate to the first stanza, that's how I've been feeling since Friday.
26th Aug 2015 7:18pm
I feel for you it's a hard place to be in..
hope you feel more at peace soon..
thank you kindly for leaving your thoughts :)
with love Crim
hope you feel more at peace soon..
thank you kindly for leaving your thoughts :)
with love Crim
Sometimes there is light once the darkness is lifted...I can relate to this on a personal level...Well done. :)
6th Sep 2015 2:39pm
thank you lovely lady for an insightful and beautiful comment :)
with love Crim
with love Crim
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