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Fantasy
You surprised me
Last night
Caught me
In your fantasy
I found myself
wet and wanting
Wanton with it
So
I went to get
Some ultra slick
And
Somewhat to fill me
Assuage my hungry-ness
You waited
Patiently
So kind to me you are
(Or mayhap twas your greed to hear my out-of-control)
No matter
I indulged you
Further, I indulged me too
Further yet, you indulged me abundantly, rather fantastically, as you began to utter just what I needed to hear...
Right now
This moment
Writing this
I'm clenching
Hard
In after spasm
Remembered bliss.
There's more to this tale
There always is
Isn't there?
Mmm...
That page we'll leave unwrit
Draw the shades
Turn down the lights
And, remember, luv.
Cartier...
Published 15th Jun 2015
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Right now
This moment
Writing this
I'm clenching
Hard
In after spasm
Remembered bliss
I know this sentiment all too well . . . occupational hazard, gurlie.
this write is "good & hot!"
Green
This moment
Writing this
I'm clenching
Hard
In after spasm
Remembered bliss
I know this sentiment all too well . . . occupational hazard, gurlie.
this write is "good & hot!"
Green
15th Jun 2015 11:53pm
Green, luv ~ :-*
Thank you very much! I am quite glad you found it so. ;-*
Such occupational hazards in this field -- the compensations rather make up for the hazards... ;-D
Thank you very much! I am quite glad you found it so. ;-*
Such occupational hazards in this field -- the compensations rather make up for the hazards... ;-D
15th Jun 2015 7:34am
it's those unwritten pages that remain only to lovers, too sacred for the eyes of the leacherous public. the sincerest love story is in the untelling...
15th Jun 2015 12:37pm
16th Jun 2015 00:06am
Ahhh, JohnFeddeler, luv ~ :-*
Mayhap, mayhap not...
Only the wind knows and she's not telling... ;-*
Mayhap, mayhap not...
Only the wind knows and she's not telling... ;-*
16th Jun 2015 00:13am
Ahhh, Ahavati, luv ~ :-*
Your echo is heard, ma chérie, and duly saluted as it resounds most profoundly. :-*
Your echo is heard, ma chérie, and duly saluted as it resounds most profoundly. :-*
15th Jun 2015 8:20am
There's more to this tale
There always is
Isn't there?
Mmm...
That page we'll leave unwrit
Draw the shades
Turn down the lights
And, remember, luv.
Cartier...
WOW!! u are such a great writer i always see and feel deeply everything you write about..
you always pull me in and,
I feel it all!!..
Damn Savaja! I am all yours!!
love this lady!!!
loves you
Jackie xoxoxox
There always is
Isn't there?
Mmm...
That page we'll leave unwrit
Draw the shades
Turn down the lights
And, remember, luv.
Cartier...
WOW!! u are such a great writer i always see and feel deeply everything you write about..
you always pull me in and,
I feel it all!!..
Damn Savaja! I am all yours!!
love this lady!!!
loves you
Jackie xoxoxox
16th Jun 2015 00:48am
Ahhh, Zazzles, luv ~ :-*
Thank you very, very, very much! I am glad to reach you so deeply and intensely, luv; however, I must point out that tis you who provide much of this experience, mayhap, for you have such a wealth of feeling that resides inside you, luv. :-*
Nevertheless, thank you ever so much, luv. :-*
All mine, hmmm... How very tempting you are, lovely. ;-*
Thank you very, very, very much! I am glad to reach you so deeply and intensely, luv; however, I must point out that tis you who provide much of this experience, mayhap, for you have such a wealth of feeling that resides inside you, luv. :-*
Nevertheless, thank you ever so much, luv. :-*
All mine, hmmm... How very tempting you are, lovely. ;-*
Anonymous
15th Jun 2015 10:34am
my oh my. don't you know how to fix blue monday mornings...
"I indulged you
Further, I indulged me too
Further yet, you indulged me
abundantly, rather fantastically, as you began to utter just what I needed to hear..."
... nothing quite like a little aural sex, truly. talking dirty is an art form that should be taught imho
now i need a cigarette ;)
*
thoroughly enjoyed this, savaja xo
~ k
"I indulged you
Further, I indulged me too
Further yet, you indulged me
abundantly, rather fantastically, as you began to utter just what I needed to hear..."
... nothing quite like a little aural sex, truly. talking dirty is an art form that should be taught imho
now i need a cigarette ;)
*
thoroughly enjoyed this, savaja xo
~ k
16th Jun 2015 2:19am
Why, thank you ever so much, Katja, luv ~ :-*
You, ma chérie, are exactly correct in this: talking dirty is an art form that should be taught. ;-*
All variants, peut-être...
I am, indeed, gratified you enjoyed enough to require a cigarette, luv. ;-*
You, ma chérie, are exactly correct in this: talking dirty is an art form that should be taught. ;-*
All variants, peut-être...
I am, indeed, gratified you enjoyed enough to require a cigarette, luv. ;-*
15th Jun 2015 4:18pm
Sharing fantasies is a kick that can contain almost as much impact as the real thing. But Cartier? I'll have to scrape some cash together...
15th Jun 2015 7:52pm
16th Jun 2015 2:26am
Ahhh, crowfly, luv ~ :-*
You are absolutely correct, oh intriguing one. ;-*
Cartier. Mmm...
Fantasy is such a multifaceted thing. ;-*
You are absolutely correct, oh intriguing one. ;-*
Cartier. Mmm...
Fantasy is such a multifaceted thing. ;-*
Anonymous
15th Jun 2015 4:32pm
"There's more to this tale
There always is
Isn't there?"
Yes there is more, and now in each one of our minds, we have written the next lines. In many different ways, thank you for that!
There always is
Isn't there?"
Yes there is more, and now in each one of our minds, we have written the next lines. In many different ways, thank you for that!
16th Jun 2015 2:29am
Ahhh, slowgasm, luv ~ :-*
You are most welcome, indeed. Any time I can be of service in this respect, please do let me know... ;-*
Thank You, luv.
You are most welcome, indeed. Any time I can be of service in this respect, please do let me know... ;-*
Thank You, luv.
15th Jun 2015 5:33pm
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16th Jun 2015 2:45am
Ahhh, Erotic Ninja, luv ~ :-*
Thank you very, very much. For you to indicate eloquence is high compliment, indeed. And, smoldering as well? Mmm...
Do let me know, por favor, if I may assist you in some manner with that quenching you've got going on... ;-*
Thank you very, very much. For you to indicate eloquence is high compliment, indeed. And, smoldering as well? Mmm...
Do let me know, por favor, if I may assist you in some manner with that quenching you've got going on... ;-*
16th Jun 2015 5:22am
Yes, lady, a multifaceted, valued, splendid time coveted by many, realized by few.
Vegas, where fantasy becomes reality.
:)
Vegas, where fantasy becomes reality.
:)
16th Jun 2015 6:08am
Ahhh, VegasPoet, luv ~ :-*
Multifaceted, valued, splendid, cherished, indeed... :-*
Are you quite certain fantasies become realities there? ;-* Seems rather I heard mention of reality becoming something fantastical there...
Multifaceted, valued, splendid, cherished, indeed... :-*
Are you quite certain fantasies become realities there? ;-* Seems rather I heard mention of reality becoming something fantastical there...
16th Jun 2015 8:29am
I love the way when reading you , it give & leaves this chilled warmed space inside of delectably beautifulness. As always when you share pieces of your delicious self, love the engaging tone of it.
16th Jun 2015 12:02pm
Thank you, Noire HowlingWhelms, ever so much for your candor and this incredibly heartwarming and insightful comment. :-*
16th Jun 2015 11:25am
I liked this. You're clearly talented. What stands out to me is that I can feel the emotion behind the words. Most poets fail to do so. Nice write!
16th Jun 2015 12:05pm
Thank you very much, william swann, luv. :-*
I am wholly grateful you were able to access the emotion within. Tis important, nay, crucial I feel to this poetic process, ne c'est pas? :-*
Again, thank you, luv. :-*
I am wholly grateful you were able to access the emotion within. Tis important, nay, crucial I feel to this poetic process, ne c'est pas? :-*
Again, thank you, luv. :-*
16th Jun 2015 3:49pm
Oooooh yes! I am loving this!
The narration starts with hard directness that brings the reader right into the scene, wet directly yet tastefully with that opening " You surprised me Last night Caught me In your fantasy" also leaving the mind wondering while you play the words so beautifully setting this in another's fantasy.
When the scene is set, you thank the reader and your date for waiting for the action... oooh masterful!
The closing is memorable... just sharing enough to fetch that after smoke.... Blissful skill.
To think all this with absolute style in a tasteful way. You are truly talented.
Thanks you so very much for the read.
Al -x-
The narration starts with hard directness that brings the reader right into the scene, wet directly yet tastefully with that opening " You surprised me Last night Caught me In your fantasy" also leaving the mind wondering while you play the words so beautifully setting this in another's fantasy.
When the scene is set, you thank the reader and your date for waiting for the action... oooh masterful!
The closing is memorable... just sharing enough to fetch that after smoke.... Blissful skill.
To think all this with absolute style in a tasteful way. You are truly talented.
Thanks you so very much for the read.
Al -x-
16th Jun 2015 11:39pm
Ahhh, Al, luv ~ :-*
You are such a sweet, sweet, luv. :-*
Thank you ever so very much for your wonderful, wonderful comments. You give me such ineluctable honor with your words, luv, yet tis the muse.
You are most kind to me, luv. :-*
You are such a sweet, sweet, luv. :-*
Thank you ever so very much for your wonderful, wonderful comments. You give me such ineluctable honor with your words, luv, yet tis the muse.
You are most kind to me, luv. :-*
16th Jun 2015 8:11pm
Your words are all the Viagra men need Savaja. Sweet words as these turn men into animals. Amazingly hot write.
Ahhh, xmar82, luv ~ :-*
Think you, mayhap, I need beware of the pharmaceutical industry? ;-p
Hmmm...
You flatter me beyond belief, dear luv! ;-D
You've amused me greatly this day too. I have this image in my mind's eye now of prescriptions written with instructions of where to find my poems upon them. And, men then reading and turning ravenously upon their partners. ;-D
Admittedly, this appeals to my inner Vixen. ;-*
You give me far, far too much credit, you know, you darling luv. :-*
I thank you greatly for your comment this day. You have made me laugh heartily and caused me to feel quite the sexy thing as well. My. My.
Think you, mayhap, I need beware of the pharmaceutical industry? ;-p
Hmmm...
You flatter me beyond belief, dear luv! ;-D
You've amused me greatly this day too. I have this image in my mind's eye now of prescriptions written with instructions of where to find my poems upon them. And, men then reading and turning ravenously upon their partners. ;-D
Admittedly, this appeals to my inner Vixen. ;-*
You give me far, far too much credit, you know, you darling luv. :-*
I thank you greatly for your comment this day. You have made me laugh heartily and caused me to feel quite the sexy thing as well. My. My.
Anonymous
16th Jun 2015 9:56pm
Cartier. . .nothing comes closer to a woman's sexual soul than "Cartier". . .if I possessed something of this caliber I would surely give it to you maybe 'cause you make me feel. . .oh, I don't know?. . .xoxo, Devlin;)
17th Jun 2015 00:03am
Ahhh, DevlinDLC, luv ~ :-*
You've taken my breath away entire. How wilt thou return it unto me, O Devlin, luv?
What you possess, mon chat noir, is of far more worth than anything from Cartier could ever be. :-*
You've taken my breath away entire. How wilt thou return it unto me, O Devlin, luv?
What you possess, mon chat noir, is of far more worth than anything from Cartier could ever be. :-*
17th Jun 2015 00:33am
Ahhh, Hashman, luv ~ :-*
Thank you so. You honor me immensely. I Am hoping these are pleasurable tremblings and shakings, luv... ;-*
Thank you so. You honor me immensely. I Am hoping these are pleasurable tremblings and shakings, luv... ;-*
22nd Jun 2015 3:51am
"(Or mayhap twas your greed to hear my out-of-control)"
~this?.. jus' brot grins at your cuteness! rite
amount of sexy sass here ;)
Really enjoyed your soft sexy thoughts throughout..
love reading u as you never fail to bring my response. U're upping the temp on an already
warm mountain & cali 'proly **still thx u!
(that hawt)
be well hun
~d
~this?.. jus' brot grins at your cuteness! rite
amount of sexy sass here ;)
Really enjoyed your soft sexy thoughts throughout..
love reading u as you never fail to bring my response. U're upping the temp on an already
warm mountain & cali 'proly **still thx u!
(that hawt)
be well hun
~d
22nd Jun 2015 4:16am
Ahhh, darksighs, luv ~ :-*
Sexy sass, eh? ;-p Mayhap, luv. Mayhap... ;-* (je t'adore) And, I rather adore you think my sassiness cute. :-*
And, you know, if you're going to be hot regardless, you may as well make it worthwhile, ne c'est pas? ;-*
Now, if only I were there...
Sexy sass, eh? ;-p Mayhap, luv. Mayhap... ;-* (je t'adore) And, I rather adore you think my sassiness cute. :-*
And, you know, if you're going to be hot regardless, you may as well make it worthwhile, ne c'est pas? ;-*
Now, if only I were there...
