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Pleasing 'you'- Pleases 'we'
Bold tongue-menace me in hard nibbling screams,
"deepdeep punishing".. heat greedy need-seeps.
Bring lush silkened gush.. lick ache's weeping hush,
Jade addiction in squeaks. now taste.. taste .. taste~
wet clenched places with mouthy disgraces,
feed primal on me.. rubbing our soaked faces.
~
Grant my suck with hip-full grind-&-buck twists,
pulling out slow.. cock-slap rose-pouted lips..
kiss my grin of bloodied spaces.. and sip,
warm nuzzle-ing cheeks.. in love-suckled licks.
Share salt-sweet flavors of smooth everthick..
then thrust your swelled gag down tipped throat again.
~
Standing we.. your bent knees hit behind mine,
forceful push-push.. teasing savage rough slide.
Calloused palm to tummy, catching my waist..
hot dripping.. my tightness squeezes filled space.
Begging by eyes.. endless penetration,
dark pleas[e] of blended soft~hard invasion..
~
Want you to wear me forever.. own me in cream..
Pleasing 'you'- pleases 'we'.. just fucking hurt me!
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Re. Pleasing 'you'- Pleases 'we'
7th Aug 2015 9:54pm
lovely d~ so creamy and delicious is this sexy ink..
"Standing we.. your bent knees hit behind mine,
forceful push-push.. teasing savage rough slide.
Calloused palm to tummy, catching my waist..
hot dripping.. my tightness squeezes filled space.
Begging by eyes.. endless penetration,
dark pleas[e] of blended soft~hard invasion.."
yummy says while lapping at the page :)
"Want you to wear me forever.. own me in cream..
Pleasing 'you'- pleases 'we'.. just fucking hurt me!"
love the dominant touch in this write
with love Crim
"Standing we.. your bent knees hit behind mine,
forceful push-push.. teasing savage rough slide.
Calloused palm to tummy, catching my waist..
hot dripping.. my tightness squeezes filled space.
Begging by eyes.. endless penetration,
dark pleas[e] of blended soft~hard invasion.."
yummy says while lapping at the page :)
"Want you to wear me forever.. own me in cream..
Pleasing 'you'- pleases 'we'.. just fucking hurt me!"
love the dominant touch in this write
with love Crim
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Re: Re. Pleasing 'you'- Pleases 'we'
8th Aug 2015 3:02am
Omfg.. my lady loves..would you believe it was started as an 'I submit' poem.. but I'm guessing my wicked
muse took over pen .. and, well.. she does what she wants.. *lmsao .. I just back..awaaay. ;)
Seriously working on lotts half-finished stuffs laying around.adds too fast to piles..eeks!
Adores you, in dark sparkle fer taking time on me, LadyCrim of creamy replies..*mwahs
good eve to you in wicked thankins..
~d
muse took over pen .. and, well.. she does what she wants.. *lmsao .. I just back..awaaay. ;)
Seriously working on lotts half-finished stuffs laying around.adds too fast to piles..eeks!
Adores you, in dark sparkle fer taking time on me, LadyCrim of creamy replies..*mwahs
good eve to you in wicked thankins..
~d
Re. Pleasing 'you'- Pleases 'we'
7th Aug 2015 9:59pm
Those last two lines teeter dangerously on becoming romantic until that "just fucking hurt me." Hmmmm.....trying you on for size and finding the pleasure to be mutual. Who could ask for anything more? Another fine turn on Darksighs!
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Re: Re. Pleasing 'you'- Pleases 'we'
8th Aug 2015 3:24am
Awww.. and yay.. I teetered, and dangerously! eg. but..but, Sirs of Crow..the hurtins ...? very romantic, no? [smirk] ..was just not meant to be a mushy, though I tried..
I am so grateful fer your feedback misters, aiming to blend of soft and hard.. kinda colliding together most times but do trash/edit a lot.. am vera glad you've affirmed not to burn this 'un.
..oh.. and they said you only get so much time in that sizing room, y'know? ;) tick-tock. ha's & ty's sweetie!
sparkles to ur nite time,
~d
I am so grateful fer your feedback misters, aiming to blend of soft and hard.. kinda colliding together most times but do trash/edit a lot.. am vera glad you've affirmed not to burn this 'un.
..oh.. and they said you only get so much time in that sizing room, y'know? ;) tick-tock. ha's & ty's sweetie!
sparkles to ur nite time,
~d
Re. Pleasing 'you'- Pleases 'we'
7th Aug 2015 10:05pm
What do I love about this poem? my mouth watered throughout, it has such brilliant intensity
to keep the reader on the edge, deeply mesmerized. Great write.
to keep the reader on the edge, deeply mesmerized. Great write.
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Re: Re. Pleasing 'you'- Pleases 'we'
8th Aug 2015 3:38am
After peeking into your naughty closet this eve.. I must say.. dittos on that mouth-watering aspect!
Your presence means so much & your comment, even more.. ty's & have a shiny weekend, dear lady ;)
~d
Your presence means so much & your comment, even more.. ty's & have a shiny weekend, dear lady ;)
~d
Re. Pleasing 'you'- Pleases 'we'
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- Edited 7th Aug 2015 10:22pm
7th Aug 2015 10:20pm
Jeez! This one is like a homerun ball belted out of the park. I imagine I will read that second verse off and on for a week. I mean . . .
"warm nuzzle-ing cheeks.. in love-suckled licks. / Share salt-sweet flavors of smooth everthick.. / then thrust your swelled gag down tipped throat again."
Dayum Tanya! My eyes haven't blinked since I read those three lines. Never mind all the rest of the poem. You were downright cum-sexy, but these three lines grabbed me where you wanted them to grab any man . . .
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Re: Re. Pleasing 'you'- Pleases 'we'
8th Aug 2015 3:50am
I'm tickled to get a curse word outta you, Jerry dears.. am all smiles, ty!
Loving hells outta you misters.. but *do wantcha to blink again.. I'd get worried y'know? grins*
you very much pegged a few of my pet favorite lines here too..I deeply enjoy & appreciate
your comments, m'friend.. have a stellar weekend, says me ;)
~d
Loving hells outta you misters.. but *do wantcha to blink again.. I'd get worried y'know? grins*
you very much pegged a few of my pet favorite lines here too..I deeply enjoy & appreciate
your comments, m'friend.. have a stellar weekend, says me ;)
~d
Re. Pleasing 'you'- Pleases 'we'
7th Aug 2015 11:14pm
Wow...ur on a sensual, sexy roll my dear! N yea, it's 'HARD'not to be heated by ur spills... :)
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Re: Re. Pleasing 'you'- Pleases 'we'
8th Aug 2015 4:01am
Hello's.. most awesome mistersPoet! ..am always happy to see you on my page, sendin u awwes of thanx ;)
aaand I appreciate your appreciation, sweetie! Hope your weekend spanks royale ass..
curtsies in grin,
~d
aaand I appreciate your appreciation, sweetie! Hope your weekend spanks royale ass..
curtsies in grin,
~d
Re. Pleasing 'you'- Pleases 'we'
7th Aug 2015 11:40pm
wow this ink definitely sizzling and pleasing to read... wicked and sexy ink darksighs
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Re: Re. Pleasing 'you'- Pleases 'we'
8th Aug 2015 4:06am
You give humbling words to this dark sighing pen misters Magic! hugs fer your presence my dear friend.. & thanx so much fer the visit. bright smiles on your weekend ;)
w/curtsies of 'Be well'
~d
w/curtsies of 'Be well'
~d
Re. Pleasing 'you'- Pleases 'we'
8th Aug 2015 1:39am
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8th Aug 2015 4:14am
Lady Sissy.. you are a warm blessing on my page and I smile every time I get to say hihi!
following you now & will be delving into everyone's posting closets more this weekend.. warning/lol.
I'm sending wishes for your week's end to absolutely rock! ;)
all my dark~sighing thanx for the read!
~d
following you now & will be delving into everyone's posting closets more this weekend.. warning/lol.
I'm sending wishes for your week's end to absolutely rock! ;)
all my dark~sighing thanx for the read!
~d
Re. Pleasing 'you'- Pleases 'we'
8th Aug 2015 2:13am
Oh my!! " I see pleasing you..pleases we" and most certainly mind blowing to me
Youre nothing short of spectacular D~
Youre nothing short of spectacular D~
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Re: Re. Pleasing 'you'- Pleases 'we'
8th Aug 2015 5:55am
I'm adoring you, lil darlin.. AND you left me poetic response here? awws & gawds...how amazingly sweet!
in endless *ka-thump* ..my dark-sparkled heart is a'smile at your thoughts & comments.. ty so much! ;)
it's so refreshing to share poetry with like[open]-minded writers.. all shiny wishes to your weekend doll!
~d
in endless *ka-thump* ..my dark-sparkled heart is a'smile at your thoughts & comments.. ty so much! ;)
it's so refreshing to share poetry with like[open]-minded writers.. all shiny wishes to your weekend doll!
~d
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Re: Re. Pleasing 'you'- Pleases 'we'
8th Aug 2015 6:13am
"Oh you little......I'm gonna".. <~~ eeeks!.she sees the swack & ducks juuust in time.. but still spills her damn cuervo! ..*rofl w/toe curls.. will I never learn to put *down my drinks? ..
You Kill me sweet Taryn, hawtest Faery Queen..fer the new dubb of splendor- luvluv my new title, acronyms just Rocketh..;)
And 10-4 the detail.. will be ur bestie of the weekend smutties. yays. I gotchu, no worries.
~> yes I Knew..the you/we statute.. if there be a vein or tipped throat, we soo copy/paste/squirm.*cackles
maulin luvz right back,
~d
You Kill me sweet Taryn, hawtest Faery Queen..fer the new dubb of splendor- luvluv my new title, acronyms just Rocketh..;)
And 10-4 the detail.. will be ur bestie of the weekend smutties. yays. I gotchu, no worries.
~> yes I Knew..the you/we statute.. if there be a vein or tipped throat, we soo copy/paste/squirm.*cackles
maulin luvz right back,
~d
Re. Pleasing 'you'- Pleases 'we'
8th Aug 2015 5:24am
A standing o-rection. My cock would like to personally shake your hand for this marvelous piece. Love that creamy ending. As usual, DS, you have lovely words that are pronounced from those lips.
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Re: Re. Pleasing 'you'- Pleases 'we'
8th Aug 2015 6:32am
was it moist [hand]shake, warm heart/hard.. hmm.. brain fuzz.. I will figure how it goes misters..;)
always too damn cool to banter with your same dark wit.. you are a pleasure to my page sweetie, ty!
may weekend sizzle be yours m'friend.. don't be good..it's solid advice. eg
fond curtsies..
~d
always too damn cool to banter with your same dark wit.. you are a pleasure to my page sweetie, ty!
may weekend sizzle be yours m'friend.. don't be good..it's solid advice. eg
fond curtsies..
~d
Re. Pleasing 'you'- Pleases 'we'
8th Aug 2015 8:27pm
Hot ink my Lady, You can describe the raw emotion of sex so vividly.
Very hot, lucky you; lucky him. Thank for serving up this
hot write. :) k2m
Very hot, lucky you; lucky him. Thank for serving up this
hot write. :) k2m
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Re: Re. Pleasing 'you'- Pleases 'we'
10th Aug 2015 5:29pm
Hello's sweet D.. much thanx.. I had a rowdy pen fight fer sure..;) eg
ever appreciate the read misters- adores havin' you & hope you had fab wknd!
laters w/grin
~d
ever appreciate the read misters- adores havin' you & hope you had fab wknd!
laters w/grin
~d
Re. Pleasing 'you'- Pleases 'we'
8th Aug 2015 9:19pm
Re: Re. Pleasing 'you'- Pleases 'we'
10th Aug 2015 5:34pm
awww ...and I fucking honestly appreciate it PoetS !
be-stills my heart to have here.. thanx much m'dears ;)
~d
be-stills my heart to have here.. thanx much m'dears ;)
~d
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Re: Re. Pleasing 'you'- Pleases 'we'
10th Aug 2015 5:47pm
You are so darn perceptive, loves! I adore your comments every time..
Agrees on your take of the beauty in submission. ~such a poetic response too.. omg.. this:
"there is such intoxicating power! To control the ebb and flow of lust filled seas swelling from one act to the next exponentially!" ..beauty there m'lady!
when it starts with [hopefully] loves & [always]respect- I am *all old-fashioned submit.. playful included.;)
Your swoon just entices my pen, kindred one.. & you get soul-sister kisses for the smiles you put on
my page! thanx much, in fond curtsies,
~d
Agrees on your take of the beauty in submission. ~such a poetic response too.. omg.. this:
"there is such intoxicating power! To control the ebb and flow of lust filled seas swelling from one act to the next exponentially!" ..beauty there m'lady!
when it starts with [hopefully] loves & [always]respect- I am *all old-fashioned submit.. playful included.;)
Your swoon just entices my pen, kindred one.. & you get soul-sister kisses for the smiles you put on
my page! thanx much, in fond curtsies,
~d
Re. Pleasing 'you'- Pleases 'we'
9th Aug 2015 9:10pm
"lick ache's weeping hush"
i'm sitting here (marlboro in hand) puffing for a word to describe your inky ability... archaic, no... timeless, yes indeed darling sister of softest sensual sighs
*
ohhhh the gorgeousness of this is something utterly otherworldly....
"Grant my suck with hip-full grind-&-buck twists,
pulling out slow.. cock-slap rose-pouted lips..
kiss my grin of bloodied spaces.. and sip,
warm nuzzle-ing cheeks.. in love-suckled licks.
Share salt-sweet flavors of smooth everthick..
then thrust your swelled gag down tipped throat again."
.... reflexive swallows happening here, so delicious this passage of yours
[&]
"just fucking hurt me!"
^^^^^^
masochist purrrrrrs
loveeeeed this!
xoxoxox
i'm sitting here (marlboro in hand) puffing for a word to describe your inky ability... archaic, no... timeless, yes indeed darling sister of softest sensual sighs
*
ohhhh the gorgeousness of this is something utterly otherworldly....
"Grant my suck with hip-full grind-&-buck twists,
pulling out slow.. cock-slap rose-pouted lips..
kiss my grin of bloodied spaces.. and sip,
warm nuzzle-ing cheeks.. in love-suckled licks.
Share salt-sweet flavors of smooth everthick..
then thrust your swelled gag down tipped throat again."
.... reflexive swallows happening here, so delicious this passage of yours
[&]
"just fucking hurt me!"
^^^^^^
masochist purrrrrrs
loveeeeed this!
xoxoxox
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Re: Re. Pleasing 'you'- Pleases 'we'
10th Aug 2015 6:00pm
I soo knew we'd agree on the cock-slap!.. Callin' it.. 'sisterly intuition' [winxys] 'cause, cud also be the ebb of hormonal overflow to appreciate & reciprocate smutties too.. but def the intuition.. *lmsao
Now, just fer getting purrrs from you, lil darlins...you've enticed me to spark up the southern-cut [my latest marlboro crave]. Y'know-- we *should get, idk, royalties/free cartons fer mentioning their cigs in comments. ha! dare to dream, I tell me. ;)
sweetest mauls of lovins on you 'K of perfect Alls'
~d
Now, just fer getting purrrs from you, lil darlins...you've enticed me to spark up the southern-cut [my latest marlboro crave]. Y'know-- we *should get, idk, royalties/free cartons fer mentioning their cigs in comments. ha! dare to dream, I tell me. ;)
sweetest mauls of lovins on you 'K of perfect Alls'
~d
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