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Largesse
Aurora's beauty still astounds
Although she's seen better days
Still comely as she goes her rounds
Making her brilliant plays
She really seems to give a fuck
Her rays to one and all
So it looks like I've regained some luck
Without one text or call
Aurora comes at dawn or so
Cool at the break of day
The perfect mercy blow, then afterglow
And then she's on her way
Wondering who's the next in line
And at the risk of seeming blunt
I can't claim all her gifts as mine
And pass on goddess cunt.
Although she's seen better days
Still comely as she goes her rounds
Making her brilliant plays
She really seems to give a fuck
Her rays to one and all
So it looks like I've regained some luck
Without one text or call
Aurora comes at dawn or so
Cool at the break of day
The perfect mercy blow, then afterglow
And then she's on her way
Wondering who's the next in line
And at the risk of seeming blunt
I can't claim all her gifts as mine
And pass on goddess cunt.
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Re. Largesse
Sir Crow this put a big smile on my face..
so sexy ;)
clever too I never thought of the Aurora Borealis in this light love it..
with love Crim
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21st Aug 2015 5:47pm
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21st Aug 2015 5:32pm
I just really enjoy the word largess. Great title that's fits well with the giving qualities of Aurora. Bravo Crow!
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21st Aug 2015 5:49pm
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21st Aug 2015 5:37pm
Egads Crow! ..and you even share.. sweet n mannerly y'know? ;)
"Aurora comes at dawn or so
Cool at the break of day
The perfect mercy blow, then afterglow
And then she's on her way"
~mercy or not.. a blow is a blow, yes? love your character, what a minxy lil siren!
flow is excellent & loves the 'vulnerable but still needing' emotions this one evokes..
fan to your pen, sweetie! take care ;)
~d
"Aurora comes at dawn or so
Cool at the break of day
The perfect mercy blow, then afterglow
And then she's on her way"
~mercy or not.. a blow is a blow, yes? love your character, what a minxy lil siren!
flow is excellent & loves the 'vulnerable but still needing' emotions this one evokes..
fan to your pen, sweetie! take care ;)
~d
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I try to be polite. Thanks Darksighs. "Minxy lil siren." It's kind of fun to humanize and eroticize the myths, seems to me. Maybe skip the harpies...
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21st Aug 2015 7:34pm
rofl w/toe curl.. wud love to see you evoke a sexy harpy on dup..
just hadta share my so 'eeked' thot..of those claws. And I'm on a female end. but you poor fella's.. lol
lovely day to you Crow!
~d
just hadta share my so 'eeked' thot..of those claws. And I'm on a female end. but you poor fella's.. lol
lovely day to you Crow!
~d
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21st Aug 2015 7:28pm
this is full of wordgasms, largesse, comely, fuck... really quite a balance between classy & crass you've created here crowfly
loveeeeed!
loveeeeed!
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21st Aug 2015 7:40pm
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21st Aug 2015 8:23pm
Aurora is a delight, comes to you without a fight / She takes care of your woes, yes indeed she's good to go . . .
Loved this poem, please excuse my rhyming attempt . . .
Loved this poem, please excuse my rhyming attempt . . .
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21st Aug 2015 11:31pm
Nice little rhyme Jerry! It makes Aurora smile / Now she really craves your style / So she'll show at your door / And buzz demanding more. Now see what you've done? Thank you!
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22nd Aug 2015 3:44am
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25th Aug 2015 4:20pm
Well said Crow. Again, excellent flow here. Sonetimes you can't put the cunt on a pedestal. See them eye to eye that way.
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