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That Familiar Un-"Zzzipp"
Exposing my [nice]side ..as small curling moon,
ass-high black nightshirt.. silk-unbuttoned past two.
In matching lace g-string ..gemed navel peeks through,
my hand circles tummy ..tugs steel onyx loop.
Mossy eyes gauge moon-hour~ on thoughts of you..
[recalling our perfect fit lying in spoon-
when your thick-tip sharp pierced my womb.]
Lace torn aside ..parting my slick as you'd do..
..My fingers twirl lower ..push bold in wet bloom.
~
Ruby-raw choker-cords wrap three rings tight,
engraving ankles~wrists~neck.. as love-binds.
My chin tips.. tongue dips ..licks a rosed-bud on sigh,
fingers swirl your name hard ..arch lifting hip grind.
Eyes glow with throat-choke.. squeeze knees, soaking thighs,
both hands force three fingers ~sink tangled, stretch wide..
My thumbs press moist button in circled wet ply,
pinkies trace skin trail.. deep probing backside.
Virgo tallies.. [sunk six ..two tease ..thumbs glide]..
strokes twist-flick, drench wrists.. long 'in-&-out' slides.
Cords tighten ..pink muscles[gush~cream] ..crescent~shine~
"Sweet-Hells!" ..low moaning in fast paced lip bite,
[body pout whimpers for your fierce blows inside]
~
I punish my fingers for not being you..
Heartbeat skips ..at familiar Un-"Zzzipp"..heard by *two*
Imagine my hot love rise.. when in walks.. You.
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Re. That Familiar Un-"Zzzipp"
9th Aug 2015 9:38pm
Re: Re. That Familiar Un-"Zzzipp"
10th Aug 2015 6:31pm
Sweet lady Sissy of hawt pen, your read is most appreciated, ty!
hope you have a stunning day dears ;)
~d
hope you have a stunning day dears ;)
~d
Re. That Familiar Un-"Zzzipp"
Anonymous
9th Aug 2015 9:39pm
Oh boy, what an exhibitionist ride for all concerned,, dark, the reader and then in walks You!
This indepth exploration has me in a feel of . . . Sexcess!!!
This indepth exploration has me in a feel of . . . Sexcess!!!
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Re: Re. That Familiar Un-"Zzzipp"
10th Aug 2015 6:37pm
Yayyy.. most 'S' words are good at first thought.. ever happy to Share the Steamy Stuff So written.. smirks.
many thank you's fer your Sweet review misters, I am a'grin ;)
smiles your way, appreciate you greatly!
lil curtsies,
~d
many thank you's fer your Sweet review misters, I am a'grin ;)
smiles your way, appreciate you greatly!
lil curtsies,
~d
Re. That Familiar Un-"Zzzipp"
9th Aug 2015 9:51pm
"Licks a rosed-bud on a sigh." This is detail that will stick with my obsessions, particularly with "Citizen Kane." "Rosebud" was his dying word, and the subject of one scandalous secret about your kind of bud that almost got the film destroyed by William Randolph Hearst. But I digress. You have a genuinely unique way with words, Darksighs. You take plenty of liberties with the King's English (which can be too fucking stiff) and pull it off with style. Always!
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Re: Re. That Familiar Un-"Zzzipp"
10th Aug 2015 6:46pm
Omgddss.. ha! ..you are soo correct on that line.. *toe-curlin giggles at that, sweet Crow..
now You've warped My lil brain, which I had not thought possible. lmsao* So the poor guys last thought Was a good one, at least. lol. love that film.
I am in honest sniffles w/your kind reply, as I know I'm over-guilty of slaying the poor language. hughug
and *do swack me if I hack it past redemption, yes? grinnin' ty's.
You are much cherished on my page misters, appreciate ur witty humors ;)
~d
now You've warped My lil brain, which I had not thought possible. lmsao* So the poor guys last thought Was a good one, at least. lol. love that film.
I am in honest sniffles w/your kind reply, as I know I'm over-guilty of slaying the poor language. hughug
and *do swack me if I hack it past redemption, yes? grinnin' ty's.
You are much cherished on my page misters, appreciate ur witty humors ;)
~d
Re. That Familiar Un-"Zzzipp"
9th Aug 2015 10:25pm
Re: Re. That Familiar Un-"Zzzipp"
10th Aug 2015 6:49pm
So gods-damn fancy having your read, sir PoetS.. And a great day to you!
the lady curtsies so low,
~d
the lady curtsies so low,
~d
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Re: Re. That Familiar Un-"Zzzipp"
10th Aug 2015 6:56pm
That's it!.. your comments are too much adorable, sweet Taryn OFK.. you gets the ball n bar kisses fer reading.. *mwahs. ..b'sides, it's a safe day to make you squirm! ;)
my pen & I had some fierce tanglings here so I'm glad to see sum good come of the tussle! lol
always loves & appreciation, my sissy.. miles & miles of,
~d
my pen & I had some fierce tanglings here so I'm glad to see sum good come of the tussle! lol
always loves & appreciation, my sissy.. miles & miles of,
~d
Re. That Familiar Un-"Zzzipp"
10th Aug 2015 1:44am
Where to begin, the opening was so sensual in its description of the beautiful, sexy woman lying there.
Beautiful sexy images conveyed with perfect wording.
favorite line "fingers swirl your name hard...arch lifting hip grind"
Can think of no better place to have your name written.
Lucky man that object of your desires. Very hot, really enjoyed.
K2m
Beautiful sexy images conveyed with perfect wording.
favorite line "fingers swirl your name hard...arch lifting hip grind"
Can think of no better place to have your name written.
Lucky man that object of your desires. Very hot, really enjoyed.
K2m
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Re: Re. That Familiar Un-"Zzzipp"
10th Aug 2015 7:02pm
I am so happy [mushy-happy, even].. that you'd see the gentler desire here too.
Awesome, you.. thank you SO much!..will always be hard-soft blends when I win the fight w/my naughty pen.
best day to you sweetie.. mondays sukkk for me. lol ;)
a curtsied appreciation,
~d
Awesome, you.. thank you SO much!..will always be hard-soft blends when I win the fight w/my naughty pen.
best day to you sweetie.. mondays sukkk for me. lol ;)
a curtsied appreciation,
~d
Re. That Familiar Un-"Zzzipp"
lovely d~ you are so dazzling with your seductive ink..
you would surely seduce the angels from their seats on high..
with your beauty and charm..
I have stars in my eyes for you with lines like this..
"My thumbs press moist button in circled wet ply,
pinkies trace skin trail.. deep probing backside.
Virgo tallies.. [sunk six ..two tease ..thumbs glide]..
strokes twist-flick, drench wrists.. long 'in-&-out' slides.
Cords tighten ..pink muscles[gush~cream] ..crescent~shine~
"Sweet-Hells!" ..low moaning in fast paced lip bite,
[body pout whimpers for your fierce blows inside]"
blood pounding, pussy creaming..
in awe of your seductive ink
with love Crim
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Re: Re. That Familiar Un-"Zzzipp"
10th Aug 2015 7:09pm
Omfg.. you have creamed my coffee w/your sexy self, LadyCrim..!!
so glad to be sharing works tween us, as I think we cud both sully an angel at [pen]stroke..
*sweet hells, yes!
Virgo's and the tally's.. gotsa keep tabs on all in and outs..ocd-like. eg's
loves you darlins, you brighten & drip my page every time!
~d
so glad to be sharing works tween us, as I think we cud both sully an angel at [pen]stroke..
*sweet hells, yes!
Virgo's and the tally's.. gotsa keep tabs on all in and outs..ocd-like. eg's
loves you darlins, you brighten & drip my page every time!
~d
Re. That Familiar Un-"Zzzipp"
10th Aug 2015 6:54am
o,
my goo'ness, eXcuse me my
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y.........................(.Oh, why fly so not so high, ol'guy?)
my goo'ness, eXcuse me my
open
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y.........................(.Oh, why fly so not so high, ol'guy?)
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Re: Re. That Familiar Un-"Zzzipp"
10th Aug 2015 7:13pm
You grin me graciously, sirz o D, so glad to have the swooning[attentive] reply! ;)
always loves havin you here.. tyty.
*heart hugs to your day, sweetie!
~d
always loves havin you here.. tyty.
*heart hugs to your day, sweetie!
~d
Re. That Familiar Un-"Zzzipp"
10th Aug 2015 3:53pm
I love the imagery of probing fingers front and back. I would normally say take a pic, but I erected the picture and hung it straight up. Thank you.
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Re: Re. That Familiar Un-"Zzzipp"
10th Aug 2015 7:18pm
oh.. sweet fuks & grin!.. you are a charmer of smiles y'know? [yes, you do] ;)
ever appreciate the read & smirks, mister 'naughty-as-me' poet. ..ty for takin' time..
sizzlin days to you!
~d
ever appreciate the read & smirks, mister 'naughty-as-me' poet. ..ty for takin' time..
sizzlin days to you!
~d
Re. That Familiar Un-"Zzzipp"
10th Aug 2015 7:19pm
Re: Re. That Familiar Un-"Zzzipp"
10th Aug 2015 10:35pm
You are such the sweet Magic man fer sayin so, tyty! Your support means much to my pen.
heartfelt thanx m'friend!
everly be well ;)
~d
heartfelt thanx m'friend!
everly be well ;)
~d
Re. That Familiar Un-"Zzzipp"
Re. That Familiar Un-"Zzzipp"
12th Aug 2015 1:01pm
you know i'm gonna be trying this out tonight yes? ass to the door & pray the rabi doesn't walk in first ltm
*
oh sister sighs, you're wicked & gloriously so darlin...
"I punish my fingers for not being you..
Heartbeat skips ..at familiar Un-"Zzzipp"..heard by *two*
Imagine my hot love rise.. when in walks.. You."
^^^^^
jaysus, be still my beating heart!
... you are a sensual goddess
xoxox
*
oh sister sighs, you're wicked & gloriously so darlin...
"I punish my fingers for not being you..
Heartbeat skips ..at familiar Un-"Zzzipp"..heard by *two*
Imagine my hot love rise.. when in walks.. You."
^^^^^
jaysus, be still my beating heart!
... you are a sensual goddess
xoxox
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Re: Re. That Familiar Un-"Zzzipp"
12th Aug 2015 7:57pm
Awwes, you've made my crappy morning turn brightly devious! hugs, in teeth-clenching lip bites.. at thoughts of you trying this while watchin the door! lmfao/ & squeaks*.. you are so sexy perfect in thought & fer reading! 'Tis one of many reasons that I maul you wif loooves in-squirm..
mwahs fer the visit my darling sissyK! ..[she says while giving you glazed kitten lusty eyes]
~ d
mwahs fer the visit my darling sissyK! ..[she says while giving you glazed kitten lusty eyes]
~ d
Re. That Familiar Un-"Zzzipp"
18th Aug 2015 1:35pm
My god to see you in that black shirt, unbuttoned past two. Sweet tummy glittering with a jewel. And then the underneath of that g string pulled aside.
My un zzzzip would be fast and furious.
To have a few moments at least of the fabled nice side.
Mmmm. Swell and ache. 🌹
My un zzzzip would be fast and furious.
To have a few moments at least of the fabled nice side.
Mmmm. Swell and ache. 🌹
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