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The Kiss of Nine
This is entered in the "Sub or Dom ?" competition
A cat 'o nine tails
Each lash slender but strong
It connects with her imperfect skin
Preparatory to the golden rod
Delivered by her favored god.
A cat 'o nine tails
Each lash slender but strong
It connects with her imperfect skin
Preparatory to the golden rod
Delivered by her favored god.
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Re. The Kiss of Nine
7th Aug 2015 00:45am
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7th Aug 2015 1:10am
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Anonymous
7th Aug 2015 2:25am
The Cat. . .Deadly, but beautiful. . .Good Luck with the comp, CrowFly. .. xoxo, Devlin;)
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7th Aug 2015 2:38am
Re. The Kiss of Nine
7th Aug 2015 3:27am
Love sweet hells outta ur title dearest! .. this be where 'nine' wud neeever mean 'no/nein'... so nicely done ;)
"course now there's no guessin, as you've given up position w/ this accessory.. *grins. I will keep this info shh & shush kkk?
lol.. seriously, this is a finely tasteful naughty & a great comp entry, Sir of Crow.. enjoyed it!
evenin curtsies m'friend,
~d
"course now there's no guessin, as you've given up position w/ this accessory.. *grins. I will keep this info shh & shush kkk?
lol.. seriously, this is a finely tasteful naughty & a great comp entry, Sir of Crow.. enjoyed it!
evenin curtsies m'friend,
~d
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7th Aug 2015 4:15am
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Re. The Kiss of Nine
7th Aug 2015 5:44am
"Delivered by her favored God" Excellent line! And apropos to the category. Make sure she feels deserving of it. Nice erotica Crow.
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Re. The Kiss of Nine
7th Aug 2015 12:02pm
ooooooooh one of my fave toys ever!!! i'm about as giddy as taryn ltm
a fine piece of erotica, crowfly... best of luck with the comp
a fine piece of erotica, crowfly... best of luck with the comp
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Re. The Kiss of Nine
7th Aug 2015 6:05pm
Crow, this is well composed and evokes a quite visceral reaction. Good luck!
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Re. The Kiss of Nine
21st Aug 2015 11:42am
Lovely, stylish, sexy, and succinct. Visceral is a great word to describe your words. Always the right length to elicit the greatest response. Excellent ink, Sir Crow.
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24th Aug 2015 1:48am
I hope you did not hear my shrilling? ok good.
This conjured so much room for my lobes.
Delivered by her favored god.. oh goodness
This conjured so much room for my lobes.
Delivered by her favored god.. oh goodness
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