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Puff, Puff, Pass
can you feel our muse
planting opium poppies
in your mind?
poetic junkies
sewing seeds
reaping them
when they are in full bloom
dripping with intoxicating verse
dizzying high
is reading you
when she's imparted thoughts
in your head
fields of beautiful flowers
ripe for the picking
I'm not selfish
I get high and spread the wealth
not to take credit
I didn't make the drug
that is writing and creating
feel the pulse in the ether
it vibrates for you
pluck a poppy
smoke her sweet, sticky sap
speak the stories that come to mind
high on a cloud
tell us how you feel
poetic fiends yeah that's us
take another toke
write it out
puff, puff pass
I need a drag of inspiration
can anyone help
a sister out?
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Re. Puff, Puff, Pass
Anonymous
20th Aug 2015 00:42am
Miss Crim. . .I can smell the poppy's from here. . .sweet, sensual, poetic. . .Enjoyed. . .xoxo, Devlin;)
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20th Aug 2015 5:10am
Re. Puff, Puff, Pass
20th Aug 2015 00:48am
You had me at, "Puff, Puff, Pass."
I know that that shits cliche but it's
the first thing that came to mind as
I read the title Brenda.
This was a way cool original write
Brenda.
You brought it SMOOOTTTHHH.
Homage to You... Pan
I know that that shits cliche but it's
the first thing that came to mind as
I read the title Brenda.
This was a way cool original write
Brenda.
You brought it SMOOOTTTHHH.
Homage to You... Pan
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Re: Re. Puff, Puff, Pass
20th Aug 2015 5:11am
Re. Puff, Puff, Pass
20th Aug 2015 1:00am
A beautifully subdued piece. Drugs and poetry aren't so different. It's often a love hate relationship between both. Sometimes they work for us, sometimes they don't. The only difference between them is that poetry is timeless.
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20th Aug 2015 5:13am
Re. Puff, Puff, Pass
20th Aug 2015 1:01am
This is one toke over the line, like the old tune says. Been awhile since I've found opium available, and dens are few and far between. Can always dream, I guess. Really (puff) good (puff) stuff (puff), Crim. I'll try not to Bogart it.
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Re: Re. Puff, Puff, Pass
20th Aug 2015 5:14am
Re. Puff, Puff, Pass
20th Aug 2015 1:40am
Pass you the pipe....inhale hold think of reason not to
Exhale...whooooshh
Feeling good, imagine a breast, shaped like two pears with points 🍐🍐
And a cunt with cherry 🍒
Then use the pretty pics to create 👐🙌👇👉👆👊👎👍👏☝👈✌👋finger fuck
Exhale...whooooshh
Feeling good, imagine a breast, shaped like two pears with points 🍐🍐
And a cunt with cherry 🍒
Then use the pretty pics to create 👐🙌👇👉👆👊👎👍👏☝👈✌👋finger fuck
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20th Aug 2015 5:15am
ah Jennifer lovely one your comment made me giggle uncontrollably thank you beautiful :)
with love Brenda
with love Brenda
Re. Puff, Puff, Pass
20th Aug 2015 2:07am
cool write. spent nights in the barracks, passing a joint around, getting mellow, forgetting where we were...
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Re: Re. Puff, Puff, Pass
20th Aug 2015 5:16am
thank you John can only imagine the dark things you've witnessed..
love you Crim
love you Crim
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Re: Re. Puff, Puff, Pass
20th Aug 2015 7:23am
beautiful Goddess Taryn.. I love that I gave you the giggles..
I've seen the movie many times but I can't figure out exactly which scene do tell lovely one ;)
thank you for making me smile wide :)
love you Brenda
I've seen the movie many times but I can't figure out exactly which scene do tell lovely one ;)
thank you for making me smile wide :)
love you Brenda
Re. Puff, Puff, Pass
20th Aug 2015 12:43pm
Love this Crim... a magnificent write from a Magnificent Artist...
Pen Praise...
This has inspired me...
XOXO
Fire
Pen Praise...
This has inspired me...
XOXO
Fire
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Re: Re. Puff, Puff, Pass
20th Aug 2015 3:41pm
our muse must be spinning round the room today ;)
thank you lovely Fire..
with love Crim
thank you lovely Fire..
with love Crim
Re. Puff, Puff, Pass
20th Aug 2015 1:32pm
i could nod to this ^.^ love your mellow tones here... got a bit of a contact [inspiration] high, i'll be tapping that...
... fantastic muse & artist you are, darling
xoxox
... fantastic muse & artist you are, darling
xoxox
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Re: Re. Puff, Puff, Pass
20th Aug 2015 3:43pm
I miss the nod sometimes lol..
thank you beautiful one..
it's makes me smile wide that our muse is spreading the poppy juice this morning :)
love Brenda
thank you beautiful one..
it's makes me smile wide that our muse is spreading the poppy juice this morning :)
love Brenda
Re. Puff, Puff, Pass
20th Aug 2015 4:08pm
oooh yeah. puffpuffpass. words are like drugs to poets and writers. that high we feel when our heart/thoughts show up just as we like. enjoyed your poem makes me love poets all the more.
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Re: Re. Puff, Puff, Pass
20th Aug 2015 4:59pm
thank you beautiful for the lovely comment..
I agree words and poets are so addicting :)
with love Crim
I agree words and poets are so addicting :)
with love Crim
Re. Puff, Puff, Pass
21st Aug 2015 1:26pm
I am not a big drug fan, probably because i have to take so many prescribed drugs every day - I find the drugs that I've been taking a hindrance to creativity - maybe I am just taking the wrong drugs.
metaphorically speaking I am addicted to words and poetry - In that respect at least 'I am a Junkie' and proud to be so :-)
metaphorically speaking I am addicted to words and poetry - In that respect at least 'I am a Junkie' and proud to be so :-)
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21st Aug 2015 3:48pm
Re. Puff, Puff, Pass
21st Aug 2015 4:17pm
"poetic junkies
sewing seeds
reaping them"
&
"that is writing and creating
feel the pulse in the ether
it vibrates for you"
"pluck a poppy
smoke her sweet, sticky sap
speak the stories that come to mind"
~sweet gawdess yesss!
Ah LadyC that I luvs.. this is a sickle of dark [yummy] lure.. sticky & poignant. I will call middle-gal at this inspiring smoke release. middle *and double passes plsss.
I've been pen-stumped a bit lately & this just forces the mind to open & pour.
needed this poetic swack & you scribe this purrfectly! making fiends by pen, yep- that's what you're doin. I'm *fiend-ed. ;)
luvs n nuzzle gal,
~d
sewing seeds
reaping them"
&
"that is writing and creating
feel the pulse in the ether
it vibrates for you"
"pluck a poppy
smoke her sweet, sticky sap
speak the stories that come to mind"
~sweet gawdess yesss!
Ah LadyC that I luvs.. this is a sickle of dark [yummy] lure.. sticky & poignant. I will call middle-gal at this inspiring smoke release. middle *and double passes plsss.
I've been pen-stumped a bit lately & this just forces the mind to open & pour.
needed this poetic swack & you scribe this purrfectly! making fiends by pen, yep- that's what you're doin. I'm *fiend-ed. ;)
luvs n nuzzle gal,
~d
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Re: Re. Puff, Puff, Pass
21st Aug 2015 5:15pm
lovely d~ I always love your comments thank you :)
I was feeling stumped when I wrote this..
poppies of the mind kept coming to mind..
so I though I would right around my block..
take a big toke of inspiration beautiful ;)
with love Brenda
I was feeling stumped when I wrote this..
poppies of the mind kept coming to mind..
so I though I would right around my block..
take a big toke of inspiration beautiful ;)
with love Brenda
Re. Puff, Puff, Pass
Anonymous
21st Aug 2015 8:57pm
Brenda, brilliantly written.. i don't smoke anymore.. but i really like how words just flowed in this.. with love, and respect..
Dave
Dave
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22nd Aug 2015 3:08pm
Re. Puff, Puff, Pass
23rd Aug 2015 1:47am
Holding breath, passing it, "Heeire!" :)
I'll gladly take a toke with you, lovely little lass. Anytime. Just don't Bog' it. ;)
Feel the love I'm sending for this ink.
you know,
C.
I'll gladly take a toke with you, lovely little lass. Anytime. Just don't Bog' it. ;)
Feel the love I'm sending for this ink.
you know,
C.
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I feel the love Chad thank you..
sending a toke of inspiration back your way :)
with love Brenda