Shallow

Ahhh, crimsin, luv ~ :-*

Unveiled, indeed, you are here, ne c'est pas? :-*

You do realize, don't you, luv, that your admonition falls upon those already smitten? ;-*

By you.

Of course. Mais, bien sûr, chérie.

We're all already lost... :-*

I never saw it that way lovely Savaja thank you beautiful lady for giving me a new perspective..

and for making me smile wide this morning :)

with love Crim

heh i find myself agreeing with the oracle above... but it's the arrogance that does it, no? the inky swagger, that cocksure flow... it makes a girl curious
*sigh*
i could tread water in your shallows, beautiful one
xoxox

thank you beautiful Katja you're right it is the arrogance that does it for me..

I won't heed my own advise I will continue to fall for poets and poetesses..

I love you lady :) Brenda

Brenda, this is beautiful.. i really enjoyed it.. painted with brilliance.. from your crimsin brush.. into the list it goes.. with love, and respect..


Dave

thank you Dave..

smiling widely at you :)

with love Brenda

I love this Crim, and I've fallen a couple of times myself, so it works both ways.  My heart follows its own course, fortunately or unfortunately.  Personas get in the way and block the actual person behind the lines far too much of the time.  You seem realer than most here, the irredeemably diabolical Crim notwithstanding.  See you in the deep end!

I love that you see me as diabolical Sir Crow..

what a compliment :)

yes I will continue to fall for poets and poetesses it is the way of things here I think..

it does indeed go both ways..

i'll be nude when I meet you in the deep end ;)

Miss Crim, Miss Crim. . .but isn't that the beauty of falling for a Poet just so we can pen poems such as this one. . .This one that hits the nail right on the head?. . .I've had my share of heartache and heartbreak both in and out of the poetic world. . .yet, I can't help but to fall. . .If only poets were true in real life as they are in their poems, love would be so. . .Well, I'll just leave it at that. . .Enjoyed. . .immensely. . .xoxo, Devlin;)

it is the beauty of it we fascinate, go through tragedies together, titillate peoples minds..

thank you lovely Lady Of Darkness for pointing that out to me..

our hearts will be broke and we will break hearts..

is the nature of being so closely connected..

so pleased you enjoyed this made me smile wide today :)

with love Crim

poetry may be the great deception. & the male poet: his arrogance is legendary...

John I have a confession I love the arrogant male and woman ;)

thank you for leaving your thoughts they are treasured..

with love Crim

hi crimsin:  wow...this poem is "making me feel a way"  as the teenagers say. yup shallow, we all have lusted over someone's looks and I for one have had a fun time imaging how a poet really is. however you are right, poets are a dangerous lot and if they are appealing to the eye look out. the thrill of what we can't have never seems to get old.  very cool poem.

thank you lovely one wow are you sharp..

you made me smile wide with your take on things :)

so insightful beautiful and I agree with you..

their look and arrogance just adds to the spice :)

with love Crim

Yes indeed Savaja.
Im smitten Crim for sure! 💋
And no doubt, far back in a long line.

ah Jennifer beautiful one..

you touched my heart with your comment

thank you with love Brenda

thank you beautiful Taryn for such a heart warming comment..

of course I am smitten with you ladies as well..

all unique beauties..

I'm very curious about you secret but know you will share when the time is right :)

love you lady Brenda

"..... a real arrogant bastard"
Damn your honesty, lovely lass. ;)
I thought I had you fooled. :D

There is no pinnacle without the valley.
There is no ecstasy without the fall.

Outstanding ink!

you know,  ;)
C.

thank you for the smile and great comment Chad :)

with love Brenda

Well thanks a lot Crim for warning off all my meager chances
at some sexy, hot, eager women!! lol... But hell yea I hear ya
Poets are pretty arrogant in general lol

aw Poe truth be told I love the arrogant poet..

thank you for the visit they are cherished :)

with love Brenda

I think you just drew a line in the sand with a severed penis... damn fine words, crim. [Cocksure poets, I thought they all got castrated way back when poetry was cool].

Seems I'm always dropping by when you create something bleeding from the heart, makes for some powerful poetry. Shine on, Brenda.

Thank you Mr. Case though I love a cocksure poet..

hope I wasn't too harsh :)

with love Brenda