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A sanctuary
[i]Washed over the waters of wandering.
One cloud Just drifting,
breaks witness
to an empty chair.
West side and down
rolling gone,
from piloted sky,
Crosses over to seated union.
Digs the earth,
this waft of honeysuckle thro
mixed in timber clove.
Contours of enclaves enrapt and clasp.
Siding with shadow
or glow.
A proper feature man and beast plunder.
Rays feign praise to hidden meadows.
Those seen
glistening
Southside,
tones of unlit nightcap
Rest assured
yawns
awake eyes,
This baby Noon.
Another mask cradled by a mother's chest.
Slips foray.
Without poise,
Without dignity,
Chattering consistently.
Instantly
Tumbles aground.
Each bird
Flouting
beck and draw
answering away
emits
ahhhhh
While roosting
under this loft,
echoes
Secret separation,
Lost from a world gone man
A cloud drifts
Fogging over
tracts of land.
Finally,
rested,embraced
sheltered by fortitude.
/i]
One cloud Just drifting,
breaks witness
to an empty chair.
West side and down
rolling gone,
from piloted sky,
Crosses over to seated union.
Digs the earth,
this waft of honeysuckle thro
mixed in timber clove.
Contours of enclaves enrapt and clasp.
Siding with shadow
or glow.
A proper feature man and beast plunder.
Rays feign praise to hidden meadows.
Those seen
glistening
Southside,
tones of unlit nightcap
Rest assured
yawns
awake eyes,
This baby Noon.
Another mask cradled by a mother's chest.
Slips foray.
Without poise,
Without dignity,
Chattering consistently.
Instantly
Tumbles aground.
Each bird
Flouting
beck and draw
answering away
emits
ahhhhh
While roosting
under this loft,
echoes
Secret separation,
Lost from a world gone man
A cloud drifts
Fogging over
tracts of land.
Finally,
rested,embraced
sheltered by fortitude.
/i]
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Re: A sanctuary
12th Jun 2015 6:19am
Very mesmerizing. I actually lost myself in there for a moment. Excellent write, my friend. It's been awhile, I hope all is well with you and yours.
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re: Re: A sanctuary
15th Jun 2015 9:57pm
Thanks a lot good Sir-good to see you!!!
Hoping to be around more soon!!!
Hoping to be around more soon!!!
Re: A sanctuary
12th Jun 2015 6:25am
this is pristine, the sanctuary through your dew-fresh words. good to c u bk, SoulPoet.
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re: Re: A sanctuary
15th Jun 2015 10:01pm
Re: A sanctuary
Anonymous
12th Jun 2015 9:33am
great to read your work again.
lovely and serene feeling with hints at darkness. much enjoyed, soula
peace
lovely and serene feeling with hints at darkness. much enjoyed, soula
peace
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re: Re: A sanctuary
15th Jun 2015 10:06pm
Re: A sanctuary
12th Jun 2015 11:22pm
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15th Jun 2015 10:11pm
Speaking of Hellions- Appreciate you looking out.....I know I've been too long on walkabout- I hope to stop in regularly once again....I miss You guys
Re: A sanctuary
Soul, I totally dig your effortless poetic style. Captivating opening stanzas. Enjoyed the read, great to see you're back.
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re: Re: A sanctuary
15th Jun 2015 10:14pm
Your a good man- thank ya for the kindness!!!
I shall catch ya round town soon.
I shall catch ya round town soon.
Re: A sanctuary
14th Jun 2015 5:04pm
re: Re: A sanctuary
15th Jun 2015 10:19pm
And there She is- Thank You mucho much!!!
I haven't seen Noon since that night...keeping elusive hrs.
I haven't seen Noon since that night...keeping elusive hrs.
Re: A sanctuary
20th Jun 2015 2:08am
'a world gone man' causes all of nature to shudder. stunningly conceived & written...
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21st Jun 2015 1:45am
Re: A sanctuary
21st Jun 2015 4:33am
flashes of Henry David Thoreau and Rachel Carson going though my head and remind me that when it comes to reading significant works about the environment I am woefully behind!
"Secret separation,
Lost from a world gone man", has to be amongst the most riveting things you have penned!
"Secret separation,
Lost from a world gone man", has to be amongst the most riveting things you have penned!
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re: Re: A sanctuary
25th Jun 2015 11:52am
Too kind as Always Jazz!!!
You know Ted...like the conversation about spotlights, I can take society much these days- give me my woods and the swell of nature - anytime!!!
You know Ted...like the conversation about spotlights, I can take society much these days- give me my woods and the swell of nature - anytime!!!
Re: A sanctuary
Your pen & content of warm peaceful wafts are astounding to the senses misterz!
"Digs the earth,
this waft of honeysuckle thro
mixed in timber clove.
Contours of enclaves enrapt and clasp.
Siding with shadow
or glow.
A proper feature man and beast plunder"
~this sky rumble that u build is brilliant!
"Rays feign praise to hidden meadows"
great word flavor!
be welz!
~d
"Digs the earth,
this waft of honeysuckle thro
mixed in timber clove.
Contours of enclaves enrapt and clasp.
Siding with shadow
or glow.
A proper feature man and beast plunder"
~this sky rumble that u build is brilliant!
"Rays feign praise to hidden meadows"
great word flavor!
be welz!
~d
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re: Re: A sanctuary
25th Jun 2015 11:54am
Thank You kindly for the good words DS!!!
I appreciate you stopping by my paltry Writes!!!
I appreciate you stopping by my paltry Writes!!!
Re: A sanctuary
Anonymous
4th Jul 2015 1:19am
Great observational piece Soul, sometimes we need to take time and just enjoy nature and all around us in silence without all the nuisance, and i'd like to equally welcome you back also.
Good to read you again and your eloquent words.
Good to read you again and your eloquent words.
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re: Re: A sanctuary
4th Jul 2015 2:01am
Always the need to be away and amongst nature.
I Greatly appreciate you Vee- your words and support Always mean much!!!
I Greatly appreciate you Vee- your words and support Always mean much!!!
Re. A sanctuary
5th Aug 2015 00:28am
This piece of extraodinare brought unto my mind a goody bag of images, for I am please & I'm debted because its what I love when exploring others deepl wells.
Wow, must sit again to read, but will be in silence.
Wow, must sit again to read, but will be in silence.
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Re: Re. A sanctuary
5th Aug 2015 1:03am
Thank You for your kindness HW!!!
Was but a spurred Write....sometimes they work, sometimes not :)
Glad that one caught you- twas a relaxing day.
Was but a spurred Write....sometimes they work, sometimes not :)
Glad that one caught you- twas a relaxing day.