Checkmate

Wow, such a man could be so lucky.  Excellent read, my dear.

why thank you Sir Hades..

with love and darkness Crim

thank you lovely Taryn laughing back that you know me too well :)

you put a big smile on my face tonight holding back giggles..

thank you again beautiful..

love Brenda

Miss Crim, you can have my man. . .He paddles my ass AND takes charge and it drives me mad. . .UGH!. . .But hey, if that's what you want, go for it, Girl!. . .Enjoyed the ink. . .xoxo, Devlin;)

just drunken lust lovely Devlin ;)

thank you for the visit..

with love Crim

Bein a big fan n player of chess
I had to read this based on the title
Though it's very clear the Queen
possesses many alternatives for movement, her truth is to honor n protect her king! :)... Ur submissive
ways must be very empowering lol

love your take on my write Poe thank you :)

with love Crim

You are quality bitch meat

giggling in my coffee thank you Poet :)

with love Brenda

i just snorted coffee reading p.s' comment ltm gawds the man's damn priceless...
... anyhoooos, i get a lil deja vu reading your opening lines, can't put my finger on where you've written it before or it could be my lack of sleep lol either way, i love them & heartily concur; arrogance is the stuff damp nickers are made of
steller write as always, beautiful one
xoxox

beautiful Katja thank you lovely one..   Poet is priceless giggling wildly :) it could be my memory is bad..   and yes I agree creamy nickers ;)   love Brenda

Oh crim my darling.
You never cease to amaze! I understand your need and lust, but more so now and how! 💋

Loving a good swat, to please and want to, to understand his faults and own your path in your taste for them.
But still care
Be loyal.
And yet qu👑 een.
A hard, delicate, but if played right, glorious thing.
You wear and write a wicked crown.

Cherry read 🍒🍒🍒🍒🍒🍒🍒🍒🍒

thank you  lovely Jennifer for such a gem of a comment..

making me smile wide this morning :)

with love Brenda

Oh This ... is EXACTLY how the  game should be played...

Pen Praise Lady Crim...

Love This
XOXO
Fire

thank you beautiful Fire..

with love Crim :)

Can't say I'm an arrogant man, and I lost my swagger years ago.  More like a stumble these days.   Still, I have my moments, you sweet little vixen.  I expect you to obey my every comment.  Keep writing these amazing lines!      

Yes Sir thank you Sir Crow for making me smile :)

with love Crim

Wow! A wonderful write You have
painted the page here with.

This, "Game of Chess," sounds
exhilirating and like it would be one
to take Your time on and just enjoy
the many ways that one could
premeditate to control their opponents
pieces and every move.

Great write; with awe... Pan

thank you Pan for such a heart touching comment and I'm in awe of you :)

made my morning with the RL add thank you with love Brenda

It may be checkmate, but you as queen certainly have more than a fair few moves with the words to win the game. May you find a worthy King to rival a sultry might as yourself.

Lord Viddax thank you for such a lovely comment :)

with love Crim

dear crim: don't know how i missed this beauty.  love that you include his character..a heart of gold, shown to you at night...and the woman admits to her
faults - which makes her all that more lovable and honest..her conflicted mind/desires are thoughts many woman can relate to. an excellent poem...writing

that flows from mind to pen to paper***

thank you beautiful Shakka love your insightful comments :)

with love Crim

chess is a tough game, cold blooded, big money. two places to dominate: on the board & in bed...

thank you John your comment made me smile :)

with love Crim

This was an entertaining read. It's nice to come back in here after being gone a while and see familiar goodness like yourself.

thank you Rachel you comment touched my heart :)

welcome back dear lady..

with love Crim

I found this a tad disturbing, I suppose mainly because I don't get the dom / sub thing - I am probably the last kinda man you would want because I am into gentleness and tenderness - I have never wanted to dominate or be dominated - I need a female who is the same and who is ready and willing to tell me straight that I am being a dick, when I'm being a dick :-)

having said all that it is still masterfully written you are truly a great wordsmith :-)

thank you for your honesty David and for a lovely comment :)

with love Crim

Brillance divine, Brenda.. really love the chess references.. very cleverly done.. with love, and respect..


Dave

thank you most graciously Dave :)

with love Brenda

Oooooo Crim....another amazing write......he sounds like a very sexy guy......you deserve the best Sexy Lady.......always impressed with your thoughts in ink.....enjoyed xo :)

thank you beautiful Flower for always making me smile with your lovely comments :)

with love Crim

There's pleasure in it, in meeting a match yet a sadness throughout this of the need to still have fresh experience and new experience. I know this ship. Thank you for the write. Another well laid out write from you, lady.

thank you kindly Poppy for such an insightful comment :)

with love Crim

So easy to get caught like this and to be made to surrender to a degree against your will

so very true thank you for reading lovely lady..

love Crim