Atomic

then,when it rains
it rains immaculate

this entire piece is stunning, but those two lines just....make the entire thing for me.

and the last two lines...perfection. well done. very well done.

I was listening to the Doors earlier so there's an influence from some of their songs, and I was listening to Blondie too so that's where the title came from

you're very kind, lady

thanks heaps and bunches for visiting and leaving your thought print

and indeed for the listing

Craic this is a gorgeous write with love Crim

ahh, Brenda

..you're gorgeous, and kind too

thank you , appreciate your visits and thoughts

your font's showing [no, that's not a line] right there at the end
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a neat lil write craic, concise, emotive without being too sappy...
...  dig it
~ k

cheers, Lady

I can't seem to tuck the font in, I've tried twice, I'll have to take it off altogether and just leave the italics

thanks for visiting and leaving your thoughts, much appreciated

Incredible, breathtaking piece. Many captivating lines. Love it.

Thank you most much for dropping by and leaving your thoughts, Wounded heart, and also for sticking this little number on your listing

Sir Craic (if I may). . .this is a very beautiful and captivating piece; not the norm of your poetic tongue. . .This piece definitely speaks volumes from deep within your poetic heart. . .Enjoyed much. . .xoxo, Devlin;)

Lady Devlin

thank you. I'd like to say I tried to take it away from the norm, but truth is I just jotted down how I felt and employed minimal edits ..which I suppose the latter is no doubt not the norm heh heh

thanks heaps n bunches for your visit and thoughts, good Lady

This is simply beautiful... !!

much like your good self, Lady

many thanks for dropping by and leaving your thoughts

I am chiming in with all. A marvel you have lette us see and experience here.
This share is such a warming signature
of ink.

Lovely view hun.

Hello, Lady

Very kind of you to drop in and leave your footprint, and I am much obliged for both

Tip of 'my' tongue

very nice!

Cheers, man

thanks for visit and words, hope all is well with you

eh... it is what it is... trying to make better.

Hullo forgot to say :   ' tip of my tongue ' makes perfect sense. reads propper I think I'd originally put  " tip o' tongue "   figured it sounded nice and sharp, didn't really like the look of it though, so compromised reading it now, I dunno you could be right. I'll try it, see how it sits.  I know its only one small word. but its a whole syllable nonetheless 😲

does sound nice though. :)

the emotions this poem brings forth are amazing  
...as is the imagery.                  

you're a true wordsmith.      

well, hullo pretty     very happy to bring forth emotions, Lady. It's what makes it all worth while   and you're more than welcome for the images    ...call it quid pros quo   thanks muchly for visiting and leaving a piece of yourself

Such a lovely and sweet love poem you wrote here.
It was really beautiful :)

thank you, Miss Jackson

 and thank you for dropping by to read and leave your thoughts

I'm on my jollies, but just popped into a pub that happens to have wi-fi, so I'm checking in around the place.

This is pretty gorgeous, you smooth talkin' devil, you. I already mentioned the title had me singing Blondie straight away. I think what I like about it most is the contrast between the soft gentle lyrics and the brashness of bombs and more violent imagery. The whole read is a crescendo, from start to finish.

I really dig it. 👍

wow ...does hubby know you 'found wifi' in the remote Scottish wilderness. back at camp banging two blades of grass together while you forage half points :)-

'Smooth talkin' devil' ..I can live with that. yeah, there's not much mention of sinister but what little there is creates a decent balance, I think

thanks most lots for dropping in, missus

and for leaving your thoughts

The imagery in this is such that you can literally see the hair waving slowly as though underwater.

that's a nice image right there, I immediately thought of the old timotei adverts.

cheers for stopping by and leaving your footprint, Ahavati

yes, but Flora light would have said it with less syllables

This made me all warm and fuzzy inside. Loved it. :)

thanks most much, mysterious one

it's always a pleasure to instills a warm and fuzzy feeling into a lady

cheers for dropping by, leaving your footprint , and listing

much,appreciated

Very lovely and concise...much as a well honed stiletto in the dark. The imagery hits sharp and furious

"and she is the snow "

and the reader is pulled through the rest of the piece. Wonderful.

Hullo

thank you kindly, good person. delighted to have you drop by and leave your foot-print

For me you evoked the muses that inspired Hendrix to write "Little Wing" (at the end), and Sting's "All Four Seasons"

https://youtu.be/iEuVH_16vRg   Hendrix is in a class of his own, the link is my favorite Little wing cover.

reading back on this poem is hard enough, to be honest, but I thank you for bringing me here again

thanks also for dropping by, good fellow, and for leaving your thoughts

Well with more reflection, "The Wind Cries Mary", could also apply

How sweet! Beautiful in its simplicity and yet still powerful...
I loved this read...

why thank you heaps n bunches for dropping by and leaving your thought print, Lady

I like that you loved the read

What a lucky lucky woman to have your affections you know i have always thought of u as one
 fine ass piece of meat lepp, since day one *winky face* w00t w00t ")
I thought this poem was absolutely beautiful Lepp just gorjus.. Aww you're so cute when your being sweet and loving!
well done my friend...
Jackie xo

why thank you, lady

I replied to your comment earlier, i have no idea where it is.

anyhow truth is it was me who lucky. every time I read this leaves me in no doubt. y'know yourself what words mean.

thank you heaps. I respect you, how you've grown here and appreciate your thoughts.

if i'm ever down the Bronx or Brooklyn I'll buy you a pint

cheers for stopping by
,  Jackie

Cheers! Happy New Year!

I think I've read this 5 times now...trying to find words that are worthy of expression.  You have penned a beauty here...a veritable knockout.  Beautiful!
Willow

Hullo

funny enough I was just thinking about this poem today. am happy to report all your words are worthy


thanks for stpping by and leaving your words

this just simply scratching an itch to draw that beauty you penned (but my vision is asian and not at all a blondie)

Hullo, lady

many apologies for missing your comment. I know of many beautiful Asians. you for one are drenched in beauty so I'm sure your vision was awe-filled

*hat tip*

i really keep reading poem after poem of yours I'm in awe, just beautiful

Hello and thank you for awe and beauty, and  dropping by and leaving your footprint.

very well written :-) i love how you compare her to nature ..... such a soft feel to this just like the softness and gentleness in nature... lovely read

Hullo, dear Lady

ahh, you're finding all the special ones and reading them as wrote. honored to have had your words grace my humbles

many thanks, miss Dafodil