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Breath fer Me
The months of Moon
~beckon soft~
fall slow
to lips
hushed
with re'member.
Oh~ crimson touch
on parched dream-
fade gentle,
that I might taste
a tear
in falling~
and sip the wonder
of solitude.
Challenge my brazen-
in purple'd hues
of swirling, pending
morning dew..
And breathe life
(so sweet)
into lungs of need.
Wrap me slow
in shimmer glow
of silent, creeping silver.
~encompass me~
as I bathe
in eternity..
of night whispers
on my prowl.
Published 9th Jun 2015
| Edited 20th Jul 2015
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Anonymous
9th Jun 2015 10:52am
my second musings on dacryomancy this week, me thinks there's something in the air or the tears begging to be lapped from their coursing...
"on parched dream-
fade gentle,
that I might taste
a tear
in falling~
and sip the wonder
of solitude."
... oh the bitter-sweet stories they must tell on the tongue that dares
*
lovely ink, darling sighs xo
"on parched dream-
fade gentle,
that I might taste
a tear
in falling~
and sip the wonder
of solitude."
... oh the bitter-sweet stories they must tell on the tongue that dares
*
lovely ink, darling sighs xo
9th Jun 2015 7:46pm
Dacryomancy..luvvv that babes!
Reminds of John Dowlin's sighs on tear in his
poem of that title.
Ancient Babylon had festivals fer it then & I'd drag you by t'hand...if we cud manage 1500's.
(mite hava spell fer?..hmmm..diggin now.)
sweet mushings & thx darlin'
~d
Reminds of John Dowlin's sighs on tear in his
poem of that title.
Ancient Babylon had festivals fer it then & I'd drag you by t'hand...if we cud manage 1500's.
(mite hava spell fer?..hmmm..diggin now.)
sweet mushings & thx darlin'
~d
9th Jun 2015 11:46am
Man Alive; do love yer writin darlin, it always reads out as have always talked in my head... you pull me in here in your write, as a good writer can do... "Wrapp me slow in shimmer glow of silent, creeping, silver, Man those are good lines right thurr hehehe... really dig this write, have to add to favorites.. Take good care: wolf
9th Jun 2015 7:57pm
Just adore you poppin' (by)... ;)
We both know how emotion swacks us good & my muse
gott solid hits in last nite via-pour.
So sweet, ty-ty fer the add, if your hearin' it in your head I sure do hope I have had coffee first
aaand curbed my cunty moods. ha!
Be well m'dear!
~d
We both know how emotion swacks us good & my muse
gott solid hits in last nite via-pour.
So sweet, ty-ty fer the add, if your hearin' it in your head I sure do hope I have had coffee first
aaand curbed my cunty moods. ha!
Be well m'dear!
~d
9th Jun 2015 12:17pm
9th Jun 2015 7:51pm
your lord, my flow...egads! lmsao
Always got sweet thanx fer you duv..;)
ty-ty fer stoppin' in (*curtsy)
page warmin'.. you are.
mwahs
~d
Always got sweet thanx fer you duv..;)
ty-ty fer stoppin' in (*curtsy)
page warmin'.. you are.
mwahs
~d
9th Jun 2015 1:37pm
9th Jun 2015 8:58pm
Very much luv your presence on my page, sweet lady!
Solitude *is that vast-beautiful you speak of.
great line too! Neeed that fer breathin' out the woes.
ty-ty's
~d
Solitude *is that vast-beautiful you speak of.
great line too! Neeed that fer breathin' out the woes.
ty-ty's
~d
9th Jun 2015 8:36pm
9th Jun 2015 9:02pm
You flatter, to be sure, darlin'..
Thanx en-plenty fer gracing my cascade!
warmest allz ;)
~d
Thanx en-plenty fer gracing my cascade!
warmest allz ;)
~d
10th Jun 2015 3:13am
now here is romance that the Romantics were named for.
fair delyte, gental kiss, soft breez blow upon us in a gard'n that no god ev'r made...
fair delyte, gental kiss, soft breez blow upon us in a gard'n that no god ev'r made...
10th Jun 2015 5:09am
You are Romance incarnate, sweet SirJ!
Very much obliged for the read m'dear ;)
warm wishes
~d
Very much obliged for the read m'dear ;)
warm wishes
~d
